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    tittle: To someone special IM NEW

    http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=DaSuperDude
    www.xanga.com/terrelinator

    im jared and my friend terrell who is a member here got me into this shyt, well we did a piece called To someone special well here it is.. feedback truth..dont fib ..Tha Kid and T3RR3LL presents ..


    Tittle: To *someone* Special
    Artists: Jared Janes & Terrell Canute

    [Intro] {Terrell Canute}

    this song, is for..... that special someone, you know who you are

    [Verse 1] {Terrell Canute}

    Now since the first time I saw you, I knew it had to be
    just you and me, holdin hands, makin plans, to see a movie
    We could share each others thoughts, dreams, and fantasies
    You can tell me anything, and not even have to worry
    I wont do anything to hurt you because you'd be my girl
    Just me and you - know how we do
    We can take on the w-u-rld, We can make it through together
    just let our love un-furl-, And we don't have to move fast
    we can go slow as a turtle. We been good friends
    but for a while it seems, Your all I ever think about
    when im awake, and in my dreams
    We both had our bad times, even shared some sad times
    But glad times, is what it reminds me, of what could be.


    [Chores x 1]

    If there's one thing u should know, know this
    I love tha way u act, smile, laugh, walk, talk ~infact~
    U drive me wiled, Everytime u come'around ~its bliss~
    If there's one thing u should know, know that..
    Id take a bullet 4 u, always treat ya good nvr ~lie~
    And b a shoulder u can "cry" on, n thats a fact..
    To some one special i dedicate this to, and if its u
    Then now u know, All tha feelings i have ~in store~

    [Verse 2] {jared janes}

    i dedicate this to someone special... ya know who ya are..

    Girl, ya don't know how much u make me smile
    And ur always on my mind, known ya now 4 a while
    And id walk "miles" just to see ur pretty face
    Cross Mountians in my way just to c u "anyday"
    It's true, these feelings that i have for you
    Felt um b/4, but not like this N baby..thats tha truth
    When u walk past me, i lose my mind n my knees go weak
    When u start to talk, i dont know what to say..thats just me..
    Altho i *heart* u tho, its much more then that ~
    it's, the way u move it's, the way u sooth
    it's, who u are, that i take in and consume
    it's, the way u make me laugh
    it's, "u" tha reason for everything, and im so glad!
    U make me bust out these rap's
    Make punches then call um "love taps"
    just for you, "to someone special" i dedicate this to
    And i miss u right now, so much u just dont know how bad it hurts..
    Being single sucks, but even more when u know u can't have her...yeah
    But, i will always feel this way, whenever u decide to change ur mind
    U bring "life" when i write, "light" so i can shine
    Now all i need is u by my side, for me to hold u tight
    From u being cold, or feeling all lone at night when it strolls by
    "ur tha Very reason i have these many feelings
    For u so it's E-Z to c that i need u to b mine...
    Or at least know that i'll always be there
    For you and care, anytime anywhere
    U need a shoulder to cry on, Or some advice
    I'll give, Then u'd be square, N'd id be happy
    "Just Want To Make u Happy" thats it...

    [Chores x 1]

    If there's one thing u should know, know this
    I love tha way u act, smile, laugh, walk, talk ~infact~
    U drive me wiled, Everytime u come'around ~its bliss~
    If there's one thing u should know, know that..
    Id take a bullet 4 u, always treat ya good nvr ~lie~
    And b a shoulder u can "cry" on, n thats a fact..
    To some one special i dedicate this to, and if its u
    Then now u know, All tha feelings i have ~in store~

    {Terrell Canute} [verse 3]
    hey girl can we kick it for a minute,
    can't you tell - by the look
    in my eye - that im serious
    It aint mysterious, you just got me delirious
    wishin I could be the one, who you spend your time with
    and just one kiss, on my birthday
    would be my favorite gift
    I wanna know everything about you, like i was psychic
    I wanna know your favorite color, number, and letter
    I wanna know if you like cereal crunchy or wetter
    better yet, what do you like, for breakfast lunch and dinner
    and I'll make it-, I'll even make some hot chocolate in the winter
    for us to sip- and in the summer time
    we can go to your house or mine
    get a tattoo of your name, for my design
    to define, how much I love you
    and no matter how much it'll hurt
    it wont matter cause you'd be with me, and everyone
    would see, how special you are to me

