10 lines
no feed
no hate
no dr
i set
u spit first
due in 45 min..
KingLyrical
Cripz
10 lines
no feed
no hate
no dr
i set
u spit first
due in 45 min..
i hate all i wanna..lol. i dont know wat feed means so basically im writin w/e the fuck i want..lol. sorry yo im new to this. 45 mins
trick sucka bitch reppin CT/fake rappin wannabe/u messin wit killa kali/im wack?/bitch take a step back/look my gun goes click clack/brace for impact/haven’t u heard/I aint scurred to play with a ghat/im bigga than ur ordinary hood rat/I rep san jo/looney toones records affiliated/my rep here comfortably situated/im amazin when I spit/im quick to spit amazing shit/even better when i roll a joint and take a hit/i grab my stash/pack some grass/puff puff and it cashed/kid u have no skill/your minds just ill/ur minds straight out retarded/so is your family but dont get me started/why is your mother fuckin your brother/thats right your dad ran away so shes her only lover/why dont u join in for a group orgy/cause u know just lookin at your mom makes u horny//
yo its been 45 minutes already..hurry yo shit up dayum
^^wack....just like i said...DAMN...i knew i shouldnt have battled you...this shit will be easy to win haha...give me 5 min...checkin in...
Yo, check it
King Lyrical is just a noob to the game, no exception
I would say battling you is important…
………………………………but I show no affection
You have King in ya name, but I done denounced you
You wouldn’t even be known…
………………..…………….if I hadn’t announced you
I would pounce you…but you’re important to these noobies
You say ya elevating…
………………………………….But you watch PG movies
My skills is definitely something you can’t hack man
Your rhymes are wack man…
……………………..eating you alive like I’m pacman
I’m done detaching King Lyrical like a prosthetic action
I cut you up and raped you…
…………………………...Like the boy Michael Jackson
lol..aiight peepz who will it be...kinglyrical or the renagade whos probably gay throwin down a michael jackson escapade Cripz..vote ppl
King Really Ya Going To Lose Cause Ya Whole Struture Is Messed Up And Da Flow............meaning No One Going To Read Yo Stuff
Cripz Won Dis Hands Down........word
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get ya voting on
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KingLyrical
Opener: Hard to tell since ur structure is so fucked up!!!
Structure: FUcked UP!!! lose the /'s and set ur rhymes up where people can read em better
punches: some nice punches... but make em more direct to your opponent
multies: i seen a few n they were alright
closer: poor as fuckin shit.... not direct and was stretched...
Cripz
Opener: it was aight... not really a direct punch since... ur pretty much a noob
structure: i dont like how its set up... but its easy to read so its aight i guess
punches: u did have punches n they was direct... nice
multies: seen a few.... use more
closer: ahhh the good 'ol MJ line... it sucked... MJ wasnt the boy who got rapped... the boys where rapped by him
Vote: Cripz
Hey please vote on this battle... good feedback to please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post1786234
bitch
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Im Not A Noob Haha^^^come On..if Only You Knew......uppin 1 On This
uppin 2 on this shit...come on vote on this shit..i will return the favor..
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