Incizion vs. ak-mixa

[InCizion.]

Ight peep game
No crew votes, no d/r votes blah blah
No biting, recycling, blah blah
5-7 bars (10-14 lines)
First to 5
3-0 and 4-1 is TKO
I'll drop after you sign in
Good luck

[ak-mixa]

checkin in................................................ ......................

[ak-mixa]

so if u da wordplay warrior and such an evil genius
then why say cum break my anus in with your penis
oh I see, ya changed your custom title to hi i'm new
I speak for my dick and nobody gives a fuck about u
Incizions I make are with lyrics and machetes to carve
I wordplay ya name and rip out ya stomach..so starve
it's hard to peep game with your eyes outta da sockets
cause I halfed ya vision range with ya pupils in my pockets
I was born in July da summer time to spit hot degrees
da month dis smoker gets high and gets burned by me
ya weak newb and can't damage with a punch at all
it' oil lube no dats nut and me whackin u wit my balls
^fuck a punch......I rather do all of the above wit nuts
leave ya user title from butts and don't get AIDS from cuts

[InCizion.]

*yawns*

I’m intrigued-to-be the-fiend-to-beat…you look fatigued-to-me/
You’re not just in over ya head, YOU’RE 20,000 LEAGUES UNDER-THE-SEA!/
You rising to the top? Well you’re under-me-see?/
You’re a blunder-to-me/
Your lungs must give you AWE-FULL (awful) lyrics cuz it’s a wonder-you-breathe/
I’m witty…while you on ya ass in ya guinea, stuck in the SIT-TEE (city)/
Did you crap on your verse? Cuz then its your ass-fault (asphault) for being shitty/
He thinks he’s superman…Well I’ll shed ya BLOOD in-a-fight/
You were better off no showing cuz I’m a CRIP-tonight (kryptonite)/
Like a long completion you’re far-done…bar-none/
You just ARE-SON (arson)…It’s obvious like I’m holding apparent-torches/
It’s clear you’re dead like transparent corpses/



.::The Onslaught Continues::.



Uppin for Votes

[InCizion.]

Let it be known I am not actually a crip or part of a gang LoL. And if you don't understand something in my verse...get your ass out of my thread.

[Foreshadow]

Ak-Mixa you had some played concepts in your verse which brought down the punch and made it pretty weak. Also you had a basic rhyme scheme and a bad structure to your verse.

Incizion you had some good concepts with alot of multies. But you also had some played lines in your verse. The only real problem I had with your verse was that you put - those between your multies which is real amature like and played. But you had some decent punchs.

Vote Incizion

Incizion had some better punchs in his verse and some okay concepts that werent as played as the ones Ak-Mixa had within his verse.

[InCizion.]

Yeah I know the Crip-tonight line was kinda played, but I tried to flip it differently. I wasn't really worried. Magnus Opus told me to use the -'s but I don't see why, it helps me organize things, it's not amateur. I appreciate the vote...good look.

1-0

still uppin

[InCizion.]

told me not to use*

where's the edit button? LoL

[Mephisto]

ur not allowed to edit but anyway

Punches - In
Wordplay - In
Multis - In
Creativity - In
Personals - In
Vote = Incizion

[InCizion.]

If the vote's acceptable...it's 2-0.
I don't want to edit my verse...I meant the post replying to Foreshadow's vote.


Still uppin

[InCizion.]

This is the last time I can up this...I'm glad I read the rules LoL.
Vote y'all

[freshouttaafrica]

insizion once again rippin it
vocabulary was on point
flow was crazy
punch lines cmon dawg the other dude had no chance

my vote goes for in

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic

[ak-mixa]

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