Ralkavelli vs Biggie fan
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Ralkavelli spits first
Ralkavelli
biggiefan
Ralkavelli vs Biggie fan
10 lines
due any time tomorrow
no recylcing
no feeding
no d/r
no crew votes
Ralkavelli spits first
yo, ima hafta spit first cos im goin to my cousin's for a few days. i know its due in for tomorrow but i promised i'd battle you. I know i'm gonna get Disqualified but hey, thats life.Originally Posted by biggiefan
Of all the names you chose Ralkavelli
you're just a fake impersonation just like mini vanilli
come on man call me son again
stop going on about it like its a fucking trend
you can't handle the beast i release
i'll leave you messed up on a stretch bed and decapitated for weeks
don't you understand
with you ribs sticking out like a xylophone i can make a dope jam
hit me with all your punchlines
i know if i'm upset i can arrange to meet your mama anytime
yo ralkavelli, best o luck man i gotta break out so i'll see you in a few days. i understand i'm disqualified aswell but thanks for the battle, holla.
check it, yo yo...
Try'in to beat a weight, is this bitches inner wish
But It's hard, when all this retard spits is jibberish
I read your other shit, it made my eyes start to wobble
Cause I've seen bigger words, on a board while playin boggle
No one even knows you, thought by now you would of fled
Your profiles blanker, than the blanks you shoot in bed
Biggest interest is incest, 'least I think that is the plan
This guy ain't a rapper, just a mother fucken fan
So go and see your cousin, get a dozen gummers from her
Youll get sloppy seconds, Cause I fucked her with no rubber
Biggie fan -
Of all the names you chose Ralkavelli
you're just a fake impersonation just like mini vanilli
played
come on man call me son again
stop going on about it like its a fucking trend
No punch pretty weak
you can't handle the beast i release
i'll leave you messed up on a stretch bed and decapitated for weeks
nah
don't you understand
with you ribs sticking out like a xylophone i can make a dope jam
didn't rhyme....coulda worded it better to be aight
hit me with all your punchlines
i know if i'm upset i can arrange to meet your mama anytime
nah homie weak closer
Ralkavelli -
Try'in to beat a weight, is this bitches inner wish
But It's hard, when all this retard spits is jibberish
Played
I read your other shit, it made my eyes start to wobble
Cause I've seen bigger words, on a board while playin boggle
nah
No one even knows you, thought by now you would of fled
Your profiles blanker, than the blanks you shoot in bed
decent
Biggest interest is incest, 'least I think that is the plan
This guy ain't a rapper, just a mother fucken fan
nah
So go and see your cousin, get a dozen gummers from her
Youll get sloppy seconds, Cause I fucked her with no rubber
weak closer
overall: weak battle....biggie hopefully just rushed through his verse...cause nothing was good about it....ralkavelli...had a decent line in there but still a below par verse...but imma give it to ralkavelli because he attempted a punch and had atleast one that was decent..
v-ralkavelli
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"Makin fatties pop shit"
battle was one sided I was really feelin ralks verse!!!!!!!!!!
v/Ralk
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138120
yo bigie fan u just got skooled and lyrikly fukt with dogg......
ralkevali nice 1 yoll you got some nice punches and rymes up in this one............ you took this 1 hands down .....
vote / ralkevalli
uppin 1........................lets get some votes here plz...
Lyrical Violatin... you put your our crew name to use! LoL Another merking. Though this one wasn't as "elite" as the the one against Defendant205. Don't ever leave us man! Props to ya
Uppin 2.........................................Vote ppl!!!!
yo dont waste ur uppins, well do it
biggie fan-ya verse was weak. Ya flow and structure was very weak too. Improve on that. Ya punches was very corny and plain, they didnt hit at all. Personals was wack too you only had a few and they were not very affective. Please up ya vocabulary and use more multis.
ralkavelli- ya verse was weak, but i think it was betta than his. Ya flow and structure was betta than his but it still wasnt that good either. improve on vocabulary. PUnches were weak, just not that special or good though. No personals was in this verse. Both of you guys verses was just to elementary but i think u had the betta verse overall.
v/ralkavelli
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Ralk my boy you got this one! Props to ya! Violatin strong.
Damn this was one sided and Biggiefan it's millie vinillie not mini. But ralk came better with harder punches.
This was pretty one-sided... yeah
biggiefan - From the first line I knew your verse would be wack.
"Of all the names you chose Ralkavelli
you're just a fake impersonation just like mini vanilli"
What the hell does that mean? Maybe I don't know what mini vanilli is and I'm missing something, but even if I am this is still a lame line. The rest of your lines had poor flow, no structure, and weren't even witty. The only line i liked was
"with you ribs sticking out like a xylophone i can make a dope jam", but you had an extremely poor leadin with "you don't understand" which just didn't work.
Ralkavelli - I liked your verse. Some creative lines, good structure, good flow, and was easily enough. This part below was really all you needed to win this.
Try'in to beat a weight, is this bitches inner wish
But It's hard, when all this retard spits is jibberish
I read your other shit, it made my eyes start to wobble
Cause I've seen bigger words, on a board while playin boggle
Haha, very personal and very true
Vote - Ralkavelli
P.S. Ralkavelli you left comments on my battle before you could vote.... would you please return the favor now that your not a newb no more
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