quick freestyle

[Jay Mel]

niggaz ask 2 many questions/ about my life/ i live by my fists/ i don't need a gun or knife/ i'm goin out wit slugz/ king larry got me plugged/ 2 da game/ if u ain't up on dis/den u is lame/ don't ask who i'm rollin wit/ i'm on some emortal shit/ if i swing first/ everybody gettin hit/ i could shoot u wit wordz/ but i don't really need a bullet/ i got 12 gage mind/ so don't make me pull it

[Jay Mel]

don't ask 2 many questions either u like it or not

oh this song was not written by pied piper

it was written by lil b ceo of hoodboy ENT.

[Jay Mel]

fuck all ya'll

[$LilPmp$]

im beggin u for ur own sake dont hit me wit that rake/cuz my boys will be on u like fat kid on cake/if i was u id run/cuz if u dont ill just bust out my 9/and shoot u in the behine

[$LilPmp$]

im gonna make ur girl mine/ dam dat ho is fine/she said i ant like other white boys and there clvin clein

[$LilPmp$]

was dat good if not just a newbie

[Jay Mel]

now lilpimps u a bitch u can suck my dick i have yo ass dead in da grass by da stick dat i beat u 2 death wit i don't know why u talkin shit but u will get hit fuckin wit me lil b from chi-go not new york city y pick me out of all tha people in da back i'll eatb yo ass like a christmas snack bitch

[Omniscient]

A yo i dont know what was happenin here but i thought u needed more vocab in this piece...maybe its just because your a chick but i know u could do betta if u use betta vocab...keep it up tho baby...holla back

DaYoungsta boy!!!

[Abi]

Not bad i liked it. it rhymed and it was nice

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