20 lines
blindspit
30 min max
no recycling
no crew etc
feeble
Ambitious
20 lines
blindspit
30 min max
no recycling
no crew etc
iight.
Feeble one'a the more infamous names on the site,
but 1/2 the time you dont win shits just played wen u write
Your punches arent witty, in fact there just dull...
To be honest with u I dont think u've practiced enough
RnR was ya first love and now Rb's ya next wife..
So tell me....how's it feel being married to ya net life?
This homos not even tru or nice with great lines
& u 'have a ghost writer', is wat i hear thru the site's grapevine
Escape mine?, my fists back u in corners and scrape spines,
Killin in hate crimes, u better call the coronor's late line
A midnight merkin..... and this kids frights workin
This fights urgent, & i'll beat u clean like tide detergent
U never take an L? man thas just myths of mind
U figured a verse would beat u one day, well this the rhyme!
I aint under pressure but i'll beat u in a nick of time,
it's like we rehearsed the battle & i gave u the victims lines
A couple different alias... man fuck it I'll slice ya faces
Askin me for victory....cuz I got it n u'd like ta taste it!
You'll bitch n moan but the disses you propells weak...
when it comes down ta throwin hands u can't even spell beef
ehh. quick key
good luck, peace
amb's on my bandwagon, but i`ll swallow ya shook rep
pretend i jumped off a cliff, cuz he'll follow my footsteps. .
dawg's dreaming of placing first, im living to wreck him
its like he needs time to think, cuz i give him a second
i killed those before you, and the progressions revealed
so now i beat you intern, like ur part of a professional field
don't lie to me, you'll lose really quickly - so try this b
read your verse & crew name. . & DONT think of irony
make u cry at home, you stupid fuck, i fry this gnome
tearing ambitious in little pieces, like he's made of styrofoam
this liar is prone to cheat in battle, but my fire is known
everyones senior shit like you live in a retirement home
kid i stole ya dickriding fan club, would you like it back?
especially when i killed u two lines ago & i think i recycled that
kids are sleeping, with every nod u get i father vets
and your ratings pending, cuz nobodys bothered yet
showing he has guts, ambitious is spilling them out
to win? he'll go at any length, like his lines syllable count
& that smile gets smacked, frown, you wack clown
cuz ambitious is fucking up and coming . . . back down
we're going one more round, nobody vote.
that was dope.^^
i'll half to try this round.
upppn for u 2 drop round 2..........
peace...................
look what my experience passed down, think fast clown
but now i like you. . . even less than i did the last round
ya doomed i knew it, cuz over the boards i loom affluent
1st kid to brush ya shoulders off & need a broom to do it
gaze steadfast, reading my text, cause my flows hold it
ambs a powerhouse. .every room comes with low voltage
im past you.. ya fat dude, with masked fumes i`ll blast you
and this aint a popularity contest.. but i`d win that too
i hate on no showers, you musta thought me a hypocrite
the real reason i took so long to show is i dont give a shit
im lazy as fuck, but i`ll still crush u like a mosh pit will
everyones sick 'n tired of you like late nights at hospitals
ya style sucks, ya punches so horrible theyre factually bad
& ya flow don't need a mood change its just actually sad
i dont even know who you are, and suppose ya fronting
how the fuck'd u accumulate so many posts of nothing
word ur hurt b
u cant verse me
this is merk week
and ur victim.
spit
go .......
You need some support behind, you'll take it in fact
tryna beat amb isnt effort, is more like breakin ya back
ur the naked of rap, i see build up cuz ya fake n ya wack
what'chu makin of that?....ya lyrics are caked wit da crap
walk all over u like cake at'a bash, made a mistake n u crashed
...cuz all the lines u use....... already been played in the past
punches like snakes man......they slide out an rattle you
i wanted competition...so i dont know why i battled you
wackness is a sickness.... and it starts at the attitude...
.........cuz when i look at ya ego i know dat u have it dood
grab the 2.... try'ta make ya way in this shit rap it thru...
This is shit i have to do, cuz u'll win....
....boy, dont u wish that was true!
I remember blastin crews was ya claim ta fame ya dig....??
and accomplishments are nice....but thas the lamest sig!!
You know you wanna bite my lyrics, like u chopped the tutor
.......but ya fightin more temptations then beyonce & cuba
Relax bitch, try to be yaself when you drop that wack shit
the facts kid?, u recycle ya scripts like you was an actress
Your words crumble and fold.... and u try'ta fight the cuffs
...........& those lyrics aint urs so u really do bite the dust
finally. just saw this thread n remembered it.
upp.
Last edited by Meks.; July 8th, 2004 at 05:13 PM
upppn....
* loud snoring sounds *
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I bet noone is voting on this because its as long as the fucking bible...Originally Posted by Ambitious
Here...
Ambitious...No problem picking up on the rhythm of your rhyme..Your opener wasnt as hard as an opener should be...more of a diss than a punch..Same for your next 2 lines...More diss, less punch..The netlife punch was nice, but you see alot of those..Again though, your verse fell into more of a diss for the next 4 lines or so...Rhymed good, but didnt pack a big punch...The detergent line was kinda weak, and after that, once again, your verse fell into a good diss...a GOOD DISS mind you, but not alot of wordplay...Just some creative multis...After that, your first verse trailed off..Your second verse started off again with not much punch, but some nice multiple rhyming and funny put downs...but wheres the wordplay and metaphors?..the punch?...I see you repeating some lines in the second verse, like the "Played" diss is in both verses...the beyonce and cuba line was weak...Overall, both of your verses had mad creative rhymes and some good quick disses, but not many metaphors, wordplay, or punch....
Feeble-Started off with a medium sized punch for the opener...still funny...Followed with no delay with another funny pun about giving him a second...The retirement home line and the following 4 to 6 lines had me rolling...mad funny with creative multis all the way through...Some nice wordplay..funny shit...The opener on your second verse seemed a little forced, but it was still a nice punch...The broom line was nice as hell, but the following low voltage line was kinda lame..The late nights at hospitals shit was creative and a nice play on words...Nice disses after that and overall i think both of your verses were mad funny and creative..
Vote-Feeble...
Do me a favor fellas...Go audio...It'd be alot easier to vote on your shit...
Make sure you peep my battle VS KAZE in audio battles when it drops.., and go hit up wordplays battle with Mr Showtime or any other battle that needs votes..
Thanks..
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Damn feeble.. that closer on the first one was tight as a virgins pussy..
the whole flow was just dopeness..
lmao this was my fav.--> "everyones senior shit like you live in a retirement home"
this was a long battle... am i supposed to vote on all 4 verses.. i'm gettin a headache dammit...
ambitious- wow.. u use the word "shit" alot..
my fav line -->the facts kid?, u recycle ya scripts like you was an actress
overall u got merked ambitious...cus i feel that feeble had harder punches then u did and his thoughts were more clever.
well my vote goes to feeble.. duh
-It must be your money cus it aint your face..
yeah this was a good battle, Ambitious came strong.
But feeble came stronger. At points, Ambitious had some punches that could of beat som,e of feebles punches.But he didnt keep up that level of intensity. He fell with his punches and his personals also. Feeble stayed good throughtout the verse pretty much. Fell off at times but still good. Flow was good from both and structure was also good from both.
V/Feeble
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