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Thread: combi-nation

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    literally fck ur own face Wise Ways's Avatar
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    combi-nation

    theres a war in the world and forever it'll stay
    so blow out ya candles and wish for a better day
    pepper spray in the eyes if you stand for ya rights
    beaten down bloody, without a chance to fight
    hands are tied, shackled or whatever you call it
    the only idenity you have is green and in ya wallet
    fallen hopes are lying in wishing wells, waiting
    don't worry bout ya ticket to success cuz hell's paying
    the shells braking, people start to open their eyes
    and clear their throat and stop choking on lies
    broken with crys, the links to the chains shattered
    no more will we act like the shit they say matters
    brains scattered, thinking and moving at fast speeds
    cuz every little boy and girl in the world has needs
    that means we all must work together and fight
    each piece of lego's a part of building a better life
    but the lesser die, and the circle of life kicks in
    god's ansewering machine full, erything needs fixing
    i'm just mix and matching words to sing a rhyme
    but just remember he can only do one thing at a time

    voted on $pit's and Toke's

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    That Shit Cray Chris Black's Avatar
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    This was a nice little piece. I normally don't like pieces like this, that are more abstract and don't tell a concrete story, but you did it well. This was one of, if not the best OM I've read from you. Nice.

    ps. Lol @ "voted on $pit's and Toke's"
    I'm sure Credz will get what you meant.

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    literally fck ur own face Wise Ways's Avatar
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    LMAO .. i didn't realize i said that shit .. am i that tired?! damn.

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    lmfaorofl @ you saying voted on..
    lmao
    hahahha

    -dies-

    ok anyways,
    this was a decent piece, just a little too basic, rhyme scheme could've been better, and as Wicked said, it was abstract and didn't really have a solid story to it, which like him, I normally don't like.. you played it well though. Well done.

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    quit making fun of me!!!!!!!!! lol

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