ok this is the right one
just sit the verse you did on the other one
10 lines
no feeding
no biting
no crew votes
due by tuesday the 30th
12.00 Uk time...
Def by mouf
rabe
ok this is the right one
just sit the verse you did on the other one
10 lines
no feeding
no biting
no crew votes
due by tuesday the 30th
12.00 Uk time...
Move on , no irony here.
well seein as this ain't a battle and i lost the last verse i had cuz u got the last thread deleted.........waddya gonna do now.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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oh well just type it up again your got till tomorow anyway...
Move on , no irony here.
yeah whatever....i'll just type anotha verse and post it......this iz my check innnnnnnnn.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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okay rabe, props cuz u can use a computer,
But me stompin ya virtually ain't makin ya any cuter,
13 and gettin newdered, i almost feel badly,
but i just turned down ya moms offer for sex....gladly,
Ur like, she treats me just like candy...damn she's so handy,
Only diffrence tween u and her iz......she looks more manly,
I don't mean ta diss ya family, so i'll dis on ya tranny lover,
S/he put balls in ya mouth to teach u 'notes'...and u gave her a 'hummer'
Man it must be a bummer ta get 'beat' like this.....
So u could nut in ya moms mouth for a goodnight kiss....
Battles:
Come and get it.
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your last verse was really wack so your lucky it vanished
this guys scared of me its obious he`s a pussy hes slaggin me in spanish
Your wack man i`ll swap the "By To A "To" then everyone will be thanking me
because from your unbeliveable wackness I`ve just litrally saved RB.......
no emcee has to state your wackness thats what you do
because all you do with your posts is rip no one but you.
now i like the fake personals that you came down on for me
i would tell you to stick to topicals but there as wack as wack can be
You`re elevation must be lost and unfound in some Really thick smoke
Because youve been here for a year and your still cracking mum jokes
Emmmm,Leave some links...
Move on , no irony here.
i am in rabes crew so i cant vote but all break it down anyway...
okay rabe, props cuz u can use a computer,
But me stompin ya virtually ain't makin ya any cuter,
erm weak punch makes little sense
13 and gettin newdered, i almost feel badly,
but i just turned down ya moms offer for sex....gladly,
very forced "i almost feel badly@ WTF... and no moma jokes
Ur like, she treats me just like candy...damn she's so handy,
Only diffrence tween u and her iz......she looks more manly,
attempted multi... but continued moma jokes
I don't mean ta diss ya family, so i'll dis on ya tranny lover,
S/he put balls in ya mouth to teach u 'notes'...and u gave her a 'hummer'
lmao jus gets whacker... dude wtf?
Man it must be a bummer ta get 'beat' like this.....
So u could nut in ya moms mouth for a goodnight kiss....
hmm that really dont make no sense at all... whack shit
really poor am gettin chucked off my comp so i will break down rabes later.... improvement
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this shit has gone on for 2 long and i'm tired of it.....people quit sleepin on my battles. I don't sleep on any1 elses....especially if u ask me ta vote so please don't sleep on mine.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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my vote don't count cause i'm new, but i go with def by mouth on this one. i think both were pretty simplistic but def by mouth was at least flippin some words whereas rabe was rhymin some simple shooter mcgavin type shit. it's mainly about wit and i actually laughed out loud to some of defs shit. neither one of you guys really came personal enough though...it was all mad general.
meh. that's that.
winner: def by mouf
thanks fo tha vote and just in case people need explanationz....rabe is 13....so most of my rhymes were directed toward the fact that he was so young.
Battles:
Come and get it.
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^he may be but he lyrically abused you.... rabes breakdown...
your last verse was really wack so your lucky it vanished
this guys scared of me its obious he`s a pussy hes slaggin me in spanish
lol... ive heard a story bout this... personal gd... better strucutre needed
Your wack man i`ll swap the "By To A "To" then everyone will be thanking me
because from your unbeliveable wackness I`ve just litrally saved RB.......
lol went for his name gd stuff
no emcee has to state your wackness thats what you do
because all you do with your posts is rip no one but you.
lmao i liked it... better strucutred... than your 1st ones
now i like the fake personals that you came down on for me
i would tell you to stick to topicals but there as wack as wack can be
lol pretty funny... but strucutre poor
You`re elevation must be lost and unfound in some Really thick smoke
Because youve been here for a year and your still cracking mum jokes
gd finisher... came hard with gd strucutre
overall a few poor structured lines from rabe... but his punches and personals were funny... he rymed better and made more sense... cant crew vote ... so i aint pollin but rabe wood get my vote
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Well for those who didn't understand the last line(sick spitter)......it's like after someone nuts in a girls mouth and she kisses the dick........hence goodnight kiss.
