Round One: STUBBY vs. iLL Kahn

[SmokaJoka]

Rules.
^READ & Good Luck...

Check In Due Wed. Midnight Eastern
Verses Due Fri. Midnight Eastern
Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern

[Escar]

*Grabs the mic*

*Ahem* check, *ahem* time to rip this cat...

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Meh, I voted on all the battles.

[STUBBY]

alright im checkin in man.........................

[Escar]

Man, you been online for a long time, so spit.

I keyed a quick verse for you, and I'll edit it here when you spit.

Pz

[STUBBY]

im pullin out of this battle man, i wasnt even supposed to be in this shit, i never kept checkin in,

[ILLunatic]

smoka

[Escar]

Stop postin' in here dumbass.

[STUBBY]

looks like im gonna be doin this after all no problem i can face ill kahn its goin to be hard but i will do it, checkin in for real

[Escar]

Word.

So ILLunatic, just shut up, and don't post in here.

It's already clogged up, so please, be quiet.

[Escar]

Aight check it...

Quick key, goin' 12...

Beatin' me's outta this world, it's like science fiction bitch
Here to win? U got merked by every1 on the prediction's list
I'll try 'n' make it clear coz... Rap, in general, u just lack it fool
Runnin' the rap game? Nah, only wraps u do are package foods
Wrote this in 5 minutes, plus I'll just laugh when u post ur verse
And puttin' someone under ya name is the only time u'll be the first (Sig)
Votes by dickriding, damn, in FL you'll have an army soon
Plus you're left out to dry, like the PC in your laundry room (His pic thread)
You're career's ended, basically, you're roasted so rehearse
He's a pussy by blood, he pulled out, 'fore I even posted my verse
My advice is to keep runnin', and when u do, go farther dude
And fuck sonnin', that's already done, now I'll father you! (Sonnin' = son u)

[STUBBY]

So it looks like im battlin kahn, im cool with that
but im tellin u it isnt gonna be

ehem time to rip this cat

I read the predictions, & i got one person that believes in me
I got more fuckin wins than u im the one who grieves emcees
Your winnin your crew battle, only cause your battlin Stryke 9
I already won my crew battle, your lines aignt nothin like mine
Your flow is wack man and so is your crew Pandora's Box
Your punches aignt goin nowhere your like a damn flora rock
Look at the words damn im on line 9 and i got more to say
But i guess i will have to diss you on that shit another day


line 8
Flora- a living organism lacking the power of locomotion,
(so in that line i was sayin he cant diss me cause he is lacks the power to do so)

[Brother Blue Collar]

garbage from you stubby i was looking for better shit from, kahn ya verse was cool, but i know you can do better

Structure: giving this to kahn cuz stubby's internals weren't consisent thru out his verse like kahn's was
Personals:Stubby's disses were garbage dissing him and cru is cool but you gotta came more unique than the diss youw wrote
Kahn's disses were better and on point
Punches:Stubby had none worth mentioning that flora shit was whack and don't explain ya lines, kahn had punches that hit alot harder than stubby's


V/Kahn

[STUBBY]

wait a minute now i always accept the feed that i get but this shit that urban just said was all wrong, i know those are good disses on kahn,

[Elwood]

^ Nah.. there not....

STUBBY came pretty weak.. kahn had decent lines..

v/escar

[STUBBY]

damn this sucks, well at least i tried to go against someone much less someone as good as kahn