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    Mar Mcloud MKs's Avatar
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    Me

    These verbal expressions come easier then stating directions,
    How i spit these flows flawlessy with no other exceptions,
    ............Exspectations, awaiting hittng so hard......
    But i keep cooler in hot situations then, a ice cream bar,
    Rappin's a nack for me, no hesitation to do it,
    So don't be suprised if I arrive with acouple of new hits,
    ............I do spit, constanty elevating higher.......
    Smokin out MC's like I was emursed in fire,
    I try not to be basic, but try to be lyrical,
    My en-genious ways clown people, leaving them hysterical
    When i rap, it never stops because I take it the farthest,
    My rhymes flow like paintings so i guess im a artist,
    Some people think they can stop me by the things they say,
    But it's funny how I come back on people in the realist ways,
    Sometimes I sit back and watch MC's destroy themselves,
    Until I decide to put them away , like old toys on shelves,
    I never brag, and I try to watch my level of cockyness,
    Never ride backs, like some MC's on Jocky shit
    And i stay fresh always drive dirt off my white tee,
    While looking at the list of people who dont like me,
    When it's all said and done I'll remain on top,

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143555

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=143168
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    hit this up, i working hard on this feed and tips i need

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    alright that was decent the idea of rapping about how good you are is getting really old really fast though. however in a piece like this i didnt really mind it because you kept it funny and clever. it seemed like you could have shortened some of your lines up a bit. for instance, in the last line if you would have taken out surely i think it would have flowed a little better. thats just me though. overall it was a fun and solid drop. please return the favor if you could.
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    Ehh, okay, normal keystyle drop it seems to me. Try to write about something more meaning full and portains to you ..

    Keep writin'..
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    that good or bad?

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    I LIKE IT AND YES THE SELF EXPLOITattion is old to some but for others it isnt and this is good solid work
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Omfg Thank You Finally

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    LOL atleast i wasnt talking about how i killed every one and rised to the top and stuff lol

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    dont keep this short yall more feed pls

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    lol this shit was alright man..you definately are ellevatin..your multis in this were alot better then you normally drop....the flow was good..and your structure was built good...the imagery was eh...descent..not too bad...keep it up

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    imagery? i was telling a story? lol wow im getting better LOL

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    mor feeder

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    hmm... none of my crew emebers posted here except for like one....

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    hey pople feed..

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