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g'luck...
10 lines
No feeding
5 minutes to check in
20 minute time limit after check in
g'luck...
ight on aim u told me u was gonna spit first so do what u do
check.............................................
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^that was my check in^^^^^^^^^^^^^
when i imprint thoughts onto paper the result is for sure carnage
weakling, like 'baptized trash bags' your writing 'pure garbage'
I houre chicks around but I beat fools up I'm all about the ass and whips
your guns are like speaking bout' God…you just blasphemous (blast n' miss)
influenced by nefarious thoughts i'm compelled to kill this kid
your so horrible that not even "flys" would feel your "shit"
with replenished lines i'll diminish minds
we're racing toward defeat and your about to cross the finish line
face it Game your scared of me, so why you actin iller?
I'll knock you back so far the butterflies in your stomach'll turn to catapillars
this kid went to a chicken store bout they were outa stock
shit all u had to do was look in the mirror to see a cock
working at therock quarry is the only time u sell rock
im waiting for ur verse looking at the clock tick tock
this verse will send u into shock so dont try ta mock
ur coupe will fly da flock and ill end you and ur crew
u need heat ur a female and overdue
"racing toward defeat" is the only thing in ur verse that was true
ill levae more marks on ur body than a master of tatoo
u couldnt strap up if you where a retarted kids tennis shoe
anomaly-ok flow, ok structure, sum aight punches
ill game-weak flow, ok structure, weak punches.
Overall anomally's verse was allot of filler and played cliches, but he had the better punches n flow. This was very one-sided.
vote-anomally
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Anomaly
when i imprint thoughts onto paper the result is for sure carnage
weakling, like 'baptized trash bags' your writing 'pure garbage'
^nice multi's and a complex punch^
I houre chicks around but I beat fools up I'm all about the ass and whips
your guns are like speaking bout' God…you just blasphemous (blast n' miss)
^nice imagery, strong threat, another complex punch^
influenced by nefarious thoughts i'm compelled to kill this kid
your so horrible that not even "flys" would feel your "shit"
^2nd line was a nice punch^
with replenished lines i'll diminish minds
we're racing toward defeat and your about to cross the finish line
^good punch and internal multi's^
face it Game your scared of me, so why you actin iller?
I'll knock you back so far the butterflies in your stomach'll turn to catapillars
^great punch to finish and yet another multi^
Illgame
this kid went to a chicken store bout they were outa stock
shit all u had to do was look in the mirror to see a cock
^that 2nd line made me smile, witty stuff^
working at therock quarry is the only time u sell rock
im waiting for ur verse looking at the clock tick tock
^1st line was nice, 2nd was filler^
this verse will send u into shock so dont try ta mock
ur coupe will fly da flock and ill end you and ur crew
^filler^
u need heat ur a female and overdue
"racing toward defeat" is the only thing in ur verse that was true
^2nd line was recycled, and that is a bad thing^
ill levae more marks on ur body than a master of tatoo
u couldnt strap up if you where a retarted kids tennis shoe
^1st line was a nice punch, 2nd i think you meant 'like' which would've made it a nice punch^
vote- Anomaly, this guy had sheer complexity in his punches and somehow managed to fit a multi into every line just to show off. Illgame resorted to recycling and had filler lines, which Anomaly didn't.
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wow good battle but Anamoly won this cat fight. meowww. haha nah j/p but anamoly ripped da kid from head to toe. ill get back atcha when im at 100 word.
anamoly u got this shit that other cat was garbage
great battle so ima break it down for you....
anomaly ---
when i imprint thoughts onto paper the result is for sure carnage
weakling, like 'baptized trash bags' your writing 'pure garbage'
"very nice punch"
I houre chicks around but I beat fools up I'm all about the ass and whips
your guns are like speaking bout' God…you just blasphemous (blast n' miss)
"another very nice punch"
influenced by nefarious thoughts i'm compelled to kill this kid
your so horrible that not even "flys" would feel your "shit"
"ok lines here"
with replenished lines i'll diminish minds
we're racing toward defeat and your about to cross the finish line
"good"
face it Game your scared of me, so why you actin iller?
I'll knock you back so far the butterflies in your stomach'll turn to catapillars
"nice finisher"
ill game ---
this kid went to a chicken store bout they were outa stock
shit all u had to do was look in the mirror to see a cock
"good opener, nice punch"
working at therock quarry is the only time u sell rock
im waiting for ur verse looking at the clock tick tock
"first line good but second just a filler"
this verse will send u into shock so dont try ta mock
ur coupe will fly da flock and ill end you and ur crew
"more filler"
u need heat ur a female and overdue
"racing toward defeat" is the only thing in ur verse that was true
"you just dissed yourself here by the way...so nope.."
ill levae more marks on ur body than a master of tatoo
u couldnt strap up if you where a retarted kids tennis shoe
"good finisher"
overall ---
it was pretty one sided but i know ill game has talent so i aint hating on him...anomaly you got some nice punches and lots of multies. you clearly took this one but ill still had some good lines. good work.
v/ anomaly
thnx for the votes and comments, ill get back to those battles once i can vote...
Okay both weren't bad verses. They were both average i'd say,but definitely not bad.
Anamoly, u had a few good punches wit some creativity, i mean u gotta be creative wit the trash bags and the flis, but whats wit the blasphemous bein blast n miss. I don't get it. Other than that u could work on ya structure a lil bit and u could try a lil harder punches by usin some personals, but it's not bad for a newb.
Game, u had some good punches all the way thru, u cohuld also do wit usin personals as well. u had the creaticity wit tha cock and tatoo thing i liked those. U had nice structure and a few multis in there whih iz alwys good, u could up ya vocab a lil bit though.
No hat just fair votin, and my vote goes too Game for havin bettr punches.
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Wtf? Blasphemous-Blast n miss, you dont get it,dont vote in my battles again, seriously, if you cant identify a good punch when you see one, if you think i lost your fucking stupid...herbOriginally Posted by Def by mouf