assault rhymes (1-1) vs. effect (1-2)

[Richard Parker]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146491
10-20

[assault rhymes]

checkin in, howmany liness?

[nolonger]

12...............

[assault rhymes]

aight good luck



fuck if he rep da hood, Ima chop his head off & let the Lord have em
cuz if i ever ran into ur neck of the woods, i'd come out with a log cabin
plus things just don't add up, you needa check ya shit & fix ya verse
but everytime he tries to summon some skill, he gets negative integers
we got beef now - believe ima end it quick cuz i kill kids
and its clear that we had bad blood, until I went and spilled his
must have it twisted son - that ya crew can build up dreams
of sharp thoughts cleaning house....as the Diamond Minds scrub team
all ya shit is wack, you joking if you think you seeing me in text
soon as you drop ya verse, won't nobody be feelin the Effects
see he never wins, quick to get ousted, now check who the boss is
cuz your defeats - you might call em flukes, but we column losses

[nolonger]

Damn that was weak,

Kid your an ugly fuck...so ill hand you this loss
so lets face it......on second thoughts lets not
take a shot..in the breakdown we'll see whos got game
them posting ass under each punch isnt your nickname
hold your head in shame..your here to see how it goes
and you'de achieve L L L.........if it wasnt for no shows
thats 3 in a row..a retard would be better here instead of it
and youd'e be ok..if you didnt rit e li ke u hava speech im pedi ment
your finnished..its clear your suffering from rust
kid needs to put polish on his lines..
..in order not to bite on the dust
winnings a must to me..this bitch has nothing left
joining I.J.L couldnt even resurect this death.

[Wise Ways]

v- Assault Rhymes

his log cabin line was good along with the negtative integers and the closer, so that pretty much took it.. e braught nothing to the table

[Jonezy]

seen the log cabin before sum where..assault
came stretched..some of his lines were aigtht
wasnt feeling much..thought effect brought
more wit.

vote effect

[Serum]

vote: assault

his punches hit harder, and had more to them, didnt like effects verse expecially his opener. i liked assaults bad blood line.

[Kaput Mundi]

^patriotism reignin high...as usual.
*edit: to Jone

A&R
fuck if he rep da hood, Ima chop his head off & let the Lord have em
cuz if i ever ran into ur neck of the woods, i'd come out with a log cabin
plus things just don't add up, you needa check ya shit & fix ya verse
but everytime he tries to summon some skill, he gets negative integers
must have it twisted son - that ya crew can build up dreams
of sharp thoughts cleaning house....as the Diamond Minds scrub team
all ya shit is wack, you joking if you think you seeing me in text
soon as you drop ya verse, won't nobody be feelin the Effects
scrub line was okay could fo been nicer..rest was nice

vs

Kid your an ugly fuck...so ill hand you this loss
so lets face it......on second thoughts lets not
only thing that made me laugh a bit

thats 3 in a row..a retard would be better here instead of it
and youd'e be ok..if you didnt rit e li ke u hava speech im pedi ment
^^^why would you try something like this when EVERYONE knows that you type 10x worse?

[Jonezy]

^patriotism reignin high...as usual.

What?..it was what i thought..you dont like it?..bothered

[nolonger]

2-1....................thanks

[Young Philly]

Assault came with booty...played ass cliches and then just horrible lines at the end.


Effect came bad, but he had the opener and the speech impediment joint.

V/Effect for being original and more hardhitting.

[nolonger]

2-2..........thanks p.

[Richard Parker]

fuck if he rep da hood, Ima chop his head off & let the Lord have em
cuz if i ever ran into ur neck of the woods, i'd come out with a log cabin
good wordplay... punch is ok

plus things just don't add up, you needa check ya shit & fix ya verse
but everytime he tries to summon some skill, he gets negative integers
above avg

we got beef now - believe ima end it quick cuz i kill kids
and its clear that we had bad blood, until I went and spilled his
meh

must have it twisted son - that ya crew can build up dreams
of sharp thoughts cleaning house....as the Diamond Minds scrub team
ok
all ya shit is wack, you joking if you think you seeing me in text
soon as you drop ya verse, won't nobody be feelin the Effects
ok

see he never wins, quick to get ousted, now check who the boss is
cuz your defeats - you might call em flukes, but we column losses
good wordplay, but doesnt connect into the rest of the sentence

Kid your an ugly fuck...so ill hand you this loss
so lets face it......on second thoughts lets not
cool
take a shot..in the breakdown we'll see whos got game
them posting ass under each punch isnt your nickname
ehh
hold your head in shame..your here to see how it goes
and you'de achieve L L L.........if it wasnt for no shows
no .
thats 3 in a row..a retard would be better here instead of it
and youd'e be ok..if you didnt rit e li ke u hava speech im pedi ment
if this was true, itd be a good personal.

your finnished..its clear your suffering from rust
kid needs to put polish on his lines..
..in order not to bite on the dust
if this wasn't flipped off of "calefraction: RM title matches thread" this would be good. but since it was.... no .

winnings a must to me..this bitch has nothing left
joining I.J.L couldnt even resurect this death.
ehh

v / assault

[Brother Blue Collar]

vote effect i liked the lll line, the log shit was kool, and so was the intergers joint but the nickname and speech line could killed

vote effect