usual house rules
10-16 lines
blind spit--verses due 30min after both check in
no DR, Hate, or Crew votes
aight lez go......i'm checkin in right now
oridge
unXtatic
usual house rules
10-16 lines
blind spit--verses due 30min after both check in
no DR, Hate, or Crew votes
aight lez go......i'm checkin in right now
how do you ceck in tho ?Originally Posted by unXtatic
u already did...u just basically have to come to the thread n say "checkin in"...now both of our verses are due at 6:49
do we just spit right here ?
yeah...remember the time limit
im good lets do it
Dont git shit twisted boy, wit ma' spit deployed
there aint no toyin around, u know u gon git destroyed
i'm spittin fo real, but u wack, u jus reversin digestion
--lettin out undeveloped shit like a bursted intestine
jus a quick surgical lesson--when rappin, open ya heart
cuz u be soundin shook, lookin like u was choked from the start
oridge u shootin off everywhere like a blunderin soldier
the only block u got on lock is the one on ya shoulders
n dont even think i'm intimidated by yo ugly stare
i'll jus leave ya name wit pee on it n feed u to the hungry bears
blind spit ? you aint shit
with a dick in your mouth, because yous a ho !
Guess you could call me cocky, eye of the tiger like motha fuckin rocky.
i'll knock you the fuck out , wit the words i spit out my mouth.
A mother fucking leathak dose.
i'll turn your ass into coma toast!
I hate to boast , just need to let you know i have the most.
I'll watch you roast.
rest in peace , cuase now your up in smoke.
Like i siad , you were nothing but a joke !
uppin this shit befo it collects dust....#1
uppin #2, yall need to quit sleepin....
unXtatic
Dont git shit twisted boy, wit ma' spit deployed
there aint no toyin around, u know u gon git destroyed
Ok opener
n dont even think i'm intimidated by yo ugly stare
i'll jus leave ya name wit pee on it n feed u to the hungry bears
I didn't really like that closing
Overall your verse was ok, not the best, not the worst. 6/10
Oridge
blind spit ? you aint shit
with a dick in your mouth, because yous a ho !
Wtf...
rest in peace , cuase now your up in smoke.
Like i siad , you were nothing but a joke !
I didn't like your closer...
I liked your 4th line best, but you used the same word two times...in only 4 lines. That takes off points from me. Try and elevate. You don't suck, there's room for improvement. 4/10
V/unXtatic
Sig Disabled for being a faggot and puttin music in it.
Let me leave you a link...hit it up and vote on it. http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...24#post1711824
Sig Disabled for being a faggot and puttin music in it.
uppin #3...n about my last line, u gotta think of it as puttin "p" on the name "oridge" in case u didnt get it...anyways thanks fo the vote (even tho it didnt count fo anything)
uppin #4
uppin fo the last time (#5).....make it count...........
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