the serpent's syndication

[DALC]

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Im the serpentine Cognition of devine apperition,
Antagonistic conception of pessimistic deception,
Characteristic perception of imagination is comprehension
contemplation of apprehension is the dimension: syndication
The vindication of pessimistic numerology so now contamination..
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The sumbmission of cogniton is inspiration to Damnation..
Personification of contamination is morality penetrated,
Reality instigated from personality insulated with demise Errupts.
Humans convise what corrupts and does exersise what obstructs.
I prophesise what disrupts the pattern of contemplation and spirit,
cannabalization is the lyric of mummification..I fear it...
I hear it,the depression,opression,and pocession of my mind,
compression has me confined and supression has me resigned,
Intertwined with phsycotic,hypnotic,errotic hallucinations I exist,
Emancipation is dismissed and exhilliration missed,now i consist of

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The apperition of premonition ellucidates my perserverence and hope,
In coherence with broke emotional conviction,contradiction invades,
A depiction cascades as eviction of escapades,my palisade crumbles,
My serenade stumbles and falls to the serpent of apprehension,
Begins to repent comprehension of jubilation,emasculation proceeds,
concentration bleeds and its coagulation feeds the imagination of pain.
orchestration of disdain engulfs my feeble stature....
In desperation i cry out,needing rapture...My bleeding begins to capture,
The dispature of dispondency insnairs my reality..my morallity..mentality..


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Serenades become the grenades and parades of perverse interpretation,
I traverse the ornamentation of diverse hallucination,im confused..lost..
Ammused,the hollocost of imagination becomes lubrication for evil,
Its incubation,the people so easily pocessed by corruption and lust..
Depressed,the destruction of trust is obstruction,i combust and wither..
Disgust the deliver of a robust shiver cascading through my mind..
No evading,whence confined..

[DALC]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...62#post1658362
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...63#post1658363
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id like feedback on this song,ill return the favor.

[DALC]

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[DALC]

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[Morphy]

too much vocab for my likes but you got the flow down... pretty nice

[DALC]

well im just intelegent.
Intenall rhymescheme my favorite style too.
anyways uppin

[DALC]

upppin

[StraighAce]

you had good vocab but i think you used it unnecesarily
and i think that threw ya flow off a bit
good multies

overall this was an aight drop i didnt like it too much
just because i felt you used vocab unnesseceraliy

[DALC]

well i felt i needed to use it.

[Tim]

yeah this was a good piece feelin had you approched all the shit to it flowed nice feeling the vocab and imegery keep spittin and doing ya thing homie stay up

[DALC]

thank you.

[DALC]

uppin

[Makkin]

I'm not tryna hate, but you shoulda at least found out the definition of some of the words before you used them, because a lot of it doesn't make sense unless they're some sort of complicated metaphors I don't understand. To me it looks as if you just used a large number of words without knowing their actually meaning, in an attempt to sound intelligent. I may be wrong, but that's how it appears to me.

[{UneeK}]

Makkin ^^^ your right.

Just because one uses vocab doesnt make one great. People get confused between using vocab in rap. Vocab in rap is making words intelligent enough to mix in with your subjects. And how many "ions"/"tions" did you use in ya verses lol that made me laugh. Anyways man, keep at it, and if your that intelligent, then you can come up with more creative and original stuff.

Keep practicing ma'man.