8 - 12 lines, due friday july 30th . .
this is my check in . . ill do 8 .
Cameronj86
Kevin Brown
8 - 12 lines, due friday july 30th . .
this is my check in . . ill do 8 .
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mmmkay cool... this is mah check in too... good luck
im done , go ahead and post , ill edit in my verse .
make it as soon as possible , i aint got forever .
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Kid, you wanted it twice, so step up and try an beat ya pops. .
Ill just kick back and hand seconds, like ya grandfather clock.
Get it, you cant compare, your first loss came in the L L L
Its funny now, after this you’re two thirds of the way there. .
Now don’t worry, I don’t expect you to understand all of this,
But let it be known, your popularity and name ended in `86
now help me kids, I don’t quite know if cam has wackly written,
or if the fact that imam win again, is cause my track is skippin. .
T-t-t-tik wins.
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sorry for the freepost but 10 lines is the minimum. if a mods see's this
he will most likely close or DQ the battle
"3) The minimum lines for a battle is 10 lines
If you drop less than 10 lines, your battle will be closed and you have wasted your time.
Penalty: Disqualification "
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Hey everyone check out my extremely clever signature.
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my extra line to ensure i win.
now dude, shit man, topple tik? kid at least you tried
cause you almost took the victory when i was disqualified. .
10 . . i win .
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Alright me and Tik's talked n here's my verse:
10 too much Tik? Haha, Guess it's time to merk you
Cuz u "gett-in second's after 8"...broken quicker than your curfew
"Fuck the poll-eh-tiks?" Frustrated? In topicals I'm sure ya super
Think about me n get's "lost" in his thoughts...
...guess he can tell the phuture
Stick to ya fantasy topicals scripts and don't get me riled
Or I'll captivate ya mind...
...just so ya imagination can't run wild
No bar needed, 1 line will get ya wet-up you fake internet thug
I put Brown behind bars on a set-up...
...like holding Whitney Houston's drugs
I'm "holding onto first," cuz i parried ya punches, face it
Now I'm really beatin ya swings at me on a regular bases
Kevin Brown - meh ur verse was pretty bad...half the shit was basically gay...the other half sucked...nothing in your verse appealed to me...flow was the only plus in it...sorry but elevate...
Cameronj - not much better but 1 or 2 decent bars...u really got lucky that he messed up on the lines cuz those punches were the only good ones....no wit form either of you which was disappointing...
Vote - Cameronj
Ummm...
Kevin Brown: Some of it didn't rhyme, and it was a weak drop regardless. I thought you coulda came a lot better, you didn't try hard here. Ur punches weren't witty, and ur wordplay wasn't good. Keep elevatin'.
cameronj86: Ummm... Ur verse was pretty witty, and i liked some fo the things you had tyo say. I didn't see dope lines here, but ur punches were stronger, and you took it cause of that. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: cameronj86
Kevin Brown= you verse wasn't the best...
you need to have more perso's... and wats with the second bar? It doesn't even rhyme man, owell but overall just try and land more punches!!! but still not a bad verse.
Cameronj86= I think you came wit the better verse, you had a better flow and more vocab, your punches landed harder!!! well done.
V// cameronj86
V/ Camron
for obvious reason .. he actually had some
ok punches that linked his personals well
Kevin i've seen better from you i think you
just lacked it in this battle because you
rushed your verse... at least thats what it looks like
to me .. anyways camron wins for an overall better
verse.
return the favor... then i will return to poll my vote... im sick of voting
on people battles and my shit still gets sleept on
even when i do leave a link.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139589
pz
Kevin Brown - I felt like you had some ideas for punches going for ya, but they didn't hit that hard really. The 86 attempted personal didn't really hit and the LLL one wasn't so great either. I love it when people use lots of personals, but if they don't hit hard it's no good. The closer was decent though.
Cam - Pretty nice verse you got here. Great flow going and some hard hitting punches. I really like the opener, playing on the fact he's a topical writer was good, I don't have much negative to say about your verse except the closer was kind of eh, but the Whitney Houston line before was pretty nice.
Vote - Cam
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