Bush 2004

[AnOnoMuS]

Why everyone hatin on bush// shut the fuck up b4 i stick my timb in your tush// oh shit look, i'm bout to start an uproar// i went to iraq and scream "saddam stick it up yours" // what yall know bout communisim and poverty// all u anti- war fags are an american mockery// obviously, u dont know what u actually sayin// i guess we should take the attack on pearl harbor as "the japs were just playin"// we lost more people in the W.T.C.// cant u see, terorrism is real to u and me// i got a 3 year old son and i dont want him to die// these terrorists r still trying, even after the planes in the sky// so realize and let it penetrate in your head// if we dont fight this war, we better off dead.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[bLaZin_InfeRnoL]

Well, well, preach on, preach on....I like this piece cuz you tellin the TRUTH, ya flow a litte choppy but I caught it(try workin on that a little bit) not too bad...
Best line to me....
"obviously, u dont know what u actually sayin//
i guess we should take the attack on pearl harbor as "the japs were just playin"//"...
that was a mind opener.....

[AnOnoMuS]

Well, well, preach on, preach on....I like this piece cuz you tellin the TRUTH, ya flow a litte choppy but I caught it(try workin on that a little bit) not too bad...
Best line to me....
"obviously, u dont know what u actually sayin//
i guess we should take the attack on pearl harbor as "the japs were just playin"//"...
that was a mind opener.....

thanks, all opinions and advice r welcomed

[Bounce]

Well, I will be honest as always, this was technically shakey, a bit rushed in many areas, and all together not as impacting as such a peice could have been. I feel your message, as I share your views big time, but I can't critique your views here, just the package you pressented them in. I would put much more time and efort into such a drop, more so if you trying to reach someone withit, or standing your ground. I respectt he message much, and I too write on such truths. I just think this could have been structually, technicaly and emotonally better.
-B

[Endeva.]

well the title put me off before i started....

this sorta thing aint really interesting to me... sick of seeing this sorta thing on TV

also the layout sucks

basically this wasnt good.... work on it man... be creative

[Foreshadow]

The structure in this wasnt to good and I agree with most of the comments above..

[AnOnoMuS]

Well, I will be honest as always, this was technically shakey, a bit rushed in many areas, and all together not as impacting as such a peice could have been. I feel your message, as I share your views big time, but I can't critique your views here, just the package you pressented them in. I would put much more time and efort into such a drop, more so if you trying to reach someone withit, or standing your ground. I respectt he message much, and I too write on such truths. I just think this could have been structually, technicaly and emotonally better.
-B

i appreciate the good advice...

[Mistral]

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