10-12 lines
House rules
Spit as soon as you can!
10-12 lines
House rules
Spit as soon as you can!
Bittersweet
check, i'll drop right after you, or wenever i get back home..
one. good luck
iight YES THIS IS AN INER-CREW BATTLE... But Its Just For Braggin Rights
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u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
peace.
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drop... 8th line should be
*for U its the wisest comment*
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
Ambitious
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
-wasnt feeling it
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
-nice
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
-decent
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for U thats the wisest comment!
-weak
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
-weak
Liquid Content
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
-nah
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
-decent
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
-nice
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
-wasnt feeling this
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
-nice closer
Ambitious... your verse was OK, your best line i thought was the bounty/liquid content line, i was feeling that. You had a good structure and flow, personals were OK, some punches though i thought just didnt attack him well enough and were weak.
LC... your verse was OK too, good structure and flow, i liked your rhyme scheme at the end of your lines, i thought your closer was the best line, personals were good and you stayed on topic.
V/LC for more consitant hitting punches and personals
Nice battle to the both of you...
...hit up my links in sig...
^ yea ok.
uppn.
ambitious
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
nice word play
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
nice
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
blah weak
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
emm..no
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
nice closer
liquid content
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
no man
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
okay
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
nice stuff
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
didnt ryme right
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
decent
this was a really close battle,both verses were okay,but im gonna say ambitious barely and i mean barely get this with better punches
v/ambitious
i agree this was a close battle.....ambi you and i will have to do this for a third time sometime and this time we will go all out
Uppin
amb...
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
decent
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
not too bad
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
lol nice
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
nah
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
lol
L..
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
nah
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
nah
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
nah
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
nah
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
nah
v/amb... better verse.
One word replies to each bar is not a valid vote. Vote gone. -Token
Last edited by Token; August 9th, 2004 at 01:19 PM
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
elwood your ufcking wack man.....do you not no how to read wordplay..... get the fuck outa here
should have put the post amount to vote at 600
then there would be no Herb votes
uppppp......
vote.
Ambitious - I liked your verse a lot, very nice. Every time someone uses a lot of multies on FL it's a newbie who doesn't know how to do it properly, but yours just added to the content and flow, not took away from it. The god line about liquid content was probably the best bar of this battle. The opener was really good too and most of this was decent, well done.
Liquid - Not a bad verse by any means, but not as hard hitting. He had the multies and flow going for him, but I think his punches were harder hitting anyway. The eliminitation ambitions line was good, but some of the others I didn't like like the AM line and i'm not sure if anarchy and fantasy rhyme.. eh, I guess they do, but not really and it wasn't a great punch anyway. Not bad at all, you had some good ideas in this, but they weren't as hard hitting as Ambitious so he takes this.
Vote - Ambitious
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