Round One: Ambitious vs. -Seyance-

[SmokaJoka]

Rules.
^READ & Good Luck...

Check In Due Wed. Midnight Eastern
Verses Due Fri. Midnight Eastern
Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern

[Seyance]

Checkin' In.

10Lines Sound Good?

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Link Two.
Link Three.
Link Four.

[Meks.]

10 is fine
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[Meks.]

Fuck movin weight...... I leave this bitch bussed on a gourney
it feels great to rip some1, who registers just for the tourney!
You the glutton type herb, fists leave u impressed n bloated
yea ur new here......thas why ya fuckin IP address is encoded!
you dont want people to know, who you really bluffin inside,
but either way ya wack........ so theres really nuthin to hide!
I'm up'ta diss guys in disguise ta show u where the bitch lies
Fix eyes? i spit styes..... fuck 10 ........i ripped u in six lines
From my sick mind....... i'll beat urs till all your clevers gone
And I'd say you fell off dawg........but you were never on!

blah. w/ever, fake ass newb.

[Seyance]

Kids played like my band..

Look at your style dawg you always stop and stammer..
you'll get piled on as i dash ambition like proper grammar..
ya drops are ham bruh, get a grip kid coz im steppin ya..
you couldn't see this Win if Niw as written on ya retina..
im wreckin a.. fool to the point, yeah this joints jus cool..
kids a tool cuz like dimmer lights i'll fade your point of view..
my coins is lude, take em coz your feeling cheap n sorta big..
Voters realise the only quotable from you is in your sig...
the gore is sick coz like the family pimp i'll whore ya bitch..
ya boring fild, you couldnt own kids if you bought an orphanage..

self explanitory..

[Seyance]

Uppin'

[Slasherz]

Ambitious

Fuck movin weight...... I leave this bitch bussed on a gourney
it feels great to rip some1, who registers just for the tourney!

This wasn't hitting.

You the glutton type herb, fists leave u impressed n bloated
yea ur new here......thas why ya fuckin IP address is encoded!

wtf lol? So?

you dont want people to know, who you really bluffin inside,
but either way ya wack........ so theres really nuthin to hide!

Saw this bout 100 times..

I'm up'ta diss guys in disguise ta show u where the bitch lies
Fix eyes? i spit styes..... fuck 10 ........i ripped u in six lines

Best line so far but still too basic.

From my sick mind....... i'll beat urs till all your clevers gone
And I'd say you fell off dawg........but you were never on!

Decent punch.

-Seyance-

Look at your style dawg you always stop and stammer..
you'll get piled on as i dash ambition like proper grammar..

Pretty cool, good play.

ya drops are ham bruh, get a grip kid coz im steppin ya..
you couldn't see this Win if Niw as written on ya retina..

Lol.

im wreckin a.. fool to the point, yeah this joints jus cool..
kids a tool cuz like dimmer lights i'll fade your point of view..

Bit played.

my coins is lude, take em coz your feeling cheap n sorta big..
Voters realise the only quotable from you is in your sig...

Lol, nice punch.

the gore is sick coz like the family pimp i'll whore ya bitch..
ya boring fild, you couldnt own kids if you bought an orphanage..

Good finish.

Vote - Seyance took this with ease. 1 of his bars could of probably beat his verse.. Good battle.

[Magnum Opus]

Fuck movin weight...... I leave this bitch bussed on a gourney
it feels great to rip some1, who registers just for the tourney!
^ decent opener,5/10
You the glutton type herb, fists leave u impressed n bloated
yea ur new here......thas why ya fuckin IP address is encoded!
decent personal:/ 6/10
you dont want people to know, who you really bluffin inside,
but either way ya wack........ so theres really nuthin to hide!
wasnt realli feelin this,5/10
I'm up'ta diss guys in disguise ta show u where the bitch lies
Fix eyes? i spit styes..... fuck 10 ........i ripped u in six lines
^felt this was a fillllerrrr..4/10
From my sick mind....... i'll beat urs till all your clevers gone
And I'd say you fell off dawg........but you were never on!
decent punch,6.5/10

Overall = 26.5/50

I felt your punches and personals were weak and werent that hard, and you had some fillers, a verse designed for a newbie in your eyes,and i'd agree..but i still have to read his verse..



