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Thread: Keystyle (timed to 13mins)

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    Boy Nova
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    Keystyle (timed to 13mins)

    OK... keystyle... boy nova... holla
    Yo, The cannons are loaded and the guns are out
    Ya crew feels tilted all around are looks of doubt
    Could this be, ly-ric-ly, Nova pilin the pressure oh silly me
    Un like the rest who tried and failed
    This guys got the knife to tear ya sail
    No wait its to late to bail
    We off and runnin bitch yo the cheques in the mail
    Oh shit coulda finished on that
    Got too much to say bout those blemished rats
    Dont like gangster shit on this site?
    Not feelin the streets and what we write?
    This is life, livin out all this strife
    Without the experience man what can we write
    and ya know im right
    Word perfect, what a sight his shit elevates to the top just like a kite
    But oh look, wait, shit what was that
    I think its time for the lightning strike, splat
    the sound after ya got a gun in ya face
    Brain on the wall all mushed up like cheap fish paste
    Seriously though ya boy is settin the pace
    This aint a battle its endorement bitch this aint no race
    Ghost writers shit i do mine alone
    When i go i go i just get in the zone
    Lock on my targets i can lay in wait
    Unlike you bent fagots my bullets fly straight
    I hit and you run ya gotta learn this son
    Dissin you punks is just so much fun
    I do what say, i threat i do
    My mind spins loaded up wit injected jet fuel
    I never rest fool i wanna be the best
    Come at me yo be my guest
    Ill knock ya down turn all the smiles ta frowns
    I go out to punish you clowns
    Thought you were untouchables ya pedastool could never get rocked
    I got my AK-47 now, locked cocked and im ready to rock
    Its on like donkey kong now biatch im ready to pop
    hit n run consider yaselves knocked
    Holla back


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=159218

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=159290

  2. #2
    Fel#ny
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    good drop boy... nice flow, tight rhymes, and good structure... keep reppin boy
    PEACE

  3. #3
    Boy Nova
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    uppin for feedback.....................................

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    Nice Verse Man...Nice Structure...Keep DOing This..

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    The Root
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    i think it has no meanin, shitty lyrics..and just shows how much your mind needs to grow..unless your stuck on that braggadocious type shit...which is coo if you are good at it but in my opinion you need to elevate man...but hey im just a random guy that doesnt post anything..what do i know?

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    Mm...Root...U Didn't Post Any Lyrics Or Verses/Battles....I Think He Got More Skillz Then U....No H8....Just Saying What I Think...

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    The Root
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    nah thats totally understandable..its all good..i have posted some poetic shit in the poetry forum though..feel free to check it, but i doubt you would be into it..ill post sommin up in a min..hold up...i gotta dig it up...

    oh and another thing..i do audio..i just like postin my lyrics up to have cats peep em since i cant upload my actual songs at the moment

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    Aight...I Will Check Them..Send Your Soundclick..So I Can Check Your Audio's...

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    The Root
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    soundclick aint up yet..workin on the mixtape..feel me? gonna post it all at once...

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    Aight...I'm Gonna Start Audio Soon...First I Gotta Work Up Ma Skillz A Bit For Audio..

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    The Root
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    it takes time definitly...the only way to get better is to keep at it, keep writing , and keep evolving your style to fit yourself..

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    Boy Nova
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    Yo my thread aint a chatroom?! reviews ad feedback ta, thanx for the feedback saiyan

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    Aigth..No Problem....SOrry For Ruining The Thread!!!...

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    Boy Nova
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    uppin, holla at ya boy................................

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