10 lines on each opponent
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Good luck
God & Daedal
STUBBY & _Ralkavelli
10 lines on each opponent
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Good luck
Checkin' in this... I'll write ur euology, STUBBY. And your's too, _Ralkavelli_.
Check..1..2..Check..1..2
In.
and you guys r fucked...
lyrical violaters?...r u kidding me?...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Word.
checkin in, and who cares if we lose man, shit im just droppin to get better, and to shut you and daedal up........................
Aight, check it...
STUBBY? It's creative of you the way your name fits your career
Cause it's short, pathetic, flimsy and I'm sure it will soon disappear!
He got a 17-14 record? That's horrible, son, but it's nothin' new
Talks shit bout how he can beat me but got voted out my crew!
STUBBY used to PM me askin' if I couyld please help him elevate
I pulled him through to his 31st battle and yet still he's 2nd rate!
Started a crew with all herbs, but hey, I made the same mistake
In recruitin' u. This is your party? Well, bitch, I'm eatin' your cake
STUBBY's tryin' to grow taller, but he can't, he's under my feet
And STUBBS is the result of RB merging the slightly Elevated w/ Elite
Later
Aight, check it...
_Ralkavelli_, you just suck son, I mean Stubby recruited ya so it's a fact
Got banned once & ran into the Lyrical Violaters, in time to get smacked
I would help eliminate the crap from ur verse, but then it would be gone
So instead I'll crush your dreams with the endless punches in this song
You suck, kid, and to think I used to say newbies showed promise here
Daedal told me he wanted to crush an ant so I invited him, but don't fear
You'll be done long before Daedal brings the fight to your doorstep, son
If I thought ya'll were a cahllenge, I would have dropped a decent one
And it must be admitted that I pretty much came like crap w/ bad wordplay
But in reality, my half-assed verses will win this, more than you can say
Later
*If you don't know I wasn't tryin' here, than you should be shot. Shit's not worth the effort, and I wanna hurry so I can go see Ancorman.*
God
This stupid ass bitch called out my entire crew
and it all went through
By the end this weak ass bitch only took on two
Set it up, startin with the worst endin with the best
for you thats the test
Cause you already fuckin denied taking on all the rest
He's dissin on my crew, because "God" thinks he's tight
something aignt right
Its polled God & Rascal,but Rascal ducked out in fright
So God went and got Daedal to take his co-leaders place
That right there is a disgrace
He kicked me out of his crew, but its him that I embraced
Man God when you kicked my ass out, shit i didnt even care
Dont be in despair
I was glad to be out of your crew, cause there's nothin there
Daedal
This fool keeps talkin shit cause he thinks hes got game
Look at his name, hes a pussy without- shit to proclaim
This fool had the balls to come on RB with the name Daedal
That shits suicidal, your wacker than Hung from American Idol
You tellin peeps that you merked me, but really i just go DQ'd
And i think he knew, hes a little baby so PEEKA BOO i see you
And something worse hes in Pandora's Box, no wonder he sucks
That crews a wack deluxe, all of your mother fuckin wins were luck
You got yourself into this battle man, you said that you can hang
boom boom bang, you will lose so bad even merked would be slang
Battle
Sorry it took me so long to spit, but i was at work, so here it is.
P.S. Were gunna K.O. you bitches!
God:
Yo, Why's this fucker think that he can defeat me?
you can't beat me, I been Rappin since B.C.*
My name is Ralkavelli, I'ma lyrical surgeon
Did God have a wife? Naw, hes always been a virgin
I'm urgin you to make me start, to rip ya chest apart
digest ya heart, an cut up every body part
In the name of the father, the son,and the holy fuckin spirits
The almighty God's gettin worked,and merked through my lyrics
So try an battle me, and give it everything you got
Let the smiting commence because I sense you'll need a lot.
Daedal:
Why should I rhyme, or waste my time on Daedal
Don't whine cause it's a crime,when my lyrics get fatal
I hear he likes it anal, but can't tell cause he's a fraud
While im sittin here bustin,hes busy thrustin it wit God
you say your spittin ill, but ima kill, you know i mean this
That avatars your favourite, cause it looks like God's penis
you see this? your losing and I'm spoiling your plans
Cause your punches are thrown, like a boxer wit broken hands
Lyrically Violating Ya'll, like a mad cow disease
The crowd will freeze, when we annihilate these wannabe's
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice drops ralk lol, now we are just waitin on Daedal
hey yo its like officially Sunday here lol, where are you at Daedal, your verse is due on Saturday remember lol
ehh..y waste time on these faggots?...half ass shit...
