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your droping 1st
Good Luck!
mugsy
Efusive
10-20 lines
all rules apply
your droping 1st
Good Luck!
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i'll go first on this shit
cause at the end of this
i'm going to take a shit
so don't be mad cause my punch gone knock yo weak ass into your bitch
you must be a computer dork cause everytime you on gettin rippin shit
cause my flow is redicalous i might get kill on this shit
but i'm going to still rip even if i have to rip you bitch
cause i'm thinking in my mind for the last three line
should i rip this shit or should let you read between the lines
cause in yo mind you think mugsy is weak
but you want think that when i ova in sweep your hole street
in put yo efusive ass to sleep
LOL... Great verse ... one of the best i might say
Enjoy
Mug I felt bad ever since I saw your name up
Cuz you aint ever gonna beat me little bitch step ya game up
Your lines was weak you need more structrure to ya scripture
Ill flip ya, terrorist tactics bring more destruction to tha picture
We gonna need cruches for this limper, and a full body cast
This cats tryin to look hard to see through his irv gotti mask(think about it)
Ive been askin around, ya boy said you a bitch
Ill call you supermario and put your head to tha bricks
Im past ill so Im only commin at not even half skill
But thats still enough to have your little punk ass killed
Count ya friends and ya blessings but you aint be friending me
Sleep with one eye open, you just made an enemy
Mugsy: Wow...u spent ur first 7 lines glorificatin yaself...and then the last three self-glorificatin/talkin about wut other ppl think of you......you dont win that way......but u did have good flow....but ur structure looked wierd to me.....bad shit.
3/10.
Efusive: You came weak.....but why waste anything...u had real punches atleast...a steady flow...and a good structure......had hella more weak lines than most of ya verses, but like i said.....Why Try?
6/10...
v/efusive.......
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If you Die with the devils first kiss.then Look to the sky and Say This:
I live High in the essence of unbleviable Gods Hands
I love like roses and sink threw fingers just Like Sand
From Bein Satans Angel..To Hating The actional Clan
Tryin to Be heartless.........But thats not Being A Man
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mugsy - After you finish this rap your going to take a shit. I may not be a vet here, but I know that in battles you are supposed to take punches, not talk about when you are going to drop your shit in the toilet, that doesn't hurt your opponent at all. The rest of the time all you did was rhyme bitch and shit, elevate man, use more complex rhymes. Efusive's was a good example.
efusive - you fuckin fool, why'd you waste such a good verse on this loser. The super mario thing was hilarious, but I don't know if everyone will get it. the irv gotti mask line was a good one, the rest of yours was decent, easily enough to beat this cat as your punches hit pretty well, not to mention you had far better flow, wordplay, vocab, and everything.
Vote - Efusive
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mugsy- weak verse. i don't think it would even qualify as a verse. only 2 of your lines rhymed, your vocab was below weak, everything you said was played out, and you barely made sense.
Efusive- you had an ok flow, some nice punches, but nothing special. overall it was an ok verse and definately enough to rip mugsy apart.
vote- Obviously Efusive.
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like its hard to decide the winner. (er nope!)
Efusive took this by about a mile or so, mugsy just kept on repeating himself, and it wasn't like 'what a great line, lets repeat it!' it was like 'thats wack, but i got nowt else to say' like damn! Efusive had flow and structure at least, flowed smoothly..yeah, i'm done
vote - Efusive.
Def Poets
makkin man shit hot pic on ur sig !!!!!!!!! its ard makin up 50 characters man
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Efusive. Do not post in this battle again, or you'll be dq'd for upping more than 5 times.
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