thankyou for leaving feedback, ill def check one of yours man
uppin
thankyou for leaving feedback, ill def check one of yours man
uppin
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you are right though man this is fuckin pitiful..all these ppl view the piece but no one has the respect to reply..that shit be pissin me off
yah man
and they said they were gunna nominate this, but you know, whatever tho
peace
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OK, you wanna call this universal destruction/ nigga; i'll dismantle your function/ wit' the correct sway of sources/ break open "mikes" in seprete portions/ i'm on fire; torching (Mc's) wit' three hundred and sixty degrees/ I drink toxic and eat nails/ you get the picture?/ you dont need details/ I come from the "hood" nigga; so i light it up in the corners wit' females/ "got bucked once"/ so i got two gats on re-tail/ and invested in 9 clips wit' fully loaded hollow tips/ got beef nigga this young cats trigger finger is bound to slip
lol damn... just doing it for fun what you guys think
wut the fuck is this, i never do this, but someone ban him, first off, not just cuz thats stupid idea, but, the thing sucked, and if your gunna do that, make a new thread for it, damn, thats wack
uppin
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That Shit Was Crazy...
Vocab, Flow, Structure, Storyline...
Everything On Point...
You Didnt Just Have Good Vocab But The Way You Used It Was Nice...
Your Metaphors Were Emaculant In There Aplication...
My Only Critisizm Is Its Length...
But You Said It Was Kinda More Of A "Shit Off My Chest" Piece...
So Ya, But Lyrically And Content Wise I Really CANT Hate On Anything...
I Think You Should Definately Go Back And Re This Up...
Add Another Verse And A Chorus, An Intro...
With Those Little Additions This Could Be My First 10 Given...
But For Now, 9.8/10 Wich Is Still Very Nice...
Was Really Feeling This, Stay Up...
.One.
po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
This Ish Was Sick It Was On Point And Everything...Dope Ish...
thankyou, uppin
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it's very imaginative,and girl/man you some astronuat or something...nah just kiddin good vocab good work and um... keep workin
undefined k.swarrior unruled
very imaginative, good vocab and keep workin
undefined k.swarrior unruled
thanx man, uppin
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Love the piece son... realy painted a picture keep it up man
i wish not to look at this to closely seein as i am not in the mood. heh.
all i can say is if you wrote this i can hardly link it to some time back when you joined LL.
its good to see you actually worked to get better.. a great improvement man.
more on msn b haha.
yah i wrote it Ace, thanx man, i still wish LL was still around, and Ace is back people, and pissed about someone takin his name, lol
peace n uppin
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