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0k
SmokaJoka
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No biting or recycling
No dickryde/hate/crew votes
Both verses due within 24 hours after the 2nd check in
I.J.L.
Without the J...we're just Ill
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checkin' in
whose first?
Check...and drop anytime within 24 hours after this post
alright, I'll try to get mine up tonight.
Aight, I tried to do this quick, don't pussy out and leave like some other guys...
I don't wanna be forced to listen to the shit this guy's gonna spit
when you rappin' with Zero K, ya face gonna get lit
so red and it'll be burnin'of embarrasment
you're overshadowed by me, you feel the need to circumvent
you can run away with your head in your arms, cryin' about how you got told
and I'll be walkin' away in the other direction with the gold
you'll go to jail with your shitty rhymes, I'll decide when you get paroled
when these voters decide who had the best rhymes, I'll be winnin', two-fold
why you need 24 hours to write your pathetic rhymes?
is it cuz you need to wait for me so you can quote all my lines?
just be original, write your own lyrics,
if you need some help, you know where to get it
alright I'm outta here for tonight I'll check back tomorrow, hopefully you'll have your verse up...peace
Fucka Ok..you suck..now Post'll take this kid straight to town..
Cuz I'll kick the shit out of this kid...just to win hands down
I'll drop my bars...and bitch I know that I've left my mark..
He's aroused by my verse, so everyone knows he'll die hard
Votes arent everything, and you'll soon learn this the slow way
I mean fuck kid...if they were, ..then no...everything isnt 0k
Wanted to see what this bitch got....it's nothing but shit drops
But Post'll silence this lamb ..by busting this fucka in his chops
Thunderin flows, destroy, explode and stay pummeling this hoe
I aim for the teeth...
But don't worry kid.. it's not missing ..they always under ya nose
I.J.L.
Without the J...we're just Ill
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aight ill vote on this condition, dat postmort votes in my battle cause da other guy a newb. this dont mean im gonna vote for u, it just mean i will vote and poll... aight nigga.
Up....
Btw...leave links...I now have over 100 posts!! ..actually near 200
0k - I felt like your rhyme scheme was a bit basic and wasn't really connecting well. You had a decent flow going, but really you didn't bring much else to the table so work on more creative punches that knock him down.
PM - I liked your verse. You had some good concepts going and your punches were definately hitting him, like the opener and closer especially. Nothing else really needs to be said, you easily take this.
Vote - PM
Please return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig
Sleepy bitches...
I don't wanna be forced to listen to the shit this guy's gonna spit
when you rappin' with Zero K, ya face gonna get lit
weak opener
so red and it'll be burnin'of embarrasment
you're overshadowed by me, you feel the need to circumvent
i dont get it.....
you can run away with your head in your arms, cryin' about how you got told
and I'll be walkin' away in the other direction with the gold
weak punch
you'll go to jail with your shitty rhymes, I'll decide when you get paroled
when these voters decide who had the best rhymes, I'll be winnin', two-fold
weak punch
why you need 24 hours to write your pathetic rhymes?
is it cuz you need to wait for me so you can quote all my lines?
ok better
just be original, write your own lyrics,
if you need some help, you know where to get it
weak closer
Fucka Ok..you suck..now Post'll take this kid straight to town..
Cuz I'll kick the shit out of this kid...just to win hands down
decent
I'll drop my bars...and bitch I know that I've left my mark..
He's aroused by my verse, so everyone knows he'll die hard
good punch
Votes arent everything, and you'll soon learn this the slow way
I mean fuck kid...if they were, ..then no...everything isnt 0k
good punch nice one
Wanted to see what this bitch got....it's nothing but shit drops
But Post'll silence this lamb ..by busting this fucka in his chops
decent
Thunderin flows, destroy, explode and stay pummeling this hoe
I aim for the teeth...
But don't worry kid.. it's not missing ..they always under ya nose
dont like the structure on this bar but it was a good punch
overall it was onesided and post takes this easily for comen way harder both keep elevaten-One Love-
Up...Again
I can't believe PM is gettin' votes...if I read the first line...'fucka ok, you suck', I wouldn't even bother reading it....
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