JAbs vs Chewbakka

[JAbs]

House rules dawg
drop within a hour after check in

(this is not my check in)

[Mr. Key]

Iiiight im droppin 10, match me, this is my check in

[JAbs]

Here is my check in

Droppin in a few

[Mr. Key]

The Retard index
*hook=type of punch, part in a song
*genes/jeans, lines=clothing lines
*Hes from "The Ring" detroit

I press tab thru ur assumptions, cause ur still jus a rook
How u ‘jab wit no punches?’ U could get sonned by a ‘hook’
Peeps shook to battle me, I make call outs n no one will say shit
They want me to ‘hit the road’, so ill throw ‘jabs on the pavement’
Writers block for u is hereditary that’s y ya raps is fake
Wackness is jus in ur ‘jeans’,so my ‘lines’ will make u ‘levi-tate’
Everything u spit is weak, Id win even if I no-show fo this
Dog, ull never spit on ‘tracks’, unless labels have ‘loco-motives’
Heres the facts, the bars I bring, well easily top this cat
So I’ll throw Jabs around ‘The Ring’ like it’s a boxing match

[Mr. Key]

drop within a hour after check in

Its been more than an hour since ur check in u set the time limit, and i dont like feeders , not sayin u will, it jus tends to happen when i drop first, Unnecessary up #1

[JAbs]

Reputations, I stripped-so-many-fully... sick and sent-to-the-clinic-cruely
You good... but don't let 'ego' push you like 'schitzophrenic bully'
And when its done... when you see in a forum you'll be scared and faceless
And told me to match with him... to be compared to greatness
In the rare cases... he's an addition to the bodies that I store for lunches
And ya 'arms' is 'weak'... you need 'splints' to 'support' ya 'punches'
Just in case you want 'beef'... you can 'engulf' these bars whore
I'm destined to be 'famous'... even 'Chewbakka' couldn't put up a "Star War"
Just got scarred more... an became shooken-like-the-most
And thanks for the ass in ya avy... something worth looking-at-when-you-post

[JAbs]

My fault man I was bull shittin watchin' Dave Chapelle and shit

My bad

[JAbs]

Reputations, I stripped-so-many-fully... sick and sent-to-the-clinic-cruely
You good... but don't let ya 'ego' push you like a 'schitzophrenic bully'
And when its done... when you see me in a forum you'll be scared and faceless
And told me to match with him... to be compared to greatness
In the rare cases... he's an addition to the bodies that I store for lunches
And ya 'arms' is 'weak'... you need 'splints' to 'support' ya 'punches'
Just in case you want 'beef'... you can 'engulf' these bars whore
I'm destined to be 'FAMOUS'... even 'Chewbakka' couldn't put up a "STAR War"
Just got scarred more... an became shooken-like-the-most
And thanks for the ass in ya avy... something worth looking-at-when-you-post

Had to post it again because I had too many mistakes. My fault again.

[JAbs]

Uppin 4 votes man

[Amp]

This was a good battle. Punches and personals were good from both, and both had a good flow and a readable structure. The things that each member excelled in the other didn't have much to show for. JAbs had some multies, while Chewy didn't have any, but Chewy had some funny ass wordplay and JAbs didn't really have anything. The thing that determined the battle for me was Chewy's funny wordplay because it added an extra edge to his verse giving him the slightly better verse.

Really good battle.

Quotables:

Chewbakka:
I press tab thru ur assumptions, cause ur still jus a rook
How u ‘jab wit no punches?’ U could get sonned by a ‘hook’
Nice.

Everything u spit is weak, Id win even if I no-show fo this
Dog, ull never spit on ‘tracks’, unless labels have ‘loco-motives’
It didn't even have great flow, but that second line was nice.

JAbs:

Just in case you want 'beef'... you can 'engulf' these bars whore
I'm destined to be 'FAMOUS'... even 'Chewbakka' couldn't put up a "STAR War"
First line didn't make sense, but the second one wasn't bad.

ust got scarred more... an became shooken-like-the-most
And thanks for the ass in ya avy... something worth looking-at-when-you-post
Not bad, but again, the first line didn't make too much sense.

Good battle.

Keep elevating.

[Tim]

this was yes a very one sided battle here chewbakka took this battle on all levels #1 he had nice concepts that actually had me laughing a little # Jab came forced to the max with multies people think multies win battles but really they dont at all. you came played also with weak punches awhile the other dude had punches and personals very onesided indeed dont hate just stating the truth good battle

[MC_Quicksand]

Chewbakka: good, consistent flow throughout, really liked They want me to ‘hit the road’, so ill throw ‘jabs on the pavement' - THAT's a punch! And So I’ll throw Jabs around ‘The Ring’ like it’s a boxing match. Personals win battles, that's how I see it...good effort!

JAbs: Takin' yo time is never good, esp. when you set the rules! Means you gotta come back twice as hard - and you didn't. Lines like I'm destined to be 'famous'... even 'Chewbakka' couldn't put up a "Star War are great, but on they own, it's not enough. You had good flow, just lacked content. Outclassed, straight up...

VOTE: Chewbakka

Check sig...return favour (will poll once I reach 100 posts)

[JAbs]

No prob, just got some shit I need to work on.

Uppin

Good drop Chewbakka

[Mr. Key]

Thanks, yea u too, uppin this shit, lets get some votes in here people, all votes will be returned by the both of us. 1

[Abi]

i'd have to vote chewbakka just cuz he had something that was a little better than jabs... both good verses and good battle but just a little more on chewbakkas side... i'd vote but can't vote for me tho if u can