Legends Material.

[Glory]

Sick and Twisted

Got evil through my soul-jealous and hatin
It's a hell of a statement--but i'd sell it to Satan
End up-handcuffed in a cell in his basement
Praying to Jesus when I fell to the pavement
I ain't got religion or a pot to piss in
I think the worst it happens-the plot just thickens
The clock is tickin-I don't twist words
I'll leave ya throat slit in 6 3rds--like Nick Berg
I could flip burgs-make the cash I like
But i'd rather write-make fun of death-and laugh at life
Parasites'll take what I stack for spite
Cuz I get G's when I flip P's like Vana White
Today wuz a good day-I drove past ya wife
Got her number-and i'ma get the ass tonight
I'll slash ya twice-ain't showing remorse
I'll just catch ya body like your throwin a corpse


It's My Turn!!-I Wuz Given The Power
And I'd Rather Die Fightin Than Live As A Coward
If I Do What I Feel-And Say What I Want
Atleast You'll Know It's Me When Your Playin My Songs


Excuse me miss-look how crazy ya drivin em
Got 99 problems-my bitch is 85 of em
I've changed-at war with my mind frame
Schemin to even the score like tie games
I've gained loss-when pain's the main cost
Me and my alter ego don't share the same thoughts
My brains warped-I don't buy what stars sell me
But i'll double team a troubled team wit R. Kelly
Begin some rumors that offend consumers
I'm sadistic-wit a twisted sense of humor
I wanna body 8 jakes wit a straight face
And leave em leakin like Info bout Kobe's rape case
I love to gamble-but I'm the same soldier
That won't bet the under-cuz i'm bout to take over
There'll never be no second guessin me chump
Cuz i'll murder you-if you ever question me once


It's My Turn!! I Wuz Given The Power
And I'd Rather Die Fightin Than Live As A Coward
If I Do What I Feel And Say What I Want
Atleast You'll Know It's Me When Your Playin My Song



Tortured genius-more respect-less connected
The aborted fetus-immortal tech ressurected
The filthiest affiliate-but they'll feel me if
I impale em on the coat hanger they killed me wit
I'd do an Eye for an Eye-but I don't respect ya
So I used an Aids needle to stab both ya retinas
Student to teacher-killed my own professor
He ain't understand-I wuz too old to lecture
I paperchase and hustle-but hate to scuffle
When we go hand to hand I always break ya knuckles
I bless the mic-that's my only offer
You couldn't bless shit wit a toilet fulla holy water
I'll use brute force to introduce two forts
Fornicate wit ya mind-FUCK WHAT YOU THOUGHT
Lifes too short-so I'm not concerned
I'll show you how to do this-just watch and learn

[Cinquix Incision]

it was ok, the structure was there aND so was the vocab....it was ok

[Glory]

i need betta judges.

nah, jes messin.

uppin.

i'll drop links soon.

[High Class]

This was average, not legends material... check in my sig, "The Picture"...
they didnt even except that, its not easy shit hommie..
g/l on it though

[Born To Kill]

Well...

This sure as fuck ain't Legendary...

Not near.

But you did have some real nice lines, considering this was all self-prop.

Parasites'll take what I stack for spite
Cuz I get G's when I flip P's like Vanna White

Nice multi's and meta...(The Wheel = old school), I dig.

Excuse me miss-look how crazy ya drivin em
Got 99 problems-my bitch is 85 of em
I've changed-at war with my mind frame
Schemin to even the score like tie games

Again good use of old school...you know that's a remake, right? Cuz, Ice-T dropped 99 problems 15 years ago...anyone who thinks Jay did it first...pffft! And then that tie game shit, real simple, but nice shit.

I wanna body 8 jakes wit a straight face
And leave em leakin like Info bout Kobe's rape case

Funny one here, if my wife read it, she'd be hella pissed, she hates that info leaked in that case! Thinks that's why a rapist went free.

I bless the mic-that's my only offer
You couldn't bless shit wit a toilet fulla holy water

Nasty, but real tight wordplay...again, real simple, but it's the simpleness that makes it dope...shit's like, why hasn't someone else done this before?

Nice shit, Ace.

But not Legendary

Peace

[Glory]

yea i know its not legendary. lol. i jes needed some feedback and so i used an interesting way to catch peoples attention, either way they'd think im jes a noob. so yea...

thanks for the feed.

i'll hit ur pieces up for sure.

peACE

[Chrit.]

If you ever title a piece like this again I will promptly delete your next 5 pieces

[Sureal]

legends? where, hall of shame?

[Born To Kill]

If you ever title a piece like this again I will promptly delete your next 5 pieces

Sorry, Ace...

But THAT'S funny shit right there!

[Bounce]

Vote good rap, I actually liked this, some decent old school twist's in there as Born has mentioned. I actually incorperate old school shit into some of my songs, knowing they feel familar but can place then until I hear it again. Then I'm like oh shit that was back in the late 80's, shit happes to me alot. Good read man, was worth the time.

Wouldn't make legends here...

[sem thoughts]

Excuse me miss-look how crazy ya drivin em
Got 99 problems-my bitch is 85 of em


I wanna body 8 jakes wit a straight face
And leave em leakin like Info bout Kobe's rape case


dope drop best ive seen in my short time here. flow was on point some hot wordplay. check out one of my drops thanks

[Glory]

damn haters. thanks to those who havent

[Daz]

its funny.

Everytime someone titles it legendary, Vets rush to see if it really is.

[Moniker]

^word. blah at the title. i refuse to even reply to something like that.

[Charlie~Manson]

This was hot man i on really like alot of people's open mics for various reasons but this was the nicest I read in a long time....not legendary of course but sick as hell you had nice wordplay the shit was funny and still skillful and your vocab was just the rite amount u didn't over do it but u didn't sound like chingy. this was dope though keep it up