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    The Simpsons

    IN THIS VERSE I FLOW ABOUT THE CARTOON SIMPSONS,I DID IT TO MAKE EMCEES LAUGH AND I THOUGHT IT WAS ORIGINAL,ENJOY DIS SHIT.

    yo welcome to springfield\
    where nobody stops,nobody yields\
    where Bart keeps it real\ bails off his skateboard and breaks a bone\
    and Lisa still rips on da saxophone\
    springfield, a wonderful place where alcholics like Homer\
    never stay sober\
    give him a beer coz he never sticks to soda\
    unless you mix alchol with coca-cola\
    but Homer never cheats on his long haired spouse\
    since Marge"s always at home cleaning da house\
    a place where Mr Burns will never be cashless\
    thats why he"s always firing there asses\
    and his assistant, is always fixing his glasses\
    where da powerplant is always in a profile\
    coz we ripping it up, simpson style\
    the only cartoon in your life thats actually worthwhile\
    coz bart"s still around da town,skating\
    and never lets down when it comes to da rating\
    i say relax dont worry when duff man is near\
    coz he"s always advertising for duff beer\
    and nobody bothers him coz he has no fear\
    come with me to springfield,so lets hit da road\
    and never miss a single episode\
    simpsons its da greatest show\

    BY LIVINGFORCE A.K.A PHOECUS

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks

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    You're right... It made me laugh... How anyone can possibly make something up about The Simpsons is beyond me. I wouldn't have even given it a thought.

    Got anymore funny ones?

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    i liked dat junt, it was creative, its good to see folk wit a sense of humor, good writin pimp

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    thanx yo I"ll post another one soon!!i wont quit till i make it to da hall of fame

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    i dunno, the subject matter was original but you basically stated the fact rather than take a more introspective look at the show. i'll give you props for originality and solid enough rhymes. you should up your vocab a little though.

    keep posting.

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    ahight cool,but it was a freestyle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    the simpsons

    hey man i liked this peice alot, especially because it consist of my 2 fav things, rapin' and the simpsons.... stay up and bring forth more comedy bars, ~1~

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    lol, what the hell?

    Yeah it was pretty original and yeah it did make me laugh. It wasnt bad for a freestyle but flow fell off in places and vocab wasnt the strongest. Sort those two things out and you'll be a pretty decent mc

    pz

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    livingforce
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    yea i agree my flow didnt hit da shit properly!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    it sucked...nah man...just didnt like the topic....but it did sound like a freestyle..elevate

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    it was a freestyle lol .. i liked it thhought it was tight sum ov tha vocab was off but it was good lol i lv tha simpsons yerp was koo and funny lol

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    Was an alright piece. Comical, but didn't make me laugh...

    Rhyme scheme was alright, needed to incorporate some more vocab to make it better.

    Concept was alright Simpsons is a great programme. could have gone into more depth about it...

    Alright post, but I think you need to elevate a lot to get into the HoF

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    hmmmm did you happen to get that topic from ss.... the one i suggested... its good to see it used even if it wasent from me... nice take on it... could use some work on structure... and the flow was a bit choppy at times... also could add some better vocab... but nice man unique

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    ahight cool thanx for da advice.peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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