10 lines
regular rules
you set it up!
10 lines
regular rules
you set it up!
This Ho-flow's-whack... You aint winning this battle! b'll ¤Take out Rule's, Period¤ like ¤No Holds barred¤
You fighting-is-for nothing... Rule aint even hiding his whack skills; ¤Nose is new¤ and I aint mean ¤Reconstructive¤
I'm expect nothing but Slaps-missing...This bitch is Fucked.... He won't even get “a Poll, three??”........ now that would be ¤Thankgiving¤
a slag like this, how could This-Lad-Test ME...... Fall into suit..... You a loser.... my next Fucking Ho..... cuz Rule's nothing but ¤A brain teaser¤ like ¤A Hard Question¤
Now peep the cold-throb.....the psycholopathical and enthroned-one, Cuz I didn't post to beat You, I got one-liners that leave your existence living in “Awe Rule”... and don't mean “A BLOWJOB”
(..Fag, Sonned..)
Your truly,
BRAINSURGEON - the BEYONDER
This Ho-flow's-whack... You aint winning this battle! b'll ¤Take out Rule's, Period¤ like ¤No Holds barred¤
You fighting-is-for nothing... Rule aint even hiding his whack skills; [b]¤Nose is new¤ and I aint mean ¤Reconstructive¤
I'm expect nothing but Slaps-missing...This bitch is Fucked.... He won't even get “a Poll, three??”........ now that would be ¤Thanksgiving¤
A slag like this? how could This-Lad-Test ME...... Fall into suit..... You a loser.... my next Fucking Ho..... cuz Rule's nothing but ¤A brain teaser¤ like ¤A Hard Question¤
Now peep the [u]cold-throb[u/].....the psychopathical and enthroned-one, Cuz I didn't post to beat You, I got one-liners that'll leave your existence living in ¤Awe Rule¤... and don't mean ¤A BLOWJOB¤
(..Fag, Sonned..)
Your truly,
BRAINSURGEON - the BEYONDER
Since your rap sucks, operating on brains is the only way to attain fame.
Why are u wack? Only kid I know that puts his occupation as his name!
Step aside bitch, once I win, dont become another of my stalkers..
Kid can never land any of his punches, like facing handless boxers!
Write this line in bold, stands out more than your whole verse
Damn I think Im hurtin his feelings.. needa tissue? Check your purse.
Even if you threatened to kill me, ya wouldnt be charged w/ malice..
I'll have the voters leaning my way, like I wrote this in italic!
Thread titled Rule vs Brain, but what happened to the surgeon?..
I guess when you put the 2 together, the threat isnt urgent.
Brain surgeon took this shit easily had nice flow good punches overall good verse but take the ¤ shit outta ur structure and learn ur VB code cus its all fucked up theres no point using it really cus we can all c wat ur sayin
Rule
had some ok punches abit weak in some places ur personals were ok had nice flow and structurebut u dont win battles on dat shit kepp elevating tho
Vote=Brain Surgeon
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aye Vote fa Rule i couldnt tell where Brainsurgeons lines met and ended i didnt even know where 2 rhyme it but aye thats juss me maybe yall kno more about readin it.
Vote=Rule
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
brainsurgeon
I didnt even want to read your verse due to the wack structure.
People on RB like a verse with good structure and none of ¤ "" ~!@..... or streched bars.... your disses dont make sense or rhyme for that matter... horrible. Makes me sick to the stomach. (lol)
Rule.
your bars look streched, but other then that you easily killed this kid. I wish my battles were as easy as this. LOL actually I like a challenge. Anyways....
v/rule
QueenStyle
rulewon this....i cant vote so not
a big breakdown but he did merk
wtf is up with all this bolding etc
shits newbish and wack period...
rule came harder with punches etc...
is it eclapt?....neway good verse man
came a lil streched but nice.
pleaSEMAKE SURE YOU HIT THIS.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145726
THANKS
#2..
Plz vote people, when I get 100 posts ill visit your battle back and vote.
v/rule
reason-brainsurgeion wtf? the structure needs work..flow was terrible..and i dont think that your verse rhymed at all...makin your punches..really weak..elevate
rule..came alot better then brainsurgeon..flow was better..structure was good..
punches wasnt great but they connected and hit harder..work on creativity..
elavate
v/rule
better verse overall
RULE won this one, and here is why
Flowed better. made more sense. harder punchlines, and metaphores (yall got the italic, leanin line.....tower of pizza...lol) good shit son, good impact.
vote= rule.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146038
brain that was by far the worst structure and flow ive ever heard...ur punches were stretched and not understandable u prolly were tryin sumin new here but u coulda came alot harder...due to me not undertstanding nything u were sayin and not bcuz i didnt read it carefully rule gets my vote
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