UrbanReelist (2-1) vs. Ambitious (2-2)

[SmokaJoka]

Rules.

^Read & Good Luck

Check Ins Due By Wednesday
Verses Due By Friday
Voting Ends Sunday

[Meks.]

check...go 16.... thas what im'a go.

i've voted on at least four, dont feel like lookin for links,
just take my word for it.

[Brother Blue Collar]

check wanna go 14???

[Meks.]

..16..

This was over before it started..I'll even pardon ya weak shit
cuz ur goin nowhere, like rb's most recent audio league stint
i'm bored of ya keys bitch, kids got a cold word an he holds it tight
shit to beat me..u better call Whoopie Goldberg & the Poltergiest!
u punch weak for an urban cat wit guns.....so it'll be hard to relate
I ripped limbs from his outter shell, & glued his fuckin arms to his face!
I left this kids mind bewildered......like where herds & fields is son
n Amb even pasture verse, while u were stuck on Urban Reelism
a duke of York, the type'a kid I'm scopin back far n shoot for sport
takin out in a distince quick, like broken track stars shoe support!
spoon or fork, don't delay this shit bitch pick ur death or doom...
I spit & ate'um..told him it was his turn & then he left the room!
hit ur mother in'er chest or womb.......seems wrong but sadly it's fair
cuz this herb branches and leaves, so I hadda make it a family affair
I put 14 lines'a shit on the scale, so I'm hopin this fag does doses
"King of Making Threads".......
............that lost it's credibility when you quoted Magnum Opus!

peace

[Brother Blue Collar]

my bad dog if i known you dropped i woulda drop yesterday as well, i'll try to drop tonite but i got my ss verse so it might not be till 2morrow

[Brother Blue Collar]

i might not post today because my internet is fucked, i'm posting from school and they check like every 2 mins so writing a verse is a no no


ambitious we agree on 14 so that is what i'm going

[Meks.]

^ u dont post by 12 ur too late, and i aint agree to shit, i went 16, obviously.

[Brother Blue Collar]

14 like we original agreed on

Now we all know that God’s Gift to man was freewill right??
Well I suggest ambitious starts writing in his 2nite
I mean you, ambitious I seriously doubt that
Look at this bastard’s old name technical he’s still whack
Claims his verses are a slugfest, this fool must be batty
Or crazy and thinks that he’s the gunman in his avy
Asshole trying to put new jersey on the damn map
And thanks to his former mayor he accomplished that
Now your ugly signature says can’t be un-wrapped
I know we all wish ya pops didn’t believe that
Duke agrees to go fourteen but then goes sixteen instead
He’s overcompensate something, that’s all in his head
Ya gone and ya time in the game is like any wayans
Career, a short, pain, and just a low down dirty shame


dont know when my internet will come back, but until then i'll try and post my lll jr verses at school

[Meks.]

uppn

[Jug.]

good battle..best of each verse

urban:
Asshole trying to put new jersey on the damn map
And thanks to his former mayor he accomplished that

Ambi:
a duke of York, the type'a kid I'm scopin back far n shoot for sport
takin out in a distince quick, like broken track stars shoe support!

Ambi-
good verse, punches were everywhere. flow
and structure were fine. consistency was
very good, creativite was straight.
shit you've improved a lot.

Urban:
1st time i read you shit, you were
aight. Punches were as consistent
or as hard. Flow and structure
were fine, might wanna make ya
lines a little longer..creativite was good
the map line was dope.
but you aint come consistent enough

vote- amb

[Meks.]

damn ppl be sleepin in jr, last week there was what like, 4 or 5 votes on my shit??

some threads have like, 20 replies already....start votin fuckers.

[God.]

Wow.. Ambitious ripped the shit outta UrbanReelist.

Simple as that. He just crushed you. Better punches, personals, cvoncepts, everything. Urban's shit seemed more like statements than actual punches.


Vote: Ambitious

[L.I.]

V/ Amb...

In my eyes he crushed his opponent...he had wordplay...witty punches...and hit harder...Urban had a couple okay concepts but his delivery wasnt good enough...so work on that and ur punches could get better...

[Meters]

Ambitious has been around forever...Urban Realist hasn't.

Which probably explained why one dropped concepts, verbage, and set-ups like he knew how to text and one dropped mostly amateur-ish shit. I'd break down but it's obvious what happened and there's not many places i can really help you guys here.

V-Ambitious

[Meks.]

coo,
uppn.