Tha Return vs UGotOwneD

[STAT$]

10 lines
house rules.......
......you spit 1st

[Assazin]

when both sides drop then I'll vote on this battle one love.

[UGotOwneD]

its that time of the month, and yep hes returned
bitch burned, couldnt have punches to make stomachs churn
and u even admitt to being a loser
bitch goes to council, for depression and bein an acohol abuser
u can tell y this cat is fucked, we dont even notice when hes gone
only reason is cause this guy neva shone, hangin wit the wrong-group
spends his time here or sorting alphabet soup
his rhymes take the semi and mine take the whole loop
theres a hidden message in this cats, From: under his nick bra
carefully read, its WEsT coaST kILLa caliFORnYA

[BIRD_MAN]

aight Return, when u gunna spit, ill vote on it

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[STAT$]

Own'n me? haha your better off buyin a car
I'll flip ya scripts...Naw fuck it I'll flip ya bars
had no chace from the start, take that down yonder
newb ain't even worth sonnen, I'll make you my daughter
I'm fuckin king shit while your just the queen bee
in other words your just the bitch that serves me
sacred me with all his forty posts I thought he was a vet
till I seen his verse, merkin him without even breakin a sweat
your lines going everywhere with punches far and few
merk'd him? Naw I just play'd dis boy I guess u can call me Hugh

[Willy B]

tha return had one of the best intro i've seen in the past month
Own'n me? haha your better off buyin a car
I'll flip ya scripts...Naw fuck it I'll flip ya bars
^^^ ill intro

had no chace from the start, take that down yonder
newb ain't even worth sonnen, I'll make you my daughter
^^^ was aiight but needed better wording

I'm fuckin king shit while your just the queen bee
in other words your just the bitch that serves me
^^^nah that did fit in with your verse different punch

sacred me with all his forty posts I thought he was a vet
till I seen his verse, merkin him without even breakin a sweat
^^^ good bar but not great second line was the best thou

your lines going everywhere with punches far and few
merk'd him? Naw I just play'd dis boy I guess u can call me Hugh
^^^ kinda fucked up fo a ending but alright i guess still bett then ugotowned's verse


ugotowned
its that time of the month, and yep hes returned
bitch burned, couldnt have punches to make stomachs churn
^^^ who has stomachs to churn last time i checked we have one. jus silly and played

and u even admitt to being a loser
bitch goes to council, for depression and bein an acohol abuser
^^^ didnt even meet in length but the second line would have been the best in the verse

only reason is cause this guy neva shone, hangin wit the wrong-group
spends his time here or sorting alphabet soup
^^^ again with the no flow but the punch was there another good one

his rhymes take the semi and mine take the whole loop
theres a hidden message in this cats, From: under his nick bra
^^^ didnt conecct well tryin to rhyme off the last bar silly and the pull wasnt even good should have used this last bar better.

carefully read, its WEsT coaST kILLa caliFORnYA
^^^ silly, wack, played all of the above jus not even a punch silly silly boy

the return got my vote
v\ the return

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[Swift Death]

Tha return takes this hands down.... it was really one sided even though it seemed he didint come that hard ne way.... better personals... flow everything especially rhe punches they came way harder so my vote goes... to Tha return.... not a great battle.....

vote - Tha Return

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[STAT$]

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[IAmazeMe]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155337

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ugotowed..

fav lines..

its that time of the month, and yep hes returned
bitch burned, couldnt have punches to make stomachs churn

return..

had no chace from the start, take that down yonder
newb ain't even worth sonnen, I'll make you my daughter

sacred me with all his forty posts I thought he was a vet
till I seen his verse, merkin him without even breakin a sweat

overall.. return just came more conssitent and witrh more humor so therefore my vote goes to return..

v/ return

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155337

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[caspeare]

ummmm
UgotOwneD - That was whack.....Horrbile flow and rhyming.......... I liked the semi loop thing, but it doesn't matter cause that was hardly a punch.......
The Return - good flow....... notice how your lines were pretty even unlike gotowned, it gave it that flow........ I liked the queen bee line.......... punches weren't too hard....

v/ The Return

[STAT$]

uppin # 2.........1 more for the KO VOTE VOTE VOTE

[STAT$]

Up Up And Away

[steveontrial]

return - nice punches, good finisher, better flow than your opponent. you get a C- for this because your punches were barely decent

ugot- this is a weak performance. your punches were weak as was your flow. props for trying to experiment on that one line, but try that shit once you get a hang of writing regular verses. this is a D at best.

vote- return