StraighAce V Tha Return (CC Vs PP)

[Woogsta]

Aight...

On check in, u 2 agree a line number.

No hate votes, d/r votes, or crew votes.

300+ Posts to vote.

Good Luck.

Due - Monday 12am CST.

[STAT$]

Checkin in..........10-20 lines sound good???

[StraighAce]

checkin in ..................line limit sounds good

[STAT$]

Oh and on the rules NO FEEDING
here goes.......

Yo, 'Ace' its KO time cuz my punches are 'Wicked'
delirious, can't spell his name right cuz the blows i'm inflectin
Str8Ace, well I gotta royal flush, so pass them chips
I'll merk this pussy, have' em lookin like his avator pic
catchin this faggot off guard wit my lyrical invasion
Leave'n him in a haze wit my words 'Critical Combination'
I'll 'peel' this fagget, you didn't know thats my 'signature' move
have' em like the 'Hov' wantin to retire, all batered and bruised
scared as fuck, 'Straigh Ace' bloody red run'n across ya computer screen
searchin for his 11th victory, sorry that 'Tha Return' had to kill ya dreams

[StraighAce]

Ya styles more played than the lord of the rings & mythology
Call me king cause you getting prince’d more than musicology
Ohh no it’s tha return of mister big bad seven and four look out
Im surprised your in PP ..sdizzle must have been ur talent scout
Honestly like Abe Lincoln, how can I take u or ur crew serious
Stay away from the booth, so your skill level stays mysterious
My name and ur name is in red we got something in common
Except mine stays on peoples heads and yours is just forgotten
ur behind your time, gettin worked more than ya text marquee
and your crew name is out dated more than jacents peepee
your just the average newb, tupac an big in ya sig its played
but ur record aint average its just receiving a failing grade
ive seen ya ‘PAST” battles like im in ‘Back to the Future”
ya wordplay is worse than ‘SURGEONS” with out ‘sutures”
I add shit lines cause im bored an u have already been charred
Just showing my wood to try and make this homo come hard

[th-C]

Ace
hhm... nothing Real Dope, just some witty lines that made tha returns look more simple and less complex than yours... had some decent punches and i dont think i saw anything played except the 'come hard' concept.. overall enough to beat return..

Return
Flow kinda fell off from Beg-Finish, and the rhyming wasn't up to par but I ccould see the concepts hitting, but everything was too simple, try to set up punches rather than making it difficult just to rhyme, cause that's what it seemed like... just get experience and you'll be aight..

Vote: Ace

[StraighAce]

aight 1-0 me uppin1 for votes...............................

[buh bye Matty :(]

Return-

Yo, 'Ace' its KO time cuz my punches are 'Wicked'
delirious, can't spell his name right cuz the blows i'm inflectin
Nice personal.
Str8Ace, well I gotta royal flush, so pass them chips
I'll merk this pussy, have' em lookin like his avator pic
Nah.. failed attempt
catchin this faggot off guard wit my lyrical invasion
Leave'n him in a haze wit my words 'Critical Combination'
Nope.
I'll 'peel' this fagget, you didn't know thats my 'signature' move
have' em like the 'Hov' wantin to retire, all batered and bruised
..No
scared as fuck, 'Straigh Ace' bloody red run'n across ya computer screen
searchin for his 11th victory, sorry that 'Tha Return' had to kill ya dreams
Weakkkkk..

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Straigh-

Ya styles more played than the lord of the rings & mythology
Call me king cause you getting prince’d more than musicology
C'mon now..
Ohh no it’s tha return of mister big bad seven and four look out
Im surprised your in PP ..sdizzle must have been ur talent scout
Boooo sdizzle joke.
Honestly like Abe Lincoln, how can I take u or ur crew serious
Stay away from the booth, so your skill level stays mysterious
Blah.
My name and ur name is in red we got something in common
Except mine stays on peoples heads and yours is just forgotten
So what?
ur behind your time, gettin worked more than ya text marquee
and your crew name is out dated more than jacents peepee
Ugh.. no
your just the average newb, tupac an big in ya sig its played
but ur record aint average its just receiving a failing grade
Weak.
ive seen ya ‘PAST” battles like im in ‘Back to the Future”
ya wordplay is worse than ‘SURGEONS” with out ‘sutures”
Filler.
I add shit lines cause im bored an u have already been charred
Just showing my wood to try and make this homo come hard
Blah.

