Topical : Cunny Funt vs Tim Corleone

[The Drifter]

Chavs vs TNL.

Agree on a line limit man.

Due Wednesday I think.

Good luck to both.

Topic : If All Humans Were Blue.

[Tim]

checkin lets do 26 lines at most

[Cunny Funt]

OK 26 lines at most it is. Check in...

[Tim]

are you going to post tonight cause i have my verse done get at me if you need more time cause ill give you till tomorrow get at me asap

[Cunny Funt]

I could post tonight but it would be kind of rushed, its up to you.

[Tim]

Naw go ahead and drop tomorrow morning if you can but if you cant whatever time i just want a good battle

[Cunny Funt]

Ok..

[Cunny Funt]

Decided to drop tonight. This is my first topical so here goes...



What would life be like if all people were blue, if each and every man looked the same
If there was no colours , if all were the same hue, no hateful words or racist names
There’d be no tension, no crimes or war, It would seem to be a better place
But there’d be no love either if every single person had the exact same face
I can’t decide what seems worse, a world with hate or a world without love
Worldwide peace, No inferior people and none living in standards above
I cant imagine what it would be like, Would things be better if there was no others
Same people, same faces, If you couldn’t differentiate between a brother or a mother
But in this world things seem to always get hectic, people like to revel in hate
It seems that one race is dominant and others cant get respected, Is that just fate
What’s worse, losing someone that you loved or not having somebody at all
Being not close with a single human being or grieving when a loved one falls
All humans would live in peace, populations would rise, nations would expand
But women and children would die, starvation from overpopulation of the land
Every man for himself in this life as there would be nobody to care for in his mind
A world where there is no hate but no love, would you be able to live and abide inside
Would it be a better place, would all people be better off, could you stand being alone
Would you prefer to loose a family member or to have never had somebody at home
Fuck it anyway because nothing can change, there will always be differences
Always be fake gods to incite hate among followers and fail to bring deliverance

[Cunny Funt]

Shit, the lines are all streched. Try to look past the shitty structure and at the words. Never meant to turn out like that.

[Tim]

I was Brought Into this world a boy now have grown from Sand
Tought by my dad earl to look down upon my own fellow man
He says we are superior but i dont see how this can be true
We all have the same exterior because the fact is were all blue
All ive seen are clones of me a mirror image like a spirited ghost
But Im my own human being my interiors is what i like the most
I read the biblical scriptures from our past stated by the people
Its hard to believe the pirctures but i guess were all created equal
A fate sent down from the Heavens an experiment at its best
With hate I repent as does the rest who can or will fix this mess
Total Anarchy erupts a revolution has accord time to take charge
Its sad to see this.....Fuck a conclusion wont be reached by far
People are dying left and right all want to be named the only one
Trying to be the best might be hard but we all know it must be done
All fighting for the right the passage to take the head of the throne
People gathering by the masses praying to look different one alone
Looking the same with the same features can take a toll on the mind
The prechers started preching paint yourselve black, brown, or white
God saw what was happening and knew that this idea was going to hell
So he muscled up all his powers, decided that he had to destroy it himself
With one swift shift the city was being flooded it was a loud commotion
In about six minuetes everyone was gone the land was sunk in the ocean
After god learned from his mistakes he gave each person a face and color
To represent the dead people of the city that was the fate of the others
Id never take the feeling away of killing your Own but then i understand it
A step forward in life i pay thanks to those who dyed in that city of Atlantis

[Tim]

uppin1 leave links

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Cunny Funt:
k you were aight need to work on vocabulary and topicly wise like yer topics kinda off half of it it you know what i mean...it was aight verse also the flow was off and stucture was off as well about a 4ish 5 ish verse outta 10 if you feel me but iahgt drop dawg...

Tim Corleone:
nice drop man nice flow and stucture vocabulary aight coula been better a few that were in there not bad..nice topical whise like you verse was nice the way you were on topic... i like that dawg nice drop nothing realy much else to say but keep rollin like that and your audios are pretty nice to...

Vote: Tim Corleone

return the favour in my battle links in the sig ight peace

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o shit i cant vote not enough posts this is gay shit i hate how that i knwo theres people that dont know how to explain votes but i did just there... o well ill come back when i have 30 more posts... sry for your time... but can you at least hit me that vote its kinda bein slept on

[Cunny Funt]

Its my first topical so I didn't really know what I was doin. Uppin....

[unXtatic]

aight,
Cunny, i thought ya verse was coo, i mean it's not bad fo your first topical...u managed to have good vocab, which was a plus...n u had the idea down at first, but as u went on, u sorta digressed from the topic, nah'mean?

Tim, ya verse was real deep...needless to say, it's obvious u've done this befo...fo the most part, u stayed right wit the topic, n u added good vocab along wit interestin details that kept a good flow throughout...

V/ Tim, fo better consistency n overall flow....