Shedding Light Onto My Shadow

[Frozen Flayme]

JUST LIKE A BLAST FROM THE PAST WHAT WAS EXPECTED CAME AT LAST, EXCEPT FOR THE PROBLEM IT HAPPENED WAY TO FAST, A GUN WAS BROUGHT DO TO ANGER AND HATRED, AND FOR MY MISTAKES ITS YOU WHO'S LAYING DEAD, MEMORIES FLASH IN MY HEAD AS I REMEBER WHAT YOU SAID, "please dont go" IS WHAT YOU PLED, AS "everything will be allright" WAS THE COMFORT THAT I FEED, IT WAS A FIGHT WE KNEW WAS COMING BUT MY PRIDE GOT IN THE WAY, AND I THOUGHT THAT IT AS NOTHING LIVING BY MY GUN WAS HOW I'D PAY, WHO KNEW A LIFE THAT MENT SO MUCH WAS THE ONE I COULDN'T SAVE, EVEN IF THE BULLETS CAME FROM HIM IT WAS I WHO TOOK THE BLAME, NOW IN BED IS WHERE I LAY, ALONE, JUST WAITING FOR THE DAY, I HOPE WE'LL MEET UP AT THE GATES, TILL THEN FOREVER YOU'LL BE MY MATE...I LOVE YOU.


ON A PERSONAL NOTE I LOVED AND ALWAYS WILL BELINDA DECKER 3-25-85 TO 5-18-02

[synickle]

YO DAT WAS SERIOUS SON. wait till u read my shyt about suicidal tendencies. keep spitin da real. uno

[Full Circle]

whats up with all the caps?

this was alright and deep for the fact that its someone you know and it sucks when you take the blame/bullet
and deal with everything that could happen after especially
if doing certain things in situations are completely out of your
character...this flow was okay

[danja]

i could see wher u were comin from although not ur best, caps made it hard to read. overall though a good piece keep it cumin