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Thread: 'It's A Crazy World' The Realness

  1. July 28th, 2004, 10:30 PM #1
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    'It's A Crazy World' The Realness

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  2. July 28th, 2004, 10:51 PM #2
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    wow i give this 2 thumbs up.. i really enjoyed reading this peice
    it was simply amazing, infact it was soo amazing that i read it over again 2 times
    takes a great amount of effort to come up with something like this..
    as soon as i started to read it i right away got interested and in to it
    you had very good imigary which made me picture everything while i
    was reading it, which made it even more interesting to read. you were
    on point with ever line.. a great peice in my opinion you have a
    tromendous amount of talent Bio keep it up...if i was to rate this peice
    i would give it a 10/10 for the amount of detail and imigary and effort you
    put into it..

    Good Luck man..once again Great peice
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  3. July 28th, 2004, 10:58 PM #3
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    Thanks...for your input much appreciated...
    Trying to Hit everyones eyes....

    Peace
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  4. July 28th, 2004, 11:24 PM #4
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    This was a nice piece... I knew there was a reason i let you rep topic ill.... great emotion and a hella lot of imagery shit had me sucked the fuck in man.. I was reading and my AIM was going crazy and i was like nope they can wait till i finish reading this piece of mastery.. damn i ain't on your nuts or nothing bio but if you dropped like this more often i would be =) .. Thumbsup for this beatiful Open MIC IJL TOPICAL BITCHES>>>

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  5. July 28th, 2004, 11:49 PM #5
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    IJL Topical.. this is the prime reason why we're dope.. crazy shit here man.. imagery was off the page.. had me glued to your piece.. this must be the shit you were working hard on.. glad you took your time on it, 'cause it's ill.. emotion was great.. flow was for the most part on point.. watch the syllables.. that's the only complaint duke.. this shit was just fresh as hell.. keep doing shit like this.. make IJL prouder.. Pz.
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  6. July 29th, 2004, 12:24 AM #6
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    Wow, I'm impressed no doubt....this is the best OM you've done on RB thusfar...and honestly I think it should be at least in Hall Of Fame for this month...no doubt it was a good topic and I felt ALOT of the concepts you dropped....

    Best Line Of This Open Mic
    Quote Originally Posted by Bio*Chemist
    Ghetto heads live the real ish and actors wanna portray this
    Through the media now everyone feeling our ghetto explicit
    Conspiracy...? now ghetto heads kill , to mimic movie flicks.
    ^This right here caught me the most...it's so true...and it was just fucking straight up....


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    Multis - Very Good
    Flow - Very Good
    Concepts - Excellent
    Originality - Excellent
    Vocab - Good
    Imagery - Very Good
    Overall:
    Dope piece and it had alot of thought and great concepts in it....this definately deserves some type of recognition....and you have definately made me happy....=)


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  7. July 29th, 2004, 12:31 AM #7
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    Thanks for the props...
    definitely put a lot into this...

    truly appreciated...definitely..
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  8. July 29th, 2004, 06:16 AM #8
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    more people need to peep this its too good to be ingnored...
    all those views and only 4 gave feedback common now.
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  9. July 29th, 2004, 06:22 AM #9
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    nice imagery, flow was on point, good peice cause it came real. good message



    but it the end, it just wasnt lyrically fit.

    work on metas/wordplay/2 or 3 word multies, shit like that.


    i noticed RB has a poem style going on.....but eminem has songs with meaning yet still comes sick.

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  10. July 29th, 2004, 09:04 AM #10
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  11. July 29th, 2004, 10:58 AM #11
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    Bio i love u lol. Dope peice. Nomination material. Good flow throughout the whole thing with some decent multis. Good use of vocabulary. the concept was on point. nice idea for a topic and you went at it well. The imagery was very nice also. Good job fam. Ijl owns OM
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  12. July 29th, 2004, 11:59 AM #12
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    very very creative, great strucutre and wordplay, liked the topic, flowed the whole thing good, it was one of the best om's ive seen, def. nomination for Hall Of Fame

    10/10 2 thumbs up
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  13. July 29th, 2004, 12:00 PM #13
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    Crazy emotion and great imagery.. i was reading this and the whole time i was just like.... damn. this was amazing. the flow and everything is just right on point. Man.. just the flow and the multis were nice, and it was original. and the vocabulary was nice, and it had a good message. i dunno - other than that.. this is beyond words from me. i loved this.
    <center>RIP - 7.18.O2..7.19.O2..7.22.O2
    7.24.O4 ... 11.o8.o4
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  14. July 29th, 2004, 05:29 PM #14
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    Thanks for ya'll inputs....
    glad you loved it Ayngel...
    IJL...
    thanks peace..
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  15. August 1st, 2004, 01:46 PM #15
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    I believe this piece deserves way more input...
    read it's long but well worth the read uppin...
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