Disgusting battle honestly, but, Straigh, this is the worst Ive ever seen you come, none of your lines hit for me, and you even wrote more than him. Kinda sad man.. suprised at this verse.. Return wins basically for the opener. Only good line in the whole battle. No hate to either of ya.

Vote / Tha Return

[axisthamc]

hmm this was pretty hard for me to vote on..both yall had some dope punches...but i was feelen the returns punches more...i feel that ace came off wack on some parts..so

vote / the return

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[STAT$]

uppin...............#1

[Incineratedrose]

i thought that The Return won, no beef Ace, but i have seen you come a lot better and i think you should have done so, because he took this one from you fair in square he had better punches, vocabulary and ... the only thing you did better in was structure which does not take the match, good job to the both of you, but Tha Return got this

v/ Tha Return

[I-Hova]

ace wins thc broke it down best

Ace
hhm... nothing Real Dope, just some witty lines that made tha returns look more simple and less complex than yours... had some decent wordplay and ur personals were ok..gotta get harder punches but yeh u came pretty hard in this 1..

Return
Flow kinda fell off from Beg-Finish, and the rhyming wasn't up to par but I ccould see the concepts hitting, but everything was too simple, try to set up punches rather than making it difficult just to rhyme, also ur lines are mad played...use some better language cuz invasion combination shit is ass like j lo

Vote: Ace

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[Prose Act]

ace won

[TonyBrown]

hmm this was pretty hard for me to vote on..both yall had some dope punches...but i was feelen the returns punches more...i feel that ace came off wack on some parts..so

vote / the return

^^^^i like how u actually explained da vote, no not really

a mod can go head n delete this freepost now

[Tim]

Return-

Yo, 'Ace' its KO time cuz my punches are 'Wicked'
delirious, can't spell his name right cuz the blows i'm inflectin

...........wtf nope

Str8Ace, well I gotta royal flush, so pass them chips
I'll merk this pussy, have' em lookin like his avator pic

.......lol that was awful

catchin this faggot off guard wit my lyrical invasion
Leave'n him in a haze wit my words 'Critical Combination'

.....not feeling

I'll 'peel' this fagget, you didn't know thats my 'signature' move
have' em like the 'Hov' wantin to retire, all batered and bruised

....needs to be worded better

scared as fuck, 'Straigh Ace' bloody red run'n across ya computer screen
searchin for his 11th victory, sorry that 'Tha Return' had to kill ya dreams

......we do you do 'this' means nothing looks like your putting them anywhere


Straigh

Ya styles more played than the lord of the rings & mythology
Call me king cause you getting prince’d more than musicology

......lmao what

Ohh no it’s tha return of mister big bad seven and four look out
Im surprised your in PP ..sdizzle must have been ur talent scout

.....hmmm okay

Honestly like Abe Lincoln, how can I take u or ur crew serious
Stay away from the booth, so your skill level stays mysterious

.....weak

My name and ur name is in red we got something in common
Except mine stays on peoples heads and yours is just forgotten

......bragging shit here

ur behind your time, gettin worked more than ya text marquee
and your crew name is out dated more than jacents peepee

......nah not feeling

your just the average newb, tupac an big in ya sig its played
but ur record aint average its just receiving a failing grade

.....okay

ive seen ya ‘PAST” battles like im in ‘Back to the Future”
ya wordplay is worse than ‘SURGEONS” with out ‘sutures”

................ummm okay

I add shit lines cause im bored an u have already been charred
Just showing my wood to try and make this homo come hard

.....weak closer



vote ...........SA

came harder and better i felt

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