aight yo 10-15 lines 15 max
no due date
no hater crew dr votes none wut so ever
good luk bro~1~*p*
Killa_Instinct
xXPrEmIsEXx
aight yo 10-15 lines 15 max
no due date
no hater crew dr votes none wut so ever
good luk bro~1~*p*
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aight im jus gonna type mine, whoeva finish first will post it, fuk if u first or me same shit.. peace!!!!
aight yo
watch me slaughter cyberly,~first battle and through him he already admiring me~*//
killa instinct, couldnt rely on his sences thas just weak//
i give a word of mouth that he cant beat,and im hyptheitcly speaking//
my rhymes invade on him,* like a poperazi i neva-leave//
u battlin me is like nas to creed,see u bleed,,-as i dismantle his mandable//
they call me tha premise aka killa instinct animal//
i give him a rap manual burn his flames cuz im flam-able**//
there aint none that can compare,u still on tha other side tryin to get wit and stare//
his raps are like usher and his girl he ploted but in tha end they werent there..//
now time to get critical i take on u as an inda-vidual//
(finisher)
u tryin to take credit off a noob thas pitiful*-i slaughter u like an acnient ritual//
~1~
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ohh and yo to add to da rules first to 3 votes wins
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haha another newb
yo mayne i aint gotta hurt u, cause u aint got no premise
i just took ova but im kind enough to leave u here, as my apprentice
u might think ur top shit with ur xxx around ur name
r u tryna tell us ur dirty fag, seems u really used to the sex game
as flowetic as i am, u really thought u had a chance for a knock-out
like u vs hollyfield, before i throw a punch u back-out (hollyfield is a boxa)
enough from the metas, lets take it to reality
u weak as fuk, couldnt produce flow wit lil kids compatibally
thats y im dissin ur ass, u aint rb material, u not eva gonna be
go read the dictionary, maybe ull find words wit sum complexity
then find sum recycled words wit a lil punchline
dats ur first step the second is to make that wack shit rhyme
neva tried on this but if i know newbz dis will do tha job!!!
uppin fo some votes~1~and yo good drop maynn pz....
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ok that's how I see it:
both came pretty much alright on this...some well formulated punchlines but I felt like premise tried too hard to include those vocabulars...it just seemed forced to me and made the flow seem choppy...Killa, had a constant flow n some good punches...he got the edge....plz return da favor...battle is in my sig...pz
vote: Killa
Hit N Run
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xXPrEmIsEXx:
watch me slaughter cyberly,~first battle and through him he already admiring me~*//
killa instinct, couldnt rely on his sences thas just weak//
weak opener
i give a word of mouth that he cant beat,and im hyptheitcly speaking//
my rhymes invade on him,* like a poperazi i neva-leave//
speak-ing don't go with leave
u battlin me is like nas to creed,see u bleed,,-as i dismantle his mandable//
they call me tha premise aka killa instinct animal//
nope
i give him a rap manual burn his flames cuz im flam-able**//
were's your punch???
there aint none that can compare,u still on tha other side tryin to get wit and stare//
his raps are like usher and his girl he ploted but in tha end they werent there..//
weak you worded it wrong and it don't go with your setup
now time to get critical i take on u as an inda-vidual//
(finisher)
u tryin to take credit off a noob thas pitiful*-i slaughter u like an acnient ritual//
nah weak closer
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Killa_Instinct:
yo mayne i aint gotta hurt u, cause u aint got no premise
i just took ova but im kind enough to leave u here, as my apprentice
no weak opener
u might think ur top shit with ur xxx around ur name
r u tryna tell us ur dirty fag, seems u really used to the sex game
weak
as flowetic as i am, u really thought u had a chance for a knock-out
like u vs hollyfield, before i throw a punch u back-out (hollyfield is a boxa)
every knows hollyfield - weak
enough from the metas, lets take it to reality
u weak as fuk, couldnt produce flow wit lil kids compatibally
no
thats y im dissin ur ass, u aint rb material, u not eva gonna be
go read the dictionary, maybe ull find words wit sum complexity
com-plex-i-ty don't go with be
then find sum recycled words wit a lil punchline
dats ur first step the second is to make that wack shit rhyme
weak closer
Vote Killa this was a weak battle but killa took it with better punches. Premise work on your structure and punches and personals.
Premise-
watch me slaughter cyberly,~first battle and through him he already admiring me~*//
killa instinct, couldnt rely on his sences thas just weak//
Nah..
i give a word of mouth that he cant beat,and im hyptheitcly speaking//
my rhymes invade on him,* like a poperazi i neva-leave//
No.
u battlin me is like nas to creed,see u bleed,,-as i dismantle his mandable//
they call me tha premise aka killa instinct animal//
i give him a rap manual burn his flames cuz im flam-able**//
Blah no.
there aint none that can compare,u still on tha other side tryin to get wit and stare//
his raps are like usher and his girl he ploted but in tha end they werent there..//
Nope.
now time to get critical i take on u as an inda-vidual//
(finisher)
u tryin to take credit off a noob thas pitiful*-i slaughter u like an acnient ritual//
Ok I guess..
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Killa-
yo mayne i aint gotta hurt u, cause u aint got no premise
i just took ova but im kind enough to leave u here, as my apprentice
Blah ok..
u might think ur top shit with ur xxx around ur name
r u tryna tell us ur dirty fag, seems u really used to the sex game
lol got a chuckle..
as flowetic as i am, u really thought u had a chance for a knock-out
like u vs hollyfield, before i throw a punch u back-out (hollyfield is a boxa)
Nah.
enough from the metas, lets take it to reality
u weak as fuk, couldnt produce flow wit lil kids compatibally
Nah..
thats y im dissin ur ass, u aint rb material, u not eva gonna be
go read the dictionary, maybe ull find words wit sum complexity
? C'mon.. nah
then find sum recycled words wit a lil punchline
dats ur first step the second is to make that wack shit rhyme
Blah.
Overall, this was pretty one-sided. Killa won this easily for basically having way better punches and personals. Still, both can improve..
Vote / Killa
aight good battle yo helped me step up a notch on vocab flow and punches nice battle though~1~
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oh yeh this shit first to 3 aight nice battle modzzz close this plz!!!
looks like i dont need 2 vote then....................
I was here before RB died
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modzzzzzzzzzzzzzz close this battle its first to 3!!!!!
uh u agree to loss... the mods told me to do this so jus say yes if u still on this site n yeh
premise agreed to give killah instinct the win so closed
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