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[Vis]

Viscosity, is top status, the legacy smacked and tagged
fucked practice, and hit legenadary spot in a static..
infatic insecuritys, got you coughin like an asthmatic
shit hasnt got drastic, the mic dropped and I grabbed it..
my noise, is wisdom, split into deminsions of atheists
theres no extensions, honorable mention, to be merked sensless
your defenseless, my weapons turn your writers block textless
bust your intestines, abdominally prolapsed secretetions,
vocab, causing you to beat off in Dictionarys for erections
ingenuis lyrics, creating cancerous detections
stem cell research, gave rebirth, to a menace
radiating epidermis's, with chemicals to soluate canine venace
saliva, scorching a thermis, and overheating your brains fernace
lost in my words.. as the symphonic torching begins..
cut your spirts loose, like lost children in a orphanige
cause I can wreck you eternally in an instance
but im being timid.. so if this made no sense, then ur trippin.

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[Sir Loin]

lost in my words.. as the symphonic torching begins..
cut your spirts loose, like lost children in a orphanige
^^This was an aight bar

cause I can wreck you eternally in an instance
but im being timid.. so if this made no sense, then ur trippin.
^^I must be trippin then man...

Yo you mos def had the vocab in this ish, but also need to mos def learn how to phrase it better in rhyme style. You got me man? Stay up! Pce.