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take this as my check in
livingforce
tweetburd
10+ lines
30 mins from check in
take this as my check in
ahight cool drop your shit,you go first lets battle.
Living force I can’t believe that you’re such a ‘tard/
You take Viagra eyedrops to make you look hard/
Gees man you so big that when you enter a room/
It don’t matter where I go I’m next to you/
Now you need to choose how to play this game with no rules/
When all I know is that you’re gonna lose/
When I smack you u gonna go up high in the sky/
Many you gonna be flying up there/
When you see me about you so god damn scared/
That your follicles fail and you lose all you hair/
So now I’ve left you standing tall/
And not to mention completely bald/
Your fuckin friends won’t wanna know you at all/
If you fall on you face and lose this brawl/
man your styles dieng like leaves in autumn\
with rhymes like that i"d give you up for abortion\
im standing tall coz im da rock when it comes to my flow\
and you about ta get da peoples elbow\
i just pull out my dick and you get ready to blow\
yo dog i wont lose\ i"ll have you quit rap and start singing the blues\
one wrong move and i could rip out your spleen\
i"ll have you in londen licking da pussy of da queen\
you from black pool then you must be fulla marsh\ you suck so much dick you think sperm is a mouthwash\
after this battle you"ll be suffocating like fish outta water\
in the future you"ll be seeing me fucking your daughter\
man im way too hot\
dont be mad coz i got more friends than you"ve got\
right then everybody peeps you heard both sides of it drop in with your votes!!!!!!!!!!!
yo people plz vote this battlewe need them urgently
hey yo plz vote this shit plz people.....................
Vote Plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
please can some people at least vote on this when i have enough posts i'll return the favour as you know it's f*****g annoying when you post a battle use your battle credits and then people don't vote come on please vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Alright........u both need mad elevation.......but lemme give both some pointers:
Tweet, u hav elevated since i batled u but u need to up the vocab and get more creative, the fat joke u pulled........PLAYED........and u shouldnt use it. Throw in some multis and use better personals.....instead of ur friends wont wanna know u at all after u fall on ur face in this brawl....There are know if's about that they won't WHEN......other than that throw more punches.....cuz the ones u did throw were weak as hell......no offense i dont throw em that great.......but u should thrw em way harder than that......Peaccezy
LF, u had 1 and i mean ONE good punch in here......the "u suck so muh dick u think sperm is mouthwash".....very good creativity at it's best......but that was it....up ur vocab and get more creative punches......throw some personals and multis in tehre to hype the readers...also u could do better wit the punches uz 1 ain't gonna wn a battle ulness the guy ur facin don't throw any at all....and rhyme better cuz ur first 2 ines didn't rhyme at all....
And to both of u.....elevate and work on ur punches.....thin humour and make em funny........
But after reviewing both verses....my vote=tweet for havin a better verse and more punches although LF had the best pucnh of the battle....
Battles:
Come and get it.
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anyone else gonna vote on this battle? Please peeps!!!!!
any more votes or comments to come peeps??????????
i cant vote till i get 100 posts...but i vote lf on because it had maturity almost..under it....tweet since the last time i seen u flow....uve gottenb better...so i give u daps...but wen i sed that lf's sounded mature...its becuase ur talkin bout fat jokes and baldness and other stuff thas almost a CAT IN THE HAT on crack version...no offence of course.....but nice....3 to both...(pound)
Crazy Battle
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Living force I can’t believe that you’re such a ‘tard/
You take Viagra eyedrops to make you look hard/
Gees man you so big that when you enter a room/
It don’t matter where I go I’m next to you/
Now you need to choose how to play this game with no rules/
When all I know is that you’re gonna lose/
When I smack you u gonna go up high in the sky/
Many you gonna be flying up there/
When you see me about you so god damn scared/
That your follicles fail and you lose all you hair/
So now I’ve left you standing tall/
And not to mention completely bald/
Your fuckin friends won’t wanna know you at all/
If you fall on you face and lose this brawl/
Tweetburd: Wack, but the flow was aiight. Could've polished it up a little.
man your styles dieng like leaves in autumn\
with rhymes like that i"d give you up for abortion\
im standing tall coz im da rock when it comes to my flow\
and you about ta get da peoples elbow\
i just pull out my dick and you get ready to blow\
yo dog i wont lose\ i"ll have you quit rap and start singing the blues\
one wrong move and i could rip out your spleen\
i"ll have you in londen licking da pussy of da queen\
you from black pool then you must be fulla marsh\ you suck so much dick you think sperm is a mouthwash\
after this battle you"ll be suffocating like fish outta water\
in the future you"ll be seeing me fucking your daughter\
man im way too hot\
dont be mad coz i got more friends than you"ve got\
livingforce: Shit was just wack, I mean how do some of ya'll find RB.
The flow was off too.
Tweetburd:has my vote
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