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Thread: The Streets Not Safe Anymore. . . .

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    Legend of Gadget
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    The Streets Not Safe Anymore. . . .

    BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW!!


    Shit was finished, the beef with Dre had ended
    Now all he had to do was to escape without gettin a sentence
    He heard sirens already, he ran through the alley and threw the gun
    While fleeing from the narcs all he could do was think of his son
    After a few hopped fences, a few blocks and a few main streets
    He came to a dumpster and disposed of his heat
    Took off his shirt and trashed that as well, paranoia kickin in though
    But he overcame it, went to an abandoned house and climbed through the window
    In the basement, everything was still, but the silence was so loud
    He thought he had heard footsteps, but anyone to follow him, how?
    Eased up the basement stairs, and pushed open the rusted door
    Realized the streets are not safe anymore......

    BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW!!


    He heard gunshots as loud as they could be
    He looked towards the commotion, and seen a body laying in the street
    and another person running, he looked like just a kid fleeing
    But he couldn't have been a murderer, he was only seven-.....maybe only eighteen
    Rushed over to the bloody body, tryin to comfort the victim
    There was no way he could be saved, not the way the bullets had hit him
    Just then, sirens was crying out the killer's name
    Police rushed to the scene, questioning all the witnesses that still remained
    'Sir, do you have any idea what to occured?"
    "Nah, but I seen someone running over thurr"
    He responded, and his southern accent
    A good ol` country boy, prime witness to a terrible accident
    He didn't want to be involved, he was raised to mind his own business
    But he also felt he must catch the person who did this
    So many emotions after seeing someone die with such gore
    He realized the streets are not safe anymore......

    BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW!!

    His body collapsed to the ground, after taking a few shots
    Another so called gangsta on the street get popped
    Although it was around that Dre was tryin to leave the game
    He could never go back into the past and undo all his caused pain
    But he tried, he confronted all his enemies, Bible in hand
    To make peace with all the people's families he had slain
    Approached a young man, that was full of anger inside
    The young buck pulled out a gun before Dre could even say Hi
    Let off 4 of `em, right into the changed man's chest
    Bible fell to the ground, body fell into rest
    That was the end of it, he had finally met with death
    Now he knew how others felt when he took what all they had left
    Their life, their soul, their love from their families and friends
    The killer gets killed, but even there the vicious cycle doesnt end
    Knowing he's already dead, he gave up, didn't want to live anymore
    He closed his eyes, and realized. . . . . .
    Last edited by Legend of Gadget; November 7th, 2004 at 12:48 PM

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    Legend of Gadget
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    Last edited by Legend of Gadget; November 7th, 2004 at 12:50 PM

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    Streets Not Safe, Thats Correct, Keep Postin I Like This Piece......the Concept Of Who You Used To Illustrate Your Written........overall I Like It 2 Much To Post Errry Thing I Like, Keep Postn..............uppn


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    upppin.
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    damn
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    Good stuff here

    I liked your approach here to how the streets aren't safe. Even though the concept of this topic is rather played, the content was enough to keep the reader in tune. flow was good. could work more on your multies though.

    anyways, good shit

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    thanks for the feedback
    uppin
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