STUBBY
its my turn b...i cant believe ur actually battling...me and God just burn gs
but y does stub battle in front lines...
...he couldn't even pass the first round of the tourney!
u can learn from me bitch...ur wack...thats the reason ima give u brusing
even in his check in stub talks shit...
...but before that he already made an excuse for losing!
u had bad choosing...acceptin me and God in this...hoe, ur gonna get left
cause everyone knows l.v. is wack...
...they only get an audience cause they rep to da deaf!
u cant mess with the best...who cares where ur from, this whores dumb
and u can diss the mondos hoe...
...but 4 of our guys dont rap and we beat u to a forum!
fuck a sore thumb...im destroyin ur shit son...cause u always lose shit
and STUBBY's already washed up...
...he even put his comp in the laundry room to prove it!
_Ralkavelli_
that was a smooth spit...but ur next hoe...i already have u booked bitch
but just look at ur fuckin sig...
...how u gonna beat me?...ur flame still aint cookin shit!
i took ur wits...ur garbage hoe...tryin to be tight, but ur losin the fight
and seriously now ralkavelli...
...even ur fuckin avatar can barely get a shot in the light!
ur just gonna rot on this site...u try and be hip...but even ur cribs dull
and hows ralk steppin to me...
...when he even admits all of of shit is just flipped scribbles!
ill strip ur ribs and skull...im wastin u bitch...winnin, u wont even last dude
but ralk wont even count his loss...
....cause in his check in ralk couldnt even count past two!
ur fast to lose...see now ur screwed as i keep goin and shit on ur views
but whats the point of dissin ralk...
...in the callout thread he said he was the worst in his crew!
*his MSN is skribbleflip@hotmail.com
yall r some wack mothafuckas...thinkin ull win...ha ha...u bitches is dead...and thats word...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
uppin 1 on this shit.......................................
god- your structure and flows were good. your personals and punches were ok, but u got a little weak towards the end......
And it must be admitted that I pretty much came like crap w/ bad wordplay
But in reality, my half-assed verses will win this, more than you can say
....stop talkin about your 'half ass' verses, u repeated that too much, it sounds like their all you've got.
daedal- i think that whole thing was wack. you repeat yourself too much....wack...hoe...whore. i mean, seriously, is that all u got? i think u should go out and by yourself a dictionary.
stubby- this verse was good, it was personal and it hit hard....
He's dissin on my crew, because "God" thinks he's tight
something aignt right
Its polled God & Rascal,but Rascal ducked out in fright
So God went and got Daedal to take his co-leaders place
That right there is a disgrace
He kicked me out of his crew, but its him that I embraced.
...that was like a major slap in the face for him.
ralk- In the name of the father, the son,and the holy fuckin spirits
The almighty God's gettin worked,and merked through my lyrics
So try an battle me, and give it everything you got
Let the smiting commence because I sense you'll need a lot...
...that was tight. it had a good flow, and the personals and punches, i think he's gonna have to go to the E.R, lol. this is some of your better shit, props.
v/ stubby and ralkavelli, good job guys
oooohhhhkaaaaaayyy....wow.. damn..too many lines for a break down so here goes the simple voting:
God- lmao @ that opener.. good shit..props to ya
nice personals in there, matter fact the whole verse had superb personals..you fell off towards the end of your first verse, nice wordplay in the second verse, decent flow, you ryhming was a lil simple, i could guess the last word, but overall well done..
Stubby-opener was blah, (stubby u can do better)..oh my god..second stanza or whatever that was , ....it was blah...seemed like throught ya whole verse u were just trying to ryhme words together instead of actually focusing on dissing The Next Level.
...moving on
Ralk..wow! damn..didnt know u had it in ya....that was something hot right there.. good hard hitting punches, nice flow..nice vocab u got goin there. ......
ANYWAYS.. I'LL DROP HALF MY VOTE NOW AND HALF LATER when the other kid post his shit...
dont ever have another crew battle...this is just too much typing..
-It must be your money cus it aint your face..
Posting Rules
