Chewy vs Snowman

[Snowman]

Melt Me!

[Mr. Key]

Wow thats really homo, um are u sure u wanna battle? Or are u jus playin around, anyhow, have ur verse ready within 24 hours, im bought to go to sleep, so this is my check in ~1

[Snowman]

U think u can rap as good as me..well I think thats absurd...Im going to chew ur ass up and shit u out like a terd...I may not be the black michael jordan but I can shoot this shit like the white larry bird...Then Im going to run ur ass over like a herd...u think u can top this...u aint ludacris...i made the slam dunk and now im going to watch u miss...go smoke up with cheech n chong...cuz after this i will be king kong...then i will play ping pong...with ur girlfriend in a thong...im like aunt jamima...the all time rhyma...busta rhyma...is what im saying a crime...hell this is my first time...if this is sour spit out ur lime...i will give u a chance...cuz i know u cant dance...and ur real name is probably lance...

[Mr. Key]

I shoulda specified, no newbies cause roastin u is not cosher
A 'red mark' musta been on ya tongue cause good lyrics got 'Passover'
This guys is 21, but hes on the computer at his moms house
Still trys to rap, but he spits 'off lines' like his brain 'logged out'
Homie u better elevate soon cause fame for u is a distance away
but The only time ull see 'primetime' is when watchin the ravens play
Dude, ur a lame, ull never be takin seriously snowman face it
Cause u wouldnt be on my 'level' if i slept in the basement
I know, the internets his way out cause co-workers make fun of him
But you couldnt top my weakest verse, if u was rappin wit mulligans
Ive beatin u with a weak verse, sry but thats the truth im forreal
Cause puttin MY lyrics on 'overheads' the only way u project any skill

quick verse, didnt need to go all out on this guy

[Mr. Key]

Didnt use any personals like i usually do jus cause he wanted me to, and i didnt really need to

[Mr. Key]

Uppin on this battle, lets get it over with, so i can challenge another two people, all votes will be returned

[Mr. Key]

uppin for votes on this battle, all votes will be returned, but lets go people stop sleepin

[Tim]

Snow man-

You relly need to work on you stucture look at other peoples stuff on the board also your first lines were ight and i thought you might have come hard but i was wrong it was very weak and at time laughable what you were saying you need to work on harder hitting punches so im not going to break it down line for line

chewy

I shoulda specified, no newbies cause roastin u is not cosher
A 'red mark' musta been on ya tongue cause good lyrics got 'Passover'

....i saw where you were going here

This guys is 21, but hes on the computer at his moms house
Still trys to rap, but he spits 'off lines' like his brain 'logged out'

........Ight heard it befoe

Homie u better elevate soon cause fame for u is a distance away
but The only time ull see 'primetime' is when watchin the ravens play

.....lol ight

Dude, ur a lame, ull never be takin seriously snowman face it
Cause u wouldnt be on my 'level' if i slept in the basement

......okay

I know, the internets his way out cause co-workers make fun of him
But you couldnt top my weakest verse, if u was rappin wit mulligans

......nah

Ive beatin u with a weak verse, sry but thats the truth im forreal
Cause puttin MY lyrics on 'overheads' the only way u project any skill

......needed to be worded better then it would of been harder hitting



vote........Chewy


Retrun Favor please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149049

[Mr. Key]

okay this is my last up, votes will be returned, stop bein assholes, thank u, if u dont voteits all good, do u , but dont expect me to voteon ur shit

[Bruce Wayne]

snowman

go smoke up with cheech n chong...cuz after this i will be king kong...then i will play ping pong...with ur girlfriend in a thong
that was wack sry man...

I may not be the black michael jordan but I can shoot this shit like the white larry bird
Im going to run ur ass over like a herd
the set up was a lil stretched and the 2nd part was wack but that was the best u had in there

chewy the best bar you had in there
Homie u better elevate soon cause fame for u is a distance away
but The only time ull see 'primetime' is when watchin the ravens play
you had a better structure flow and punches

my vote would go for chewy

ps dont you hate when noone votes and your forced toi see your battle die lol

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

[BeRLin`S BesT]

i think this was a pretty one-sided battle but okay..

snwoman: u came weak...ya structure was way off as said u should look around in other battles n try to elevate....u tried to punch but they were soft as hell...u also was using pretty simple rhymes like one-word-rhyme-structure shit...try to include multis metas etc....I won't quote cuz their ain't anything to quote about ya verse...

chewy: u came aight but I seen better from u, still u did have way better punches and ya structure was thorough...like u said it yaself u didn't have much personals but u didn't need them in this case anyway....so vote goes to chewy due to overall better verse...plz return da favor...pz

vote: chewy

[urmomsnightmare]

my vote is chewy.. just a overall better flow and punches
hit-it-up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150895

[urmomsnightmare]

my vote is chewy.. just a overall better flow and punches
hit-it-up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150895

[urmomsnightmare]

my vote is chewy.. just a overall better flow and punches
hit-it-up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150895

[FLOWMASTR]

overall chewy you chewed it up dogg
you got better flows and a mean punch dogg
you came out on top
VOTE:CHEWY
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