    .......you really are special

    [Chores x 1]

    If there's one thing u should know, know this
    I love tha way u act, smile, laugh, walk, talk ~infact~
    U drive me wiled, Everytime u come'around ~its bliss~
    If there's one thing u should know, know that..
    Id take a bullet 4 u, always treat ya good nvr ~lie~
    And b a shoulder u can "cry" on, n thats a fact..
    To some one special i dedicate this to, and if its u
    Then now u know, All tha feelings i have ~in store~

    [Verse 4]
    Jared Janes

    I can Envision us, Goin so F-ar
    For u, there'll always b a place in "My" H-eart
    It's true, & i belive there'll b many "better dayz" to c-ome
    I can see us going places, Havin so much f-un
    Like at tha moviez or in my Jacuzzie aka hot t-ub
    Go for a walk, watch tha sun set
    All this time i need to say something
    But let's face it i havn't done it yet
    I know, but do "u" know how i feel
    I feel, but can "u" feel, it's so real
    Maybe all this is a lil to much
    For u to take in, it's ok i understand
    Like how i wanna be ur man, and us hold hands
    Take u & Git u ~whatever~ ur heart desires
    Be tha man of ur Dreamz, not some "jerk lier"
    But what ever's clever "Remember"
    And i hope one day will be together
    If not soon, maybe somewhere down tha line
    If not that just know this,ur my motivation i use
    When i write, ur on my mind so i can rhyme
    I dedicate this to someone special, u know who u iz
    If not then it's prolly none of ur bizz

    ..YEAH... the end..will be back..


    [Chores x 3]

    If there's one thing u should know, know this
    I love tha way u act, smile, laugh, walk, talk ~infact~
    U drive me wiled, Everytime u come'around ~its bliss~
    If there's one thing u should know, know that..
    Id take a bullet 4 u, always treat ya good nvr ~lie~
    And b a shoulder u can "cry" on, n thats a fact..
    To some one special i dedicate this to, and if its u
    Then now u know, All tha feelings i have ~in store~

    By Terrell Canute & Jared Janes

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...8&page=9&pp=15

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...83#post1562983
    Last edited by Tha Kid; July 21st, 2004 at 11:14 AM

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    alot of it dint rhyme and the flow is worse then it actually looks
    but good concpet
    do not play me

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    I wont do anything to hurt you because you'd be my girl
    Just me and you - know how we do
    We can take on the w-u-rld, We can make it through together
    just let our love un-furl-, And we don't have to move fast
    we can go slow as a turtle. We been good friends
    but for a while it seems, Your all I ever think about

    when im awake, and in my dreams
    We both had our bad times, even shared some sad times
    But glad times, is what it reminds me, of what could be.

    all did not rhyme

    f not soon, maybe somewhere down tha line
    If not that just know this,ur my motivation i use
    When i write, ur on my mind so i can rhyme


    f there's one thing u should know, know this
    I love tha way u act, smile, laugh, walk, talk ~infact~
    U drive me wiled, Everytime u come'around ~its bliss~
    If there's one thing u should know, know that..
    Id take a bullet 4 u, always treat ya good nvr ~lie~
    And b a shoulder u can "cry" on, n thats a fact..
    To some one special i dedicate this to, and if its u
    Then now u know, All tha feelings i have ~in store~

    this was a weird ryhem scheme, not a rap ryhem scheme


    hey girl can we kick it for a minute,
    can't you tell - by the look
    in my eye - that im serious


    It aint mysterious, you just got me delirious
    wishin I could be the one, who you spend your time with
    and just one kiss, on my birthday
    would be my favorite gift
    I wanna know everything about you, like i was psychic


    U need a shoulder to cry on, Or some advice
    I'll give, Then u'd be square, N'd id be happy
    "Just Want To Make u Happy" thats it...


    there is more, but.........

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    sup, thanks fo' tha comments, yea i kno i sux, im new at diss rhymin shit, but my boi and i wanted 2 do somethin special for 2 girl's they like it, so itz all good

    lol, i'll get betta at this rhymin shit, lol

    thanks fo' tha comments tho Fa'REalz

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    alrighy Credz.. i got'cha they up there.

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