Tim Corleone vs Grayt Wyte

[Tim]

Topic : Emergency Room
due 1 hour after both checkin
as many lines as you feel fit
Good Luck

[Tim]

checkin

[Grayt Wyte]

emergency room? drug overdose or what? whats the reason being

[Tim]

Its Topical You Make up your own story but it has to tie to an Emergency Room

[Grayt Wyte]

im sweatin, paranoid, seein everythin triple// i
im in a zone, drowned out, and begin to see the bibical//
i think im diein because im feelin diseased//
drop to my knees//
god please//
i need the room in my reach//
i pray that i'll make it, but im so gone off the shit//
that consists of morphine, acid, e, and the slittin of my wrist//
i need the room my lord can you settle my need//
can you heal everything?, or can you just set me free//
i wanna wake up somewhere, and want that somewhere good//
but soon as i realized i was above my body in ER, there i stood//

[Tim]

in the red sea where last found...

hanging by the words of my last noun, hide life in a blackout,
awakened by lights of angels camping 'round my back ground,

then evil chants hound...

snakes scram, the bullhorn's shadow extending a helping hand,
& in the middle end, life stands, in preparation for farewell plans,

given no chance...

darkness yanks me by my left wrist, as light jerks my right arm,

at the same time, far...

masked insurance crooks pumping my heart, shooting to fight harm,
my appetite's hard...so my bag's packed, with time in my nap sack,
oxygen back stabs, blinding my sight with my very own flash backs,
hurried to act fast...as decisions float, around these four wall's hopes,
draw flat lines, evil colors the mold, outnumbered as my sin's unload,
vision exposed…with shivers whispering cold in this melting pot,
taking shots, at my young self by the frustrations of my yelling pops,
help me moms!! as she cried waterfalls bathing in cascades of torture,
handmade by the enforcer, timeout coached by the webs of the corner,
take orders…as hate talks in the back of my mind, but I wont snitch,
& fear lives caged inside my own ribs, with action also being thrown in,
with the same attitude shown since…known as the excuse for my steps,
my mind jogs in cold sweats, with its bullets poking through my flesh,
no room for this mess…emergency was for necessity, not for my body,
remains are engraved, with the ripping of capitals produced as unlucky,
not of my hobbies…it was for needs, I had to succeed, not bleed,
so I poked shots at the old man with the runny nose under the tree,
what can this be? is this a dream? all seen in mere seconds,
speared questions, answered as the light fades memories near lessons!!

[Grayt Wyte]

..damn.. good shot boi..

Sincerely,
...The Grayt...

[The MC]

damn tim....u seem have become a very good topical head,u take this one easily cuz u had a better concept and complexity and flowed well...grayt did pretty good i just didnt like the structure and it could have been longer....so my vote goes to tim.
vote/tim....hit sig up plz wit honest vote thx -1-

[Incineratedrose]

of course Tim is a ill Topical head.. hes in MT

[The MC]

whats MT senses?

[Tim]

uppin leave links

[Skrollz]

this battle was one sided.... tim corleone took this wit ease... his was more creative.... much better vocab n multis..... his verse jus overall stronger


v/ tim corleone


CAN BOTH YALL VOTE ON THIRD_KING V/S SKROLLZ

[leaveitto_beaver]

iight tim.........nice battle seemz like you wreckin shop on the topical tip.....enjoyed the whole verse.......
9/10

grayte...........you need to spent more time on your vocab..content...and jus put more effort in your shit man seems as if you didnt even try..

1


votez on my battlez please i will return thte favor..............

[Tim]

done uppin 2

[I-Hova]

tim ur a good topical'st...u won this easily good shyt to grayt tho for ur first topical...umm yeh i peeped ur other shit in legends too very nice...yeh u win this for just much better flow and story..

sig my hit tim/v