User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: Giving is the most important thing!

  1. #1

    Giving is the most important thing!

    The world needs aid and all around us there is people being hurt by some plague
    And all sientists descripts of human behavior to be vague, dull, and unclear
    So now i´m going to preach for you and for the youth
    That all i´m writtend down now is the hard cold truth
    I´m starting to get sick of all the distraughting with all the dissing
    What is it that some people is missing, can´t yall do some reminisching
    It´s not right to be dissing and fighting around the world right this moment
    When there are people around the world dying right this moment
    Almost everything need a dramatic change, so lets all togheter start to pray
    For a better world today, for a better USA and for a better life everyday

    Start a better life by intercepting my words and stop weepping, sleeping and watching the birds-Start to give and forgive So You can let more people live-Sharing in life is the best gift of all-So start to spread the word from your shopping mall to the president hall-And I´m going to finish this of by taking a great quote from a even greater King:
    That giving is the most important thing



    Jesus Walks!


    / Big Fax



    Check this out!
    1.
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158264
    2.
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158131
    Last edited by Bigfax; December 7th, 2004 at 11:17 AM Reason: I needed to put in som links!

  2. #2
    Anyone feel like giving me critique?
    What did you think of it and the links?
    Please send back.

    Jesus Walks

  3. #3
    Newbie fu2re troublez's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    da bronx
    Age
    39
    Posts
    37

    giving is the most important thing

    honestly man i wasnt feeling this peice, but im only one person, stay up, be easy, and keep writing ~1~

Similar Threads

  1. Giving up
    By p O e T i Q u E in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: April 17th, 2008, 08:20 PM
  2. Giving My Name Up
    By Smokey. in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: April 1st, 2006, 10:25 PM
  3. Giving in, giving up, turning over...
    By Born To Kill in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: July 8th, 2004, 08:53 PM
  4. Giving Up You..................
    By AusRotten in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: October 31st, 2003, 04:20 AM
  5. Giving Up......
    By D GreE in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: June 14th, 2003, 06:16 AM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •