Mortally Resurrected

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Never thought I would be the next kid..
Getting close to death unexpected..
I should be more respected..
I should be more affected..
I'm still alive, spiritually protetected..
Check the method of being
................ Mortally Resurrected..

Young kid, fast life, always would act nice..
Was an inch away, from having a last night..
That's right, I'll start what happened first..
I Chose to wear a red hat with a matchin' shirt..
Little did I know that was the main reason..
Why I was stalked and shot in the same evening..
So then me and my friend went to eat some burgers..
Bout to leave, then mom calls, should of heard her..
"Hey honey, at 12:00 be home snugged inside"..
"Ok, I'm going to James' house, luv ya, bye"..
Now driving on the street, about to make a left..
Dark car pulls up on my side... I take a breath..
Right when I look I see sparks fly and I'm shook..
Wondering if I am another life that is took..
Hit the gas going fast, shooters I've droven past..
Trying to see with my eyes cut from broken glass..
Hopin' that none of the six shots ever hit me..
I get shocked, feel my head is bleeding quickly..
....feel my head is bleeding quickly..

Say I was lucky, but it wasn't yet my turn ya see..
Bullet didn't paralyze me, neither did surgery..
I started pondering layin in the hospital bed..
If I was another kid, would I be possibly dead?..
So I.. deal with being sick as the days go by..
Fucked up.. can't even tell if it's day or night..
It's ironic that it happened on 11th of September..
Now that it's November, barely anyone remembers..
It's kinda sad from my friends and family members..
I could pick apart the real ones from pretenders..
Wanted to get better so I never held any tension..
But even girls acted like they cared for attention..
This is for you fakes that not be understandin'..
The Fuck was your support BEFORE all this happened..
But dam..
I'm over it, my life is headed for better thangs..
Will I..
Ever be sane? maybe not, but some things never change..
So Now..
Everyday I feel my scar and scratch the surface..
Realize I'm still breathing, realize I have a purpose..

Never thought I would be the next kid..
To get so close to death unexpected..
I should be more respected..
I should be more affected..
I'm still alive, spiritually protetected..
Check the method of being
................ Mortally Resurrected..

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....feed?

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dam.

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.....ZZzzzZZ..

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is that story real?
if so dog shit happens 4 a reason, a rider learns that even fucked up experiences can be learning lesson
anyways u rap was pretty direct not much visuals some parts seemed shaky where other parts seemed more solid but it was a interesting story, aight peace loc
return tha favor and post up on my thread

[Figure]

Damn man, its a topic I havent really read anything about, but im telling you, you did this shit justice.. Very personal, painfully honest, and youre flow was impeccable.
Their was alot of things in here that I really felt, like youre multies were dope, and the repetition of the last line of the first verse was well placed. Youre hook was nice, or is it a bridge or a chorus? I cant really remember what to call it, but its very well written. props, nice piece.

My fave lines:
"Say I was lucky, but it wasn't yet my turn ya see..
Bullet didn't paralyze me, neither did surgery..
I started pondering layin in the hospital bed..
If I was another kid, would I be possibly dead?.."
and
"Everyday I feel my scar and scratch the surface..
Realize I'm still breathing, realize I have a purpose.."

seriously good job. if you could return the favour man, itd be appreciated, I know too well how some of these cats cant be bothered to reply
pz

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up .

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dam this is a true story quit sleepin .

[Incineratedrose]

Well i really liked it, the title really ties it all in i thought, glad you IMed me about it or else i might have missed it, which would have been gay. Obviously the emotion IMO was amazing, especially now that i see its a true story, i can just, i re-read it after that and now its not like you're just blowing smoke out of your ass, it really happened. Makes it hit more home i would say. Which is great. I also liked the way you set up the structure, which isnt really a key point in a OM i suppose, but i think at times it can make or break the read, make it smoother to read, and you did it perfectly. That part was a very strong point, and i thought the plot or "concept" was golden, another thing that was even better due to it being a true story, you could relate a lot easier and that was shown throughout your OM. Very good job with all of the above, i didnt know you dropped OMs, psh. gotta keep me updated!

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thanks for the feed .

[Psuedo]

Well i really liked it, the title really ties it all in i thought, glad you IMed me about it or else i might have missed it, which would have been gay. Obviously the emotion IMO was amazing, especially now that i see its a true story, i can just, i re-read it after that and now its not like you're just blowing smoke out of your ass, it really happened. Makes it hit more home i would say. Which is great. I also liked the way you set up the structure, which isnt really a key point in a OM i suppose, but i think at times it can make or break the read, make it smoother to read, and you did it perfectly. That part was a very strong point, and i thought the plot or "concept" was golden, another thing that was even better due to it being a true story, you could relate a lot easier and that was shown throughout your OM. Very good job with all of the above, i didnt know you dropped OMs, psh. gotta keep me updated!
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nice

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i lied it

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i liked it my bad