ok my rules:
10-15 lines
3-0 ko
no crew votes!! no hate votes!! u spit 1st!! good luck
ok my rules:
10-15 lines
3-0 ko
no crew votes!! no hate votes!! u spit 1st!! good luck
1. hahaha ice-g ICE how nice this dude cold
2. but lil hotshot 2 hot 2 hold concurin the world.
3. makin my perence felt till ice-g melts
4. wanna be ice cold go to alaska lil hot is fanastica
5. i beat ya in ezzz as ya freeze so pleaze shut the fuck down
6. ya cold ya suck have ya ever been crunk?
7. ya scar burned when r ya gonna learned now turn ya sckerd freak.
8. cuz of lil hotshot its 2 hot in this spot like llyold banks we on fire
9. sucka join da school chior ya rap ya a liar wheres ya desire
10. ice-g fade away like ice-tea did.
11. o o o is ice-g trying to be like vinilla ice?
12. cut ya into a slice ya gone dont even responed im on fire its flames cuz i got game
13. ya have da right to remain silent Sudden Death startin a world riot
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
His names Lil hot shot, he thinks he's on fire/
This dude is Lil? sounds like he comes from the shire/
and if this was a game of chess you'd be the pawn, and me the king/
your the bitch ass mc here so kiss the ring/
i hear you cant spit, but you swallow/
and we all know your ass about as hard as a marsh-mallow/
you say your burnin hot but lil shot, shit dont burn/
its ma turn to spit cuz you've had your turn/
if your meltin me with your rhymes and when you shout/
its too bad cause i'll be water and you'll be fire so i'm puttin you out/
its time to cool off now cause your heads gonna blow/
when i get my mack 10, the police will make you the main show/
Lil Hot Shot wants the top spot of the lyrical best?/
Too bad, Ice-Gs here and to put your ass to rest/
kk up for votes..sorry i took so long to spit..comp crashed and stuff..good battle
ok first off, lil, dont number your lines. ice, your lines were weak, like the puttin you out line coulda been worded better. lil uses a unique style that is eye catching. lil keep up the goodness, ice get some better vocab.
v///lil
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
yo thanks for the critiscism steve cuz its helpin me try and get better at this and thats what i came here for! Keep up the battles!
yo this battle aint goin no where so how we get the votes in to move on? help me out here man Lol!Originally Posted by Ice-G
LiL HoT*SHoT: That was whack! Where's the rhymin' It may be unique, but it ain't very effective: lines like "ya cold ya suck have ya ever been crunk?" don't mean shit if you don't follow it up, especially if they don't rhyme with nuthin' else! Good use of personals, though, but you need to work on your structure, work on your rhymin' between bars, not within them...
Ice-G: not many personals, but the ones that were there hit hard. To be honest, I think it was more a case of your opponent losing the battle, rather than you winning it. Your structure seems pretty solid, just need to better use your punches, and really mess around with your opponent.
VOTE: Ice-G
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LiL HoT*SHoT
ok, yo spit was ok! but some times u dident rhyme ur lines but u spat decent with some thought! and also tha 1st line wasent hard hittin as u need tha 1st to be!!:
1. hahaha ice-g ICE how nice this dude cold
2. but lil hotshot 2 hot 2 hold concurin the world. !DAM!
Ice-G
ice g spat a litte better and also rhymed ALL his lines!! he had good structure and nice flow!! and also nice to start his verse! :
His names Lil hot shot, he thinks he's on fire/
This dude is Lil? sounds like he comes from the shire/ !nice!
V/ Ice-G !!good luck homies no haten
..........._-:WMC:-_............
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yo thanks quick and wmc! its close now! good luck homies and i be uppin this now so hurry so we can move on 4 more battles!
I think it's sort of obivous that me Ice-G and Wmc know each other.......so i wouldn't count that vote....nice try guys
yeah we know each otha but still you can give your oppinion on a battle and who you personaly thought won it in the end. if u thought ma verse was whack tell me so i can think of more newer shit to say. if u thought it was dope tell me! i need the feedback Lol!
yo....uppin #2 .............somebody vote 2 get this battle finito
The kat that spit first was wack is fuk
#umberin his lines and shit wrf.....be real
not unless you don't know how to rhyme.
Ice had some cool punches and shit but let me tell you
one thing...........marsh mellows are not hard dude
that was weird.
Return the favor on DJB vs. ASSAZIN so I can get that shit over with one love.
V//Ice G/sub-zero finishes him FATALITY FlAwLeSS vIcToRy.....
i thought that you guys both sucked.... BAD.. BUT let me break it down..
Ice G- you had the better everything here even though it wasnt great... so dont write it down on the 'chore' list on your fridge so your mom can see it, you had the punches.. and you had the structure and flow, good job..
Lil-NEVER number your lines, i cannot stress that enough it looks SO bad s just NEVER do that again, and your punches and structure sucked, the flow was off and you had no personals... good effort but you totally got owned.
v/Ice-G
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Lol maybe you misundastood the marshmellow bit but thanks for vote Uppin #3!!!
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