Tim Corleone vs. Ace of Aces (MT vs. PB)

[Incineratedrose]

10-25 lines...
Topic will be posted...
House rules (no biting etc)
Good Luck to the both of you...

[Ace of Aces]

check, choose the damn topic already.

[Tim]

check check when is this due

[Incineratedrose]

sorry.. it is due Monday...
and..
Topic-The Down Sides Of Internet Rapping

[Tim]

ight topic good luck

[Tim]

better drop tomorrow ace

[Ace of Aces]

~right back at ya sonny~

[Tim]

who the dopest heads? someone gassed by they own friends?
I'd show respect, but how can 18 year olds then, be known vets?
half yall, havent grown yet...some creative, but still not worthy,
its hurting, when pic battles prove most these kids are nerdy,
stay surfing...but I wont be evil & hate on u people's lives,
winning's ur ego's pride, reason I dont see why some need to bite,
cheat or lie...I thought this was competition to prove urself,
some just do it well, others are on AIM trying to shoot for help,
truth's been dealt...some dont get chances, some dont deserve it,
leave my mark for certain...

"while~wack-kids~put-it~all-in~they-verses",

then there's the herb list...the bitch type, kids that dont think right,
stay hard on the so called big names, as votes travel through dick rides,
but some punches are flipped tight...with all the mechanics but spittin',
audio heads hate, like if before recording, their verses weren't written,
no quittin'...so sue me then, everyone went through the newbie trend,
but tell me who the fuck said, u only dope if u post over and over again
& then...battling, I must say, no stories, nor dissing, if u wanna succeed,
must I repeat? u wont get a win without the set up/ punch technique,
but what's really funny is beef...why would u act tough on the net?
disconnect, but since when the hell is the enter button a threat?!

[Ace of Aces]

Could Be You

He sits clicking, scanning pages of his written lyrics
Looking back at whack tracks of a hidden appearance
He took pride in his life, despite the unknown factors
He couldn’t light up a mic, short of a full-grown actor
A fallacy in his reality but he fell into the great trend
Feeling slightly satisfied the time he reached elevation
His destination, was nothing short of a comp screen
Not nearly a geek, but miles from dating prom queen
The kid was quick but not legit enough to know this
Given a second time to spit, he would up and blow it
A slow thinker, it took him hours to read and key bios
But tricked himself into thinking that he could freestyle
Meanwhile, he practiced on paper and nothing more
Not realizing that a keyboard was all that he lived for
One day he felt ready, so he tested himself out loud
Saying things that not even he knew what was about
A joke, nothing more than a screen name to battle
A retarded art that he thought could peak shadows
Only fooled into thinking that he was achieving shit
And now its you who realized it too after reading this

[Kaotic Theory]

okie doke

ace
your piece was nice,the vocab was good,the structure was nice also...your piece was complex...and you described the details well,i also lliked ya creativity in this piece...the were a few metas here also...so ill say this was a pretty solid work man....and you stayed on topic well and better than tim did..

timmy
you also had a nice structure,the creativity and the details were okay in this but not great,you also did good on staying on topic mostly....you did have an okay vocab to....and this was a well worded piece

overall...id say with a slightly better structure,and creativity,and also staying on topic better ima say that ace takes thgis....great drops from both by the way

v/ace of aces

[Ill Game]

aces of aces great apit actually great spit to both af yall this battle was sick but i think aces of aces took it because his flow and structure was better over all he took it by about 1 point more that tim in pointa outa ten please return the favor thanks

v/ a o a

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Born To Kill

[Ace of Aces]

thanks for dropping votes, much appreciated.

drop links.

[Born To Kill]

First off...

I really wanna say fuck you for making me pick a winner outta two cats who's verses I usually dig...I dislike hard decisions and this is/was definately one. So, I repeat, fuck you!

Great topic...very here and now.

I'm gonna give Tim the win because while both displayed extremely good flow and great story...his was personalized for what I see everyday. What I occasionally feel.

Ace's, I dunno...I just don't feel like that cat did... he seemed to wanna spit for real...possibly blow up at it. At least that's the vibe I caught. I don't relate, I'm older, already have a career and basically dislike people so the last thing I'd wanna do is get on stage in front of em with my shitty sounding voice.

Tim, good shit...great description of what goes on here everyday. While I don't have a need to blow up or achieve anything on the net...I do like coming to a community I don't have to see and can turn off at anytime. Your shit was an on the button assault on the corruption (can you believe that word applies to a fucking rap website???) that sadly goes on here.

Good observations, great way of relaying them.

Winner: Tim

Peace

[Woogsta]

I agree wit BTK...

Timmy - Started off good n stayed good all da way thru, i felt everything u said n u got a smile out of me on one or two bars. Very true, lot of emotion and sorta like a battle diss to everyone out there. Was diggin it, overall real decent drop.

Ace - U didnt start off all that good in my opinion. U got better towards da end n i like how u approached the topic, but iunno it jus didnt appeal to me as much as Tims did.

Vote - Timmy.

Plz return favor here at :

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[Ace of Aces]

thanks for the votes peepz, drop links i'll get back at ya.