~GoodBye~

[Brace4impact]

~Good Bye~

The hardest word in the world to say is..Goodbye
A broken promise and a Un spoken lie...
When Love is over .. or if a friend shall die..
Agin I Will Cry .. Vengence for the word ..goodbye
I Mean 'Bye' How the F*** Can that B'Good
Bitch Im tired of trying .. Now its over Ka'Put..
Please be nice and just keep your mouth shut..
Time to go about Our Lives ..'Ohh and Good Luck..
'Goodbye' Forever My Love..

Ashes and ashes And dust to dust....
Fairwell Dearly departed...
But I'll Be back for you ..
On the day when we are United ..

I Tried to fight it .. this lust for Blood..
I Became who I am .. Because Of Who I was..
A life of Drugs .. Late nights at clubs..
Crist above .. Can't even save Me ..
Spit fire Like a Dragon ..Not even K Could slay Me..
Good bye Baby .. and Maby .. Some day we Might
'Nah .. I doubt that can Happen .. But LIKE
One day i might be Raping .. So I write
Every day of my life away .. To cope with pain
So I should just slice this Vein .. Right away...
I Got this blade .. ??????????
" O shit this hurts so F***ing Bad
The key boards coverd in blood \ ''
Im staaaerrt ting tooo Get DIxZzy
sDA sn sain 000as0 ns an08 n Ita s ............"Bless me father"

Ashes and ashes And dust to dust....
Fairwell Dearly departed...
But I'll Be back for you ..
On the day when we are United ..

['Methadon']

Need to uppin for vocab, and try multies message was good along with truth emotion was ok, keep spittin

[Ace of Aces]

this was nice dog. real nice read. smooth flow, tight structure, you expressed very well what you needed to. the emotion showed in it went well with your word choice too. the imagery in your second verse was good, nice little fight scene, and the chorus was catchy. nice job man, thanks for your feedback on mine. keep at it bro.

peACE

[Brace4impact]

I voted for Karry....

[mindone]

I liked it how it was, flowed really well, i thought the words you used were fine. the chorus was also very good. keep it up
if you could check out some of my stuff.

[NOEL ROAR]

Nice Shit. I Don't Think I'm A Use The Word Goodbye Again, Thanks To You. Very Different Then The Norm. Excellent Topic Nicely Written.

[djb]

sorry it took so long to return the favor.

i thought this was a very nic piece. much better then i thought it would be. you had some nice imagery and very good emotion. i really liked the second verse. you sounded like i vet. i liked this drop and i look forward to reading more of yours. good job.

[Brace4impact]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154407
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31#post1821931

Credz* -And- Djb* Sick Shit ......^^

[Sir Loin]

Yo what up cuz? Good looks on that feed you dropped on my Daedal diss, just returnin the favour here.

Fav bars...

The hardest word in the world to say is..Goodbye
A broken promise and a Un spoken lie...
^^This was an ok start, felt it could've been worded or phrased better to be a more effective jump-off

I Tried to fight it .. this lust for Blood..
I Became who I am .. Because Of Who I was..
^^This here was pretty simple, but I felt it

This piece kinda got abit sketchy after this last bar quoted, veered away from the topic and went on some other shit. It seemed like you had the right idea at the start, but then took that away when you went off on another tip.

[jimbean]

serious drop man lovin this piece... well thought out but there was one discrepency...
the line you used about k slay, just wasnt fittin.. it was tight just didnt go my opinion..
one things shure creative as hell the nonsense at the end was wild....good way to discribe....
return the favor....