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you spit first
10 lines
no d/r or crew votes
you spit first
Ayo, Look at this newbie challenging me like hes the best/
he must have seen my 0-3 record, to bad they all came from vets/
so let me lyrically deteriorate this fagget from the inside out/
he thought he had an easy first battle but I think he took the wrong route/
and here learn from my mistakes, elevate ur game before you try to make a name/
you only got one post and frankly its kinda lame/
you have no flow at all and ur rhyming is wack/
this guy probably doesn't even know he's being lyrically attacked/
well my shit was probably wack so it won't go down in history/
but before my verse is over, ummm thanks for my first victory/
so, u think u gonna get your first victory u better think again/
im bein lyrically attacked but yo shit was wack and im bout to go all out u aint gettin no slack/
i got one post thats wack but now im back to drop bombs on yo bitch ass/
imm gonna elavate my game right now cuz my flow is sick/
im flowing wicked while driven down yo block clownin on ya/
u say u from cali like u down just like yo man pac/
i hope u aint from the east like pac and throw up west side u fake ass wanna be/
u ryming like u from the dirrty south u aint the realist/
my flows are the illist and i just smashed on yo bitch ass/
now i going out like we just threw u a birthday bash for yo fourth loss?
wack this guy can't be serious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote pleezzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG LMAO
Poetic- you ellevatin man..but u need to take in the feed that everyone is givin you, you got to at least try and spit better, man in this verse i can say your structure and your rhymes were ok but thats about all
H- your shit was way way way way wack man, half your shit didnt rhyme, your opener fuckin sucked, and your closer was worded terrible...dude you got alot of shit you need to improve on
v/ poetic
poetic...structue could have been better...you had metas made the flow better...
punches were weak...personals...didnt see any..work on wordplay and vocab
..keep elavating...
hotwheelz...punches were really weak...strucutre needs help..flow was off because
some of your lines didnt rhyme...work on strucutre and flow...and wordplay and vocab
elevate....
v/poetic
harder punches
Thanx for ur input and keep voting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vote pleez thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep voting please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
poetik u took this 1 ... it wasnt the tightest drop i ever seen but it was good enough to take the win
hot wheels .. wak wak wak wak wak
uppin for votes...................................vote pleezzzzzz!!!!!!!
come vote on gizzard vs stubby
Shockacru VBC....
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don't you love how people vote threw hate thats why your battle record makes no difference win loose draw it dosn't matter really
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^^^^^faget don't hate on me cuz stubby smashed on you!!!!!!!!! uppin for votes
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