10 - 12 lines
no crew d/r votes or any form of return favour votes e.t.c...
20 mins to spit..
I go first.
rapchar
FanTa ZeE
10 - 12 lines
no crew d/r votes or any form of return favour votes e.t.c...
20 mins to spit..
I go first.
Def Poets
ORIGINALLY POSTED BY FANTAZEE
10 - 12 lines
no crew d/r votes or any form of return favour votes e.t.c...
20 mins to spit..
I go first.
K I HAVE ONE QUESTION ARE YOU SAYIN THAT WHOEVER VOTES ON THIS, THAT THE FAVOR WILL NOT BE RETURNED.....AND YOU WILL NOT GO PUT IN YOUR HONEST VOTE IN ANYONES BATTLE THAT PUTS IN THEIR HONEST VOTES IN THIS BATTLE....IS THAT WHAT THOSE RULES MEAN..OR DID I MISUNDERSTAND THAT
The lyrical Picasso has once again returned to RB,
Equipped with an eviction notice ready for this wannabe,
Like a hedgehog under headlights, he shakes at the knees,
As FanTa throws up on the mic like I got some disease!
Look at me! Got ressurected ten times better!
I finalised rapchurs suicide before he'd keyed in a letter!
Like I know he'll regurgetate every word that I spit,
He talks out his arse, I'll guarentee that he ain't got 'shit'
Epileptic fits, submit my verse he's headfirst to the ground,
Super'sonic' rhymin and I'll give him the 'runaround'
Makes no sound as he chokes 'through the wires'
ZeE's well worded vomit fully extinguished his fires.
Def Poets
it meant that this doesn't happen...
'Thanks for voting for me, lets make a deal, I'll vote for you even though its clear your verse is wacker...'
just making sure it don't turn to favour votes thats all, works both ways..fair voting, honesty is what goes!
Def Poets
kk i got you girl thanks alot...........................
hey bitch, how did you come out wit that name fantazee,
you don't belong here you should return to dat spelling bee,
to learn how to spell my name properly,
yeah i may be a hedgehog, but at the sametime im super sonic,
i think you are to, your head jobs are helpful and chronic,
when i get on tha mic i spit till my lips split,
when you get onto the keyboard all 'dat you talk is shit,
you keep throwin all these hits but you cant land a punch,
you must be one of those sissy bitches from the brady bunch,
after i win this battle, im gonna do a little dance,
oh and i won't be goin headfirst to the ground,i'll be going to your pants.
sorry about usin tha word supersonic....i only just noticed you used it
really sorry
F- your verse was really good..this is the first of shit that i have read from you but i enjoyed readin it.your flow was actually real good, and your structure build up was great......punches and personals..were like *slap* knocked his ass out lol..good job
R-k you have ellevated man you are gettin better bro just keep it up, however you still didnt come strong enough to beat Fantazee your flow and structure was ok man..it fell off in some places...your punches were lame...and your personals were there but not much..
V/Fantazee for comin with a better verse
return the favor and hit up a battle in my sig
thanks for the vote, hey rapchur, i read one of your battles that was closed from a while ago and you have really elevated since then, just thought i'd tell ya to keep it up!
Def Poets
fanta - i liked ur drop cuz u was steddy shittin on em, u kept it on em structure was strong and good good personals,multis, n punches
rapchar - ur drop was coo i mean u let her know as a female were u stand n ur structure was kinda choppy but wasnt too bad i'd liked ur last line it was a good way to end ur rhyme
im sorry i dont have enough post but if i was to vote it would be fanta but remember my vote dont count....jus lettin yall know wat i think
thanks G
Lets crank it up a notch! uppin this my homies!
Def Poets
well didnt think this was the strongest battle... fanta, your verse was ok, didnt think your opening 2 bars really hit very hard... the wordplay wasnt bad... and from afte rthe second bar the punches got a bit better....
rapchar, your verse again was ok... opener was like eh... the 'head job', didnt really connect... same with the 'get on the mic' bar... i thought your strongest bat was the closer...
... over all for coming with better consistancy, and a couple slightly better punches... vote/fanta
rapchar, if you had put another couple of punches, more like your last bar, you could have taken this
[youtube]99ns8n2S40g[/youtube]
i enjoyed readin this battle, i thought fanta had a good verse, with good punches and nice flow.
rap, i thought you had a good verse, but your punches didnt hit as hard as fanta's did.
v/fanta for harder hitting punches.
Rapchar came way too basic. Fanta was the total opposite. thats should be enuff to say who got this. Fanta jus came harder with punches, but you both had flow and structure down. not bad, rapchar you really need to step up your game a little. nice job on that though Fanta. add some personals though.
vote-Fanta
peace
Fanta ur verse was good your punches landed him right in the face.
Rap your verse was good but your punches wre like Gary Coleman fuckin Halle Berry they wasnt hittin the spot.
vic./Fante
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
IT'S HARD TO DODGE BULLETS IF YOU AIN'T IN THE MATRIX
Posting Rules
