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Thread: Progression ft/SmokaJoka

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    rules foo face

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    he hit up em up don't close this........ just didn't post the link i guess =( .
    INSANE JOKA LYRICIST

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    quality is good
    chorus is cool
    lyrics are nice
    not feelin the frist guys voice tho


    overall i liked it

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    ....Damn Lyric..you done MUCH better than your last audio.....nice work...

    oh btw...

    All the verses = Lyric
    Chorus/Hook = Me

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    yeah.........
    .. im back

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    not bad...u both u should enunciate ur words more better

    u both feel off alil

    but dope ish guyz
    Ya Dig?!

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    Decent cut here.. beat is dope.. Flow and delivery were aiit.. pretty much on point.. the hook is straight...qaulity sounds pretty good too.. Not bad at all.. keep doin u.. 1

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    Thanks man...this is my first real audio..so..eventually I'll get better
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    Damn Lyric, wow.. im impressed with this... Real impressed.

    You showed me the lyrics awhile back, those were dope. Didn't know you'd make em sound as good as you did. I knew you'd do well, but this was really nice. The beat was hott as well, goodjob with that. Smoka nice on the chorus as well, I was feeling that too. I pretty much liked everything about it, keep up.. do more.. so I can hear more. lata bro. Again, very nice audio.
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    Beat was ok, but I didn't like it that much.

    Lyric - Flow was good. Emotion was ok. Deliverance and presence was good. Lyrics were nice. Not bad for having to write three verses. Nice work.

    Smoka - Congrats on coming back man. I was praying for you. Anyways, hook was tight. Nice shit man. Wasn't really catchy though. But nice none-the-less.

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    beat = wack

    first dude, wow, not on beat, no type of flow watsoever...
    you are tripping over your immensly obese tongue too much
    please chill and write to this beat, dont just write lyrics and
    then try to flow them to this beat...

    ehh... keep droppin youll get better


    hook = this is ok i guess, i aint feeling it though

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    New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz

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    this was pretty good yo, i like it despite wat other's say, this was good, i dunno i like the, don't see the problem with it emerge..well gj guyz....1
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