Yeah.......it was good, I liked it kinda like Pac's Bonnie and Clyde, the lyrics was straight, alright chorus......nice job............
Yeah.......it was good, I liked it kinda like Pac's Bonnie and Clyde, the lyrics was straight, alright chorus......nice job............
man it was good i really like it it was hot as hell wasnt as good as jay-z's but it was good it really was.
9/10
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umm.........sorry but i am not feeling this piece. it rushes through with a lot of emtion but no solid story line. you don't build up the events and the rhyming is very simplistic. i think you can do better then this. keep writting.
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some parts was okay but then some parts was like eh the 1st and 3rd verses were your best and the 2nd one can be removed totally but this kinda came off as one of dem songs for the ladies and thats all good because that's who buyin records but the concept is coo so i say it was alright just clean it up and stick to the script cause u drifted a lil but keep writin
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Yo Nova,
That Shit Was Crunk as fuck.
I like ya vocab.
I like ya Structure Too.
Holla Ya Boy,
PBK
yo i liked this thread, i agree with impersonal it was different, the structure was good, the vocab was good, the story was alright, but anyway keep on postin wanna see more posts from you.....return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89#post1872489
9.8/10
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The story and theme of it was alright, but for what it is it was tight. The thing is that this topic is old and has been used a lot. All in all I enjoyed the sentimentality of it, but you still kept that ruggid edge to it... sweet. Out of a ranking of 10, I'd give a 7 half. It also seems like you didn't spend much time on it because I feel you can do better... From here on out you'll get better and better. Deuce up... >>>Youth<<<
yea was good to see someone post sumthin with a structure..
fed up of seeing people writing with no storyline n no emotion
so nice to see a change here
keep it cumin
Yea i liked it too, it read pretty smooth...
Nice feeling throughout this peice, and it kept me intrested... good job.
Thx for feedback on my peice as well Nova.
yo this was an alright drop, yo the title is alittle used but thats alright the title dont mean anything unless the text is good and you proved your text was pretty hot, flow was good, structure was decent.....keep postin peace out return the favor.......check out GC Mixtape Volume 1
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