10 lines
blind spit
due 24 hours
no hate no dr or crew votes
no feeding(just in case)
10 lines
blind spit
due 24 hours
no hate no dr or crew votes
no feeding(just in case)
kool shit...ima drop in a little bit..this my check
A'yo Look.....................
ure right about ya rap name,u are a tragik,
u prolly kiss pussy lips,ill call u pubic chapstick,
hot?dis hoes not,he got no personals like a robot,
tupac will leave mo holes in ya than ya damn sock,
23 year old man livin wit his mom,ya rhymes is poor,
ya verse is a lil house,ya front would touch ya backdoor,
he wants to battle vets to earn respect,maken me laugh,
im not even tryin in this verse and im merkin him fast,
ya like baloons,gettin popped more than a slut wit 50 cent,
even my weak punchlines left ya computer screen wit a dent,
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aiight check it.....
the mc?..bitch please..you suck dick fo free.
this hoe give more blows than a bruce lee movie.
u get fucked like a groupie,wearin a two piece.
your useless.. you get ripped like loose leaf.
lets face it,your flows basic..its not legit.
u couldnt win if u got tupac to ghost write ur shit.
your lyricly challenged,or is it mentally,its simple to see.
thats the meaning of THE MC, u sound lyricly crippled to me.
in your profile it ask to show your battle record,you said no.
look at ya style,it tells me why,you'd have the most losses in a row.
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for those of you that didnt get the fourth bar....the mc stands for mentally challenged.
and the third bar..he needs a ghost writer...tupacs dead (ghost) ha ha
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anyway good luck dawg
~1~
uppin 4 votes ...igot2 battles open need some votes to close..so i can move on...help a ni99a out..~1~
Uppin For Some Votes .. I Will Return Favors...can We Just Get The Votes Started On This Battle
uppin 1
uppin once again..how anybody supposed to get anywhere on this site if nobody votes
yo I felt both of these battles and I knew The MC didnt even try cuz I seen him do so much better...but he didnt need to...as u might already tell I am going with the MC because of the way he kept it short and simple...still popped da rookie like a pimple. lol j/p no hate to either...yall did good...vote on my battle in my sig
return da favor dawg.
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v/The Mc
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wwhhhaaattt...didnt understand that vote..but at least its a vote..good lookin anyway...i can vote on your shit but it wont let me do the pollvote...
aight we need some mo votes ...uppin so i can finish at leastone of my battles
uppin 2
uppin 3
yo,
aight for mc, ive seen some of your shit, and you didnt seem to be in this at all... all that aside you still kicked a legit rhyme with a good tempo and sceme to it.
tragic, your shit was good too with the jokes and punches. this may just be me, but its anoying as hell when people explain there lines. if we dont get it fuck it. i got it though, so no worries.
id vote with the pole but i dont got 100, but for what its worth
vote = tragic
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145377
Um dis was a week battle guys..
was alot of played, unoriginal punches especially this particulary bar
lets face it,your flows basic..its not legit.
u couldnt win if u got tupac to ghost write ur shit.
Both verse verses were weak some elevation is needed..but ive got to pick a winner outta this muddle.
Both equally as weak..T's were played..and Mc's were in effective..personals same story..Structure...Tragik do not leave your bars spaced out like that its look herbish and effects the flow..Mc's were ok..vocab both ok
Conclusion: Although theres nothing standing out from both verses..i think mc takes it with less played punches..better structure and flow
V/ Mc
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