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saturn
datzecho
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yo, I run rings around saturn, kill parents creatin orphans,
Hittin him so hard, I knocked him outta orbit//
Planitary alienment, Kill you off consignment,
I scribbled this verse faster than late class assignments//
Im fuckin with ya mentality,while lossin a few calories,
what ever possessed this youngin to try n battle me?//
I rip you kids with skills, punches, by all means,
I see your ASS, like you were wearin prince jeans.....//
saturns gay son, I know, your mommy told me,
She loves the new echo, but still blows the old me//
keyed in 7 min.
yo, I will extend deadline to mid night, ait man, take yo time.
Come On (echoe) Lets Play A Game Of Lyrical Toe Tag,
Put That Chump Ass Ryme Away I'll Let You Keep That.
I'm Hard Headed, I Fight Wars Dispite Morges,
Hittin You Up Like Im A Folk And Your A Vicelord.
We Aint Slow Down South,so Ask What Its About,
I'll Tell You,my City Moves Faster Than Your Sisters Mouth.
F**k Brooklyn And The Burrows, We Got Hoods,
Im Battling You And A Hurricane Right Now,and I Still Sound Good.
By The Way, My Mothers Dead, Dick Head,do You Get Head From A Ghost?
You Probly Have To,couse In Reality,women Could Be On Coke,dope,at The End Of Thier Rope,willin To Be Choked,sexualy Provoked,and Still Think Your Gross.
uppin for the easy win
uppin # 1 ...........................
You Got Spanked Twice Today.by Me, And Bad Enough The Git Ripped You Two!
spanked....lol. no, not really. You must not have read my verse.........uppin # 2 FOR THE EASY k.o.
i will return the fav, juz drop a link.
fair and honest please.
thanks #2
Are You Blind Or Is It You Cant See?or Maby Cant Pimp Game!i Know Thats Your Verse Dogg But Its Realy Was Not No Ali Swing!...............
uppin # 3, just to show this kid he lost.
wack opener
poor body
and finisher was good word play, but still noob.
uppin #3
and the votes will be returned, just leave the link.
datzecho not bad 4 7 mins gd 2 c some personnals, flow woz a little off but still overall ok.
Saturn, no personnals, punches were weak flow woz ok tho. u need 2 make ounches harder an include a couple a' personnals try readin profiles or diss on the sig
Vote/Datzecho
I'd appritiate if 1 of u hit this up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145600
ok dat took this easily cuz he had better personals...his opener made me laugh....saturn needs to elevate but he had good rhymes and flow keep at it even tho i think dat did slightly betTA......plz retrun the fava in my sig....
vote/darzecho
aye dazetcho is so loco i read his verse and almost got knockd 2 soho
man that batle was nice only thin that upset is that saturn played his cards so no remacth fo u youngin
saturn-wordplay good,structure excellent,pnches good,personals none that saw,all
over great
dazetcho-wordplay exellent,straucture superb,punches favored on ur side completely,personalls nice,all over excellent
v-dazetcho
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
thanks, uppin #4, and if you vote, leave a link, I will be sure to return with a fair vote in return, voting takes a while, so be patient.
datzecho took this do to better punches and personals. i liked that opener, also a nice structure and good wordplay. i also like that late class assignment line. saturn had an ok verse, try to go for hard hitting personals and work on ya structure a lil, and i liked saturn's closer but my vote goes to...
vote: datzecho
uppin # 5, last uppin from echo.
PLEASE, if you vote, poll vote. cause I see 4 echo votes explained, but 2 poll. DAMN THE 100 post rule......lol
vote, I will return the favor.
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