And where are all the votes at...............uppin # 3
Battles:
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Def by mouf...
okay rabe, props cuz u can use a computer,
But me stompin ya virtually ain't makin ya any cuter,
No punch here really.
13 and gettin newdered, i almost feel badly,
but i just turned down ya moms offer for sex....gladly,
Very forced rhyme, and "ya momma" lines are played as fuck.
Ur like, she treats me just like candy...damn she's so handy,
Only diffrence tween u and her iz......she looks more manly,
Diss aimed at...?
I don't mean ta diss ya family, so i'll dis on ya tranny lover,
S/he put balls in ya mouth to teach u 'notes'...and u gave her a 'hummer'
Wtf?
Man it must be a bummer ta get 'beat' like this.....
So u could nut in ya moms mouth for a goodnight kiss....
Wack.
Rabe...
your last verse was really wack so your lucky it vanished
this guys scared of me its obious he`s a pussy hes slaggin me in spanish
Would be good...but has he slagged you off in Spanish?
Your wack man i`ll swap the "By To A "To" then everyone will be thanking me
because from your unbeliveable wackness I`ve just litrally saved RB.......
Don't really understand this...
no emcee has to state your wackness thats what you do
because all you do with your posts is rip no one but you.
Not too bad, weak but decent concept.
now i like the fake personals that you came down on for me
i would tell you to stick to topicals but there as wack as wack can be
Played and weak.
You`re elevation must be lost and unfound in some Really thick smoke
Because youve been here for a year and your still cracking mum jokes
Prolly best bar of the battle.
Overall, this was a weak battle. Neither person came with hard punches. But Def came worse off coz all his punches were directed at Rabe's mom, which is not the way to win a battle. I felt Rabe was weak, but he had some ok concepts which were enough to win him this poor battle.
v/ Rabe.
No hate.
rabe kind of fed of your verse... but still that closer was ill.....
Rabe
your last verse was really wack so your lucky it vanished
this guys scared of me its obious he`s a pussy hes slaggin me in spanish
You`re elevation must be lost and unfound in some Really thick smoke
Because youve been here for a year and your still cracking mum jokes
vs
Def
okay rabe, props cuz u can use a computer,
But me stompin ya virtually ain't makin ya any cuter,
Rabe takes this eisily... had better punches and personals.
not bad battle though... defs verse wasent too bad.
vote - Rabe
Originally posted byBM
okay rabe, props cuz u can use a computer,
But me stompin ya virtually ain't makin ya any cuter,
THIS WAS GAY
13 and gettin newdered, i almost feel badly,
but i just turned down ya moms offer for sex....gladly,
AGE PERSONAL'S ARE NOT GOOD NO MORE UNLESS THERE DEVESTATING
Ur like, she treats me just like candy...damn she's so handy,
Only diffrence tween u and her iz......she looks more manly,
IT'S LIKE YOU RAN OUT OF RHYMES AND SHIT
I don't mean ta diss ya family, so i'll dis on ya tranny lover,
S/he put balls in ya mouth to teach u 'notes'...and u gave her a 'hummer'
HUH.....................NOPE
Man it must be a bummer ta get 'beat' like this.....
So u could nut in ya moms mouth for a goodnight kiss....
DEFINATELY NO FATALITY
didn't like this verse at all I've seen way better but no not in this one.
Originally posted by:Rabe
your last verse was really wack so your lucky it vanished
this guys scared of me its obious he`s a pussy hes slaggin me in spanish
GOOD OPENER I LIKED IT
Your wack man i`ll swap the "By To A "To" then everyone will be thanking me
because from your unbeliveable wackness I`ve just litrally saved RB.......
GOOD BUT TOO STRETCHED
no emcee has to state your wackness thats what you do
because all you do with your posts is rip no one but you.
GET'EM
now i like the fake personals that you came down on for me
i would tell you to stick to topicals but there as wack as wack can be
THE END LINE WAS KIND OF CORNY BUT IT'S WAY PAST HIS VERSE
You`re elevation must be lost and unfound in some Really thick smoke
Because youve been here for a year and your still cracking mum jokes
YOU SHOULD OF SAID NUM JOKES BUT YOU STILL WON
good shit you verbally killed this kat
V/Rabe
for way better verse wit punches and structure included along wit wordplay
hit the link's back one love.