Look at your style dawg you always stop and stammer..
you'll get piled on as i dash ambition like proper grammar..
^okay punch,okay opener,5/10
ya drops are ham bruh, get a grip kid coz im steppin ya..
you couldn't see this Win if Niw as written on ya retina..
^played ,5/10
im wreckin a.. fool to the point, yeah this joints jus cool..
kids a tool cuz like dimmer lights i'll fade your point of view..
umm it was an koay punch,5/10
my coins is lude, take em coz your feeling cheap n sorta big..
Voters realise the only quotable from you is in your sig...
okay personal,6/10
the gore is sick coz like the family pimp i'll whore ya bitch..
ya boring fild, you couldnt own kids if you bought an orphanage..
okay punch,6/10

Overall = 27/50

Some of your stuff is played, but you had some okay punches n personals , enough to take this...

I felt Amb underestimated his opponent?


Vote = -Seyance -

Hit up my battle wit Symilee w/ honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136108

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[Escar]

Ambitious shouldn't have underestimated the other dude.

Seyance had better punches.

V/Seyance

[Seyance]

fake ass newb

Sure.. i keyed my verse in 5mins and whats the score?

3-0..uppin'

[Blood Drenched Tampon]

Yea, I think Seyance isn't a newb either, but I sure as hell dont care.

He won.

Better punches & such.

vote-Seyance.

[Karl Merks]

Look at your style dawg you always stop and stammer..
you'll get piled on as i dash ambition like proper grammar..
Lol@Stop and Stammer. Good set-up... but I didn't really like the tail end of it as much. (Though not enough to ruin it completely.)
ya drops are ham bruh, get a grip kid coz im steppin ya..
you couldn't see this Win if Niw as written on ya retina..
Yea, umm... Good creativity, but it lacks a strong punch. I had the same problem in my battle against Eye. You can only use so many of these in a battle.
im wreckin a.. fool to the point, yeah this joints jus cool..
kids a tool cuz like dimmer lights i'll fade your point of view..
So-so on the dopeness meter.
my coins is lude, take em coz your feeling cheap n sorta big..
Voters realise the only quotable from you is in your sig...
Nooooooo.... not a sig punch. (or not in that way, anyway.)
the gore is sick coz like the family pimp i'll whore ya bitch..
ya boring fild, you couldnt own kids if you bought an orphanage..
Omg - That Didn't Fucking Rhyme You KnoW!!! I'm kidding - funny punch.

Fuck movin weight...... I leave this bitch bussed on a gourney
it feels great to rip some1, who registers just for the tourney!
Gourney? Maybe it's a British thing, but I've never heard that word used prior to this. The 2nd half of it, made for a decent opening, but nothing spectacular.
You the glutton type herb, fists leave u impressed n bloated
yea ur new here......thas why ya fuckin IP address is encoded!
I'm not sure what an encoded IP address is. To me, this seems like a "My Harddrive is bigger then yours" type of punch. You just look nerdy, not knowledgable. Oh yea, and Glutton - you have to be British now.
you dont want people to know, who you really bluffin inside,
but either way ya wack........ so theres really nuthin to hide!
I won't bother with this one.
I'm up'ta diss guys in disguise ta show u where the bitch lies
Fix eyes? i spit styes..... fuck 10 ........i ripped u in six lines
'I don't need to use the full amount of required lines' punch got gay after the first time I heard it. Something 8 Mile would use, if the movie was about textee's.
From my sick mind....... i'll beat urs till all your clevers gone
And I'd say you fell off dawg........but you were never on!
Okay ending. Pretty played, but so are most endings.[/

Vote - Sey

[Bin Hide'n]

Vote Sey

I liked his verse more than Ambitous.
the gore is sick coz like the family pimp i'll whore ya bitch..
ya boring fild, you couldnt own kids if you bought an orphanage
that line had me dieing of laughter, both verses were pretty good but
Sey edged the battle and cam up with the wi.

Vote Sey

[Seyance]

5-0 thanks for voting... all

[Cels]

word.. but both of you should be dq'd

neither of you provided 4 links in